Reviewer: 20150509yuanyuan
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2015 - 10:47 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/04/2013 - 12:24 am
Title: Epilogue
Great story.. really enjoyed it! Well written, just a few grammar errors, easy to correct. Great job!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/03/2013 - 04:36 pm
Title: Chapter 16
I understand Cecily would find out, but I find it unbelievable that Willow would go to her and rat out Buffy. An enemy of Buffy's (Cordelia or Harmony, perhaps?) would have made much more sense. There are some grammar errors, too.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/03/2013 - 02:35 pm
Title: Chapter 12
I'm loving this story, but a few tiny little errors are bugging me. 1st, in chapter one, the word "morgue" is misspelled as "mourge." And then, in that chapter and many of the following ones, including this one, the word "too" (as in "excessive," like too much, too long, too hard, too bad, etc.) is misspelled as "to" (which should be used like, to run, to the store, to be, etc.).
Just wanted to let you know... I do love the story, and those have just jarred me a bit as I was reading.
Reviewer: Shay Signed
Date: 12/01/2011 - 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 4
I am liking this so far. I hope Buffy doesn't do anything stupid later like...sleep with Angel first.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 11/14/2010 - 05:44 pm
Title: Epilogue
great story
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2008 - 07:58 am
Title: Epilogue
Awww so cute. I love epilouges like this! Super mega happy ending :D
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2008 - 07:31 am
Title: Chapter 19
Yay! I liked this chapter! I could see why it would have been difficult to write!
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2008 - 07:06 am
Title: Chapter 16
Your the writer keeping your idea running. Don't let anyone change your story because they may not like it. Follow what your brain is telling you to write! If it counts for anything I like the complication. You have made it upsetting yet have left some kind of cliffhanger that seems to say "this is not over. That bitch is gonna get it" lol.
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2008 - 06:35 am
Title: Chapter 11
I like the story! Forget those desperate losers who can't stand angst (just the smut to get them through the day ;) lol). I think you write very well, but you just need to look at grammar to improve your writing. It's not just errors I'm talking about, but if you read truly good writing, clever and correctly placed grammar sets a different mood and makes your writing unique. Well Done! Keep it up!
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2008 - 05:29 am
Title: Chapter 6
No protection? I wonder whats going to happen...
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2008 - 06:20 pm
Title: Epilogue
That was a lovely ending to a wonderful story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end and I'm quite interested in finding out what else you're going to gift us with in another story. Nicely done! Mari
Author's Response: I'm SO glad you enjoyed it. I don't know when I"ll be able to start posting the next story, I was hoping it would be sooner, but with the husband coming home, things are looking like it's going to take much longer. Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2008 - 06:09 pm
Title: Chapter 23
Loved the proposal, loved that you used some lines of Something Blue there, it was a nice touch. And of course, loved that Cecily and her dad ended up in jail. *wide evil grin* Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2008 - 06:07 pm
Title: Chapter 22
Lovely (and very hot) way of getting them back together. I'm really enjoying this story so very much. Fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2008 - 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Awwww, I'm glad things are getting better between them. And I love that Willow got slapped. ;) Well done!
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2008 - 05:48 pm
Title: Chapter 19
I started reading this story today and I can tell you I'm enjoying it very much. I love to read well-written angst and your love scenes are very hot. I love the angle you're taking with the story, it's quite original to others I've read, as well. Off to read more, since I still have a few chapters to go. ;)
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 - 04:25 pm
Title: Chapter 7
I'll read more later! :)
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 - 04:13 pm
Title: Chapter 6
Sweet and hot at the same time :)
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 - 12:48 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Her plan didn't work, well a part of it did ;)
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 - 12:34 pm
Title: Chapter 4
That was so hot! Is it warm in here or not? :-p Well done, sweetie! ;)
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 - 12:13 pm
Title: Chapter 3
I liked the flashbacks! :)
Reviewer: steph
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2008 - 04:16 pm
Title: Epilogue
i have been reading this fic on sweet-tempatation spuffy site. And i have loved this fic since the beginning. It is amazing. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you like it, I enjoyed writing it!
Reviewer: Minna Signed
Date: 01/12/2008 - 02:40 am
Title: Epilogue
Really don't want this story ending but it's a ending I love! It's amazing, there were so much that could have made them give up so many times and still they somehow found each other. Love the way you wrote it all, you know.. if you would write an other story *smiling innocently* I would love to read it.. :P
Great work with the story and good luck with all the other fic/fics you'll maybe upload. ;)
Love,Minna
Author's Response: I'm still a little emotional from ending my first fic, it's a big milestone for me. To me these characters belong together, no matter the setting they're placed in, so it was no wonder I placed them together in my story. And I'm hoping to have another story up in a few weeks. Thanks so much for your support!
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed
Date: 01/12/2008 - 01:27 am
Title: Epilogue
I'm so sad it's over! *blinks back tears* Thanks for that ;ast bit of smut! It absolutely was a great fic, so don't doubt your talent. It sucked me in and still hasn't let go. I'm sure I'll be reading another great story from you soon!
Author's Response: I know, I'm a little emotional too, the end of my first fic! Thank you so much for the support, readers like you are why I write!
Author's Response: I know, I'm a little emotional too, the end of my first fic! Thank you so much for the support, readers like you are why I write!
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed
Date: 01/12/2008 - 01:14 am
Title: Chapter 23
Thank you, thank you, thank you! That was so much better than Cecily dropping dead because now she has nothing and is completely humiliated! Nice proposal, should have expected that from you!
Author's Response: I wanted her to be stripped of all of her worldly pleasures and sent where she would be totally humiliated! Prison worked! Thank you so much sweety glad you loved it!
