Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/04/2009 - 01:32 pm
Title: CH 12
Forrest was jumpy? I hope he didn't betray Buffy. *reads on* Sadly he is. And Buffy has no clue. Doesn't look good now.
Looking forward to more.
BTW this is 12: Chapter 11 (again 11).
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 12/04/2009 - 11:13 am
Title: CH 12
Nice chapter. A lot of business stuff happening in this chapter. The only thing I would complain about is that there isn't enough Spike in this chapter. But there is never enough Spike for me. He is my favorite character ever. So, there is never enough Spike/William for me. As I have said before that a lot of business stuff happening in this chapter. I usually have a lot to say and it feels funny to leave a review so short. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/19/2009 - 04:01 pm
Title: CH 11
Loved the spuffyness. :))
Buffy's plan sounds dangerous and your A/N doesn't make it easier LOL. Something will go wrong? I hope not too bad.
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2009 - 01:29 am
Title: CH 11
Great chapter. Love that Spike and Buffy got to know each other a little more. It was wonderful to read that Buffy is feeling something for Spike as well. It is about time she realizes what a hottie William is. Although, I'm afraid she is going to be like the Buffy from the show. Meaning that she is going to be in denial when it comes to showing her feelings for William. That she is going to be in denial about Spike when it comes to herself, the crew, and William. That she is going to be all avoiding William because Buffy is stubborn that way. I have that feeling that Buffy is going to try to avoid William by reading this chapter. Just like the way Buffy was on the show. LOL I also don't really like Willow in this story. I know she is Buffy's friend and is protective of her. I totally get that. But I do think Willow is hard on William when she doesn't even know him. This is like the third or second time Willow wanted to get after William and she doesn't even know the guy. So, I'm not a fan of Willow in this story. I hope that Spike is making friends or at least a friend in this story. Buffy has Giles, Willow along with the rest of the crew, and now she is trying to get Dawn. She may be alone but at least she has friends and family that care for her. This Spike has nobody. Really just like Spike from the show. That always made me sad for Spike on the show because he really didn't have anybody to support him. Anybody that really cared for him at times. I do agree that pretty much everybody has secrets in their life. I guess Dawn was Buffy's secret from the crew. I wonder if Spike has any. I'm sure that Spike is going to be keeping an eye out for Buffy on this mission to get Buffy's sister. He will probably be protective over Dawn in time as well. That is just how William is. Look forward to reading what happens next.
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2009 - 08:01 pm
Title: CH 10
Great to see a new update to this story. I was wondering if this was of those many Spuffy stories that never gets finished. I felt sad for Spike when the rest of the crew left with their friends and everything. Where Spike was left on his own. I know he likes to have his alone time and I'm sure he used to being alone. But it does make me sad for people who have really no one but themselves. It must be a lot better though for Spike now than his life before. He is no longer treated like property the way he was before. Spike hasn't had a very good life and I hope things change for him now. He is his own man now. Sure he has to listen to someone but the majority of us all has bosses. Spike ran into a surprise though. He is not alone on the ship. Buffy is on board too. I'm happy to see that. It gives them a chance to know each other. Keep each other company. LOL We read a lot about Spike having lusting feelings towards Buffy. I can't wait to read Buffy having lusting feelings for Spike. When is she going to open up her eyes and see what a hot piece of man mean Spike is.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/06/2009 - 01:04 pm
Title: CH 10
Good to see you updating again.
Funny chapter when Spike was distracted by Buffy :)
Reviewer: marta
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2009 - 12:17 am
Title: CH 10
I was wondering about this story. So glad it's back. Lovely chapter. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: schnulli
Anonymous
Date: 11/05/2009 - 04:03 pm
Title: CH 10
Hey your back, great chapter
Reviewer: Brett
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/2009 - 11:37 am
Title: CH 9
Oh my! The plot thickens. I wonder where this Dawn is...
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/09/2009 - 06:58 pm
Title: CH 9
Ah that's why Buffy is hunting Hank's ships.
I wonder if Dawn is really her sister (because Buffy doesn't remember her).
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 06/09/2009 - 03:03 pm
Title: CH 9
I really like your explanation of Hank's deceit and hwo it is delivered to Willow. I always love when Hank gets his comeuppance! And I can just imagine Buffy appearing in a lovely gown at some event with William on her arm, ready to tell hank she's there to claim her property... But that's just my imagining. looking forward to what you came up with!
Great update.
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 05/26/2009 - 09:40 pm
Title: CH 8
Yikes! More, more, please!
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Brett
Anonymous
Date: 05/26/2009 - 05:05 pm
Title: CH 8
Oh Wow. They did it. That had to be a hell of a surprise for the Premiere crew.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/26/2009 - 04:48 pm
Title: CH 8
Neat :) That was a clever trick.
I wonder why Buffy wanted to look like the girl. That's the one she got information about from Riley.
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 05/26/2009 - 03:35 pm
Title: CH 8
Loved the new chapter. I had to laugh at Spike in the dress. It reminds me of seeing JM in a dress in the movie Chance with Amber Benson. LOL Of course the dress is very different than the one JM wore in Chance but still. Those men must be desperate if they find these "women" attractive. Most men just don't make good looking women. Must be because they are men and not women. LOL I trust you that you do love Spike and Buffy together. I hope so since this is a Spuffy site. I don't mind if it takes a little while for them to get together. Just as long as they at least have some moments together. Just as long Spike and Buffy are leads in the story and the rest of the characters are supporting characters. I'm content. I do lose patience if Spike and Buffy don't even have any scenes together for a long time. I'm not sure that the word 'scene' is the right word in talking about a story. But I think you get what I mean. I also don't mind Spike and Buffy getting together right away either. Of course. We keep reading Spike having lusting thoughts about Buffy. Can't wait until we read Buffy having lusting thoughts for Spike. I don't know what is taking her so long. giggles Buffy you were always a bit slow or a bit in denial when it comes to Spike. Somebody needs to slap Buffy and say to her to wake up and see the hotness that is Spike. Spike is so hot with his abs and cheekbones that I just want to eat him all up. Sorry, where was I. I got lost for a moment there. LOL I'm a happy person if Spike and Buffy are the lead characters. if the story focusing on everybody else just as much as Spike and Buffy then I don't care for that. I'm not saying I will stop reading the story. I don't see myself stop reading this story because I really do love this story. But Spike and Buffy is what I love to read. I love other characters too. Don't get me wrong. But I think you understand what I'm saying. Anyways, look forward to the next update. Thanks
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/2009 - 12:37 am
Title: CH 7
I had to reread this chapter again. When I read it the first time I wasn't quite awake. LOL I love this line from Fatih. (“Hey, no one told me throwing her off this floating antique was against the rules. And we were just sparring.”) haha. That was a great line and can easily picture Faith saying that AND doing that. Throwing Buffy off the ship and into the water. I also laughed on how Faith described the ship, 'floating antique' haha. As you can tell I love Faith a lot. No one comes close to my love for Spike. Spike will always be my favorite character. Just everything Spike went through on the show. Spike is just the best character in the Buffyverse. Just my bias opinion. haha But Faith has to be up there as one of my favorites. I still wished that we had more Spike and Faith scenes in the show. Again, thanks for all the updates you posted recently.
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/23/2009 - 03:30 pm
Title: CH 5
Like the story so far but have a hard time believing anybody would actually start daydreaming when they are in a fistfight. Just silly really and if that was the case then he should be left behind cause he'll probably start daydreaming in the middle of a battle or when the ship is sinking or when he's about to get eaten by sharks....I mean the possibilities are endless of how he would fuck up. As I said I like the story but if you are going to go down that road about distraction you should probably study up on how "thrastalking" is done in competitive sports and take it from there.
Reviewer: demona424
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2009 - 11:59 pm
Title: CH 7
I like what you did with Riley's character and his relationship with Buffy. He's not evil or stupid, or a knucklehead, well at least not yet. And well, so far that's really refreshing. I also like how Spike is slowly fitting into the crew yet still an outside observer. It makes him so much more relatable even if it is a pirate story! Parker is annoying but he adds more oommf to the story. If you can't get passionate about the characters, then what's the point about readying. :-)
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2009 - 09:58 pm
Title: CH 7
Well, I hate Parker on the show and I'm not too fond of him in this story. I think Parker is scum who don't know how to respect women. But I never really felt that bad for Buffy on the show. I think if a girl sleeps with a guy right away then she shouldn't expect more than that. Just my opinion is all. I guess I was wrong about Buffy never being with a man. I just figure she was still a virgin. And you made her lover Riley if all people. I hate Riley too. I don't hate him as much as other fans do but I have no love for him either. I sometimes wished that Riley died on the show. Good riddance to him. Sorry. I'm glad that you still have Faith as a flirt even if she is with Woods. That is the Faith that I love. One of my favorite scenes ever in Buffy is where Spike and Faith were talking in the basement. I'm a Spike/Buffy fan. But I do think Spike and Faith would be a very hot couple. I also think they have a lot in common. They were always in the shadow of Buffy and Angel. Spike with Angel and Faith with Buffy. I was always disappointed that we didn't have more Spike and Faith scenes. Poor Spike. He seems to get picked on the time and trying to fit in. I think it is funny that people think Spike may be able to do something because of his size. He is a small guy but that doesn't mean he can't fight or do anything like that. Oz is even smaller than him. Buffy is a petite woman and can fight well. So, just because you are small doesn't mean you can't handle yourself. I would love to see Spike take Buffy in fight in this story. I will take Spike over Buffy in a fight. I always felt that Spike was the better fighter. JMO. Just curious but are we ever going to meet anybody from William's past. I think that would be a nice surprise to meet somebody from William's past. Thanks for the new chapter. Look forward to the next one.
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2009 - 07:12 pm
Title: CH 7
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to what's going to happen during the raid.
Btw, I don't hate Parker, just don't like him very much. But as you said in the story, he has skill of persuasion that should come in handy.
Have a good weekend!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/21/2009 - 11:59 am
Title: CH 7
So Riley Finn brings news. And no good ones. Weird that somebody who never saw Buffy can recognize her. More magic or the person does know her.
The other information Buffy got - where they about a person? (Maybe a sister? Or a child?)
Oh and I wonder if Spike will still need his glasses.
Have a great weekend yourself :)
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2009 - 01:31 am
Title: CH 6
And in comes Finn. Well, this should be interesting. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: LoL. New chap is up and ready. TY again for taking the time to comment. :D
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2009 - 01:18 am
Title: CH 5
I never did like Parker. But then I get the feeling that you don't either. You've written him well.
Author's Response: TY hun. He's kind of fun to write. :D
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2009 - 09:35 pm
Title: CH 6
I liked the Spike and Buffy interaction. I didn't really like that he lost to stupid Parker. I hipe that Buffy is not intimately involved with Riley that would really activate my gag reflex. Great story though.
Author's Response: I couldn't deal with any Riley lovin either. It's just ishy.
Reviewer: marta
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2009 - 07:00 pm
Title: CH 6
This story continues to impress. I like the relationships among the characters, in particular, how Spike interacts with the others. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Ty so much. I've just posted the last chapter for this week. :D
