Reviewer: BlueEyes
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2009 - 02:01 am
Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost
I came across your story and I have become very engrossed in it only to come to the end and worry that I won't find out what will happen next down the line the end. Please continue your story.
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed
Date: 03/04/2008 - 03:33 pm
Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost
Poor little Will/Spike. More soon please.
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 02/15/2008 - 06:29 pm
Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost
so pleased to find another chapter, just when I thought the story was abandoned which would be a great shame not to finish this really fine story
Reviewer: Dominion
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/2007 - 08:05 pm
Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost
Wow. This is really an amazing story you've written here. And the fact that Angel features prominently in it and I'm still reading is saying a lot. You’ve created this whole world that just makes sense and I can't wait to see where you take us. I'm so glad that Buffy was there for William to take away his pain and I'm glad Xander ended up doing the right thing. You've made Angel be his usual bull headed self and most times I hate him but I feel for him in this. You've managed to make me feel for all the characters OC and all. Thanks for taking the time to post this. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 02:51 am
Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost
Wonderful reading this, and now that I'm caught up and fully hooked, I will be waiting for updates with the highest anticipation.
I am so glad to have read this story. It is truly fine storytelling at work.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 02:36 am
Title: Chapter 26 - Homecoming
I didn't think that they'd just be able to pick up where they left off. Sweet little guy.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 02:28 am
Title: Interlude 25/26 - Let the Joyous News be Spread
Well, reading won out... and I'll probably finish tonight.
This story is positively addictive!
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 02:24 am
Title: Chapter 25 - The Cavalry Arrives
This is a remarkable story. I want to continue reading tonight, but I also feel like I should leave things where they are until morning.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 24 -The Shit Hits the Fan
whew! Okay... must read more.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:31 am
Title: Chapter 23 - Crisis of Conscience
Oh, Xander.... Amazing!
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:20 am
Title: Chapter 22 -Down in the Valley
Oh, hurry hurry!
On to the next.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:11 am
Title: Interlude 21/22 - Secret Garden
Ah, Willow! Here's hoping she can help...
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:00 am
Title: Chapter 21 - Murder and Mayhem
*weep*
I need a hug.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 20 - In Loco Parentis
Oh, no... who's in the chair?
*eeeek*
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 12:38 am
Title: Interlude 19/20B - Invitation to the Dance
I am so nervous for Giles and Lydia right now.
I'm also curious as to their full plan, and I hope that it works.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 19 - Restless Echoes
Apt title, as I was lagging to notice. The part in which Buffy says that they both belong to the light rings sweetly true.
Buffy wil always haunt him.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 11:19 pm
Title: Interlude 18/19C - Deliver Me From Evil
Dawn and Dru.....
Am terribly nervous for Dawn. But Dru's insane enough to do something about William.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 11:06 pm
Title: Interlude 18/19B - Shades
Okay, now Angel is just losing it. Or perhaps getting it.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 10:13 pm
Title: Interlude 18/19 - Girl Talk
I keep weeping along with them.
Nina has got to be going through hell right now.
Alonna is such a cutie!
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 09:52 pm
Title: Chapter 18 - Change of Pace
The audacity of these Watchers! They use anyone to further their cause, no matter what the cost.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 03:44 am
Title: Interlude 17/18B - Missing Links
Eeek!!!
What a shocker.
And so excellent, the conversation between Xander and Dawn. His last line was chilling.
Shedding tears for poor Connor. Bless him.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 03:30 am
Title: Interlude 17/18 - Ghost in the Machinery
How intricately woven this tale is...
To have the truth spoke to Roger by Wesley is a twist of brilliance.
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2007 - 03:16 am
Title: Chapter 17 -William and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day
So hoping that Nate Chalmers can be trusted in this. I really like the use of that line, 'Can I rest now?' at the end. There are echoes of Spike in Will, but he truly is an innocent, bless his soul.
On to more...
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2007 - 11:30 pm
Title: Interlude 16/17D - Eyes Wide Shut
I'm wondering how Giles will - if ever - recover, and what happened to him in the first place to land him in such a state.
Am addicted to this story... on to the next!
Reviewer: CelesteAvonne
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2007 - 11:18 pm
Title: Interlude 16/17C - Bound By Love
whole litter of puppies!!!
Go Buffy, you tell him.