Reviewer: Cassie
Anonymous
Date: 01/26/2008 - 04:13 am
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
So is this story finished at all?? I mean I see it on adultfanfiction.net and it's got 13 chapters and on here it's got 15 so what's the what is it somewhere else done and all endy and stuff??? I'm just wondering because I really like it and would like to finish it. Write me back and let me know.
Author's Response: I plan on finishing it. I've been working on a new chapter, but I can't say when a new chapter will be posted.
Reviewer: unknown author
Anonymous
Date: 11/05/2006 - 07:24 pm
Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine
this is a great story, that one twist with ril was perfect just what the chapter needed
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the chappie, and yes I will be updating the story,lol. I just need to kick th emuse to finish writing it. I have half of the next update typed already,
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 04/26/2006 - 06:46 pm
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
Great chapter! Really love this fic!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Renee'
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/2006 - 11:33 pm
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
So, I read this entire story, up to this point, today. Additionally, I received info on how to give feedback to authors (which is something I try to do but makes me rather nervous), today. So, please know that I am trying to be constructive with my feedback and that you are, in essence, getting all the feedback from the previous chapters up to now- hence the length.
1) I like the story. I think it's rather entertaining and, while not unique, it is a different story.
2)I like that your Buffy is different from Joss's, but that she still has that 'Buffy' edge of Joss's. Same thing about Spike. Also, having Angel as Buffy's brother is something that i rarely see and I like the way you've written that.
3) I think you should look into getting a Beta, though. As someone who had an English teacher that was a right bastard, some of the editing mistakes (such as too/to, hear/here and comma usage) makes this good story a little hard to read in spots. These small things interrupt the flow of a good story, and I think a Beta would really be able to help you out.
4) I like the way Dawn and Spike are brother and sister. It's funny, though, that Buffy and Dawn get along- for some reason, I always just picture Dawn pissy at Buffy, so to see this in the story is really cool, but makes me laugh in my head.
5) Don't worry about the time it takes to update. i know that a lot of the readers would rather have an author take a little longer to get an update out and still have it quality rather than have a reader crank out bad writing everyday. If it takes a week because Real Life is being a pain in the ass, your readers will stay loyal and will come back. You might get a few grumblers, but you can't please everybody- just don't let them get you down.
I hope that was good feedback, and I hope it wasn't harsh!
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long for me to reply, I had a personal lost and had to deal with it. ^_^
Nope, one should never ber nervous when giving feedback, cause hey, even though the author took the time to write if he/she had messed up, needs work, etc, the readers are who helps, right?
1) Not unique *gasps* no just kidding. I started this fic way back last summer I think, or maybe it was spring, I really can't recall. But it was a story I was doing with my video game the sims, and decided it would make a cute Spuffy fic, so that's how I based it. *did that make sense?*
2) Thanks, thanks, and thanks again.
3) Finally got a beta. Like I said I, or maybe I didn't lol. This was my first fic ever written and I had no idea about betas etc. But I know I put in my authors notes on this chappie, than I'm trying to get the whole thing beta'ed, so I can repost the update version here and on my web site. I know it will take some time, I just hope everyone can wait for it! ^_^
4) That's good,lol. I really did start out with Dawn not liking Buffy, but when I started to type it they decided they wanted to be friends.
5) Yeah, I'm with you on that. My new fic I'm working on. Really taking my time, working with my lovely beta, making sure everthing is readable and lovely, err, well, I hope so,lol.
This was way better than just good feedback, with was aswesome feedback!!! Nope, not to harsh1 ^_^
Reviewer: DaniD
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/2006 - 08:32 am
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
You did a really great job describing the dresses and tuxes..Got a great visual which is so important when reading a story! Can't wait to see what happens next at the prom : D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Opal
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/2006 - 08:02 am
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
I shower you with praise!!! :) Great update.
Author's Response: :P Thanks, Opal.
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/2006 - 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 4: Say What?
Nice that Dawn is Spikes sister in this story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it would be a good idea.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 04/19/2006 - 11:26 pm
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
absolutely perfect
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
Reviewer: ChrissNicole
Anonymous
Date: 04/19/2006 - 08:13 pm
Title: Chapter 15: Pretty in Pink (Sortta)
I love it. Update again soon
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan too.
Reviewer: brianna
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/2006 - 03:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Day
UPDATE!! NOW!!! PLEASE!!! 2 months 2 long =( PLEASE
Author's Response: OMG, seriously, it's been that long. Dang, my muse really has taken a long vacation on Little Sister. I am working on the update now. I have my word program open, and chapter 15 on the screen. So I'm trying. ^_^
Reviewer: aoife
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/2006 - 04:41 am
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
luv dis fic! plz plz update its been lik a month!!!
Author's Response: I know, I'm working on the update, just have to finish it up. I hope to be updating soon. Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Shel
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2006 - 04:21 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
wow..normally i try to only rad completed fics so i never have to wait for more spuffyness.. but when i came across this story i decided to read it..and im glad i did. cant wait for another update..hoping you'll go into some detail about prom?? keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the wonderful review. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. I'm currently working on chapter 15, which is the begining of prom night. If my muse keeps with me look for an update sometime this week.
Reviewer: Alexx
Anonymous
Date: 02/20/2006 - 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
Oh for the love of god woman. MORE, write more. Hurry, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee hurry....
Author's Response: Well since you put it that way .... I better get crackin. Don't worry working on an update now!
Reviewer: Saya
Anonymous
Date: 02/14/2006 - 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
Love your story so much....please update soon....and gotta love Spike in this chapter=)
Author's Response: I'm very happy you'er enjoying my fic!
Reviewer: Gotkona
Anonymous
Date: 02/14/2006 - 08:16 am
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
Glad you are back and so is this story. More please
Author's Response: Thanks, its great to be back, and writing spuffy again!
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:58 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
good update
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: CHRISSNICOLE
Anonymous
Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
LOVE IT
Author's Response: Thank you! *happydance*
Reviewer: Opal
Anonymous
Date: 02/13/2006 - 09:08 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
Great update!!!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, thanks Opal.
Reviewer: DaniD
Anonymous
Date: 02/13/2006 - 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
Oh..I'm really glad that Joyce is all for a Buffy/Spike relationship..That will help things along. : D
Of course Buffy is going to have some issues after what happened to her. I hope that Spike is patient and can help her through it all. Yeah Joyce..tear Riley a new one : )
Thanks for the update~!
Author's Response: You're welcome. I hope even with Joyce on their side who knows how Angel will react.
Reviewer: Laura
Anonymous
Date: 02/13/2006 - 08:28 pm
Title: Chapter 14:Feelings
Loved it....thats what i think!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: G9
Anonymous
Date: 02/11/2006 - 04:45 pm
Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine
Its 50 cent not 50 cents which is gramatically incorrect but thats how he spells it.
Author's Response: Ahhh, I would never have caught that. Thanks for the info, I'll have to fix that. ^_^
Reviewer: Laura
Anonymous
Date: 02/08/2006 - 08:15 am
Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine
I just read everything so far and loved it!! Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on the new chapter now.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 02/06/2006 - 02:18 am
Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine
good update
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: chrissnicole
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/2006 - 12:45 am
Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine
glad to see you back. update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, it's great to be back as well. *smile*
Reviewer: DaniD
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/2006 - 12:05 am
Title: Chapter 13: Ain't No Sunshine
Glad to see an update! So glad that Riley got his ass kicked..!
Thank you for the update...don't be a stranger! : D
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, I know Riely sucks! You'er very welcome. I wouldn't have been gone so long but you know RL sometimes it wants attention,lol. More coming soon * I hope *
