Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 07:49 pm
Title: Taking Charge
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Reviewer: ScoobyDawn
Anonymous
Date: 01/29/2013 - 05:44 am
Title: I come in peace
I love the Spike-Dawn dynamic you have written here. It feels like a mature version of what we saw in the show yet you have kept it completely true to the characters as you are writing them. It worked brilliantly and is the best I have seen them written against each other outside of verse context.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/13/2012 - 12:25 pm
Title: Wish you were here...
This was a fun read, a good adventure. Spike is lovely, and his dialogue absolutely sounds like him. I like that Buffy is still physically tough (as in the Riley episode), and that impresses at least one man (even if it is the evil Angel).
Some typos and other grammar/word issues a good beta could fix.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/12/2012 - 07:54 pm
Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Just a nitpick: irish cream & coffee is NOT irish coffee. Irish coffee is coffee with irish whisky, sugar and whipped cream...
Reviewer: agrlcandream Signed
Date: 10/15/2011 - 08:21 pm
Title: Wish you were here...
Great story Isabel. I just read the whole story in one sitting. I'm totally swooning over your spike right now. Keep up the GREAT work. Looking forward to more from you. =)
Reviewer: treadingthedark
Anonymous
Date: 09/12/2010 - 03:04 am
Title: Wish you were here...
Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/10/2010 - 01:37 am
Title: Wish you were here...
hoooray!!!!! i'm so happy for them :) this was an amazing story. i loved ur writing style i thought it was fabulous and your attention to details was amazing. i like how u built the characters and their relationships with each other. my only comment is what ever happened to Gunn? and how did he end up in prison in the first place? but that didn't deter me from absolutely loving the story to bits :) great job. i truly loved this wonderful masterpiece, be proud
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/10/2010 - 12:16 am
Title: Hot water
awww yayness. yay engagements. it's so exciting. wish there was babies involved but still sooo exciting. and i can't believe she's not firing Harmony. im' w/ faith. buffy's nuts!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 11:58 pm
Title: Homecoming
no way! revenge on buffy? but if spike's out does he get it? oh i don't know. shoot. i hope harmony doesn't do anything stupid.. well it is harmony. buffy's screwed. in more ways than one :-P hehe
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 11:40 pm
Title: Rollercoaster
yay :) i'm so happy for them i could bust!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 11:33 pm
Title: Set me free
YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 11:22 pm
Title: Bad man
OMG!!!! u can't kill willow! u just can't. buffy will never forgive herself. oh god!!! this was a great revelation chapter tho :)
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 09:48 pm
Title: In the name of love, or justice?
omg i love it! the last comments by spike and giles are too funny. im' just imagining giles paling at the sight of the phone for fear of calling buffy and feeling her wrath lol. great chapter :)
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 09:32 pm
Title: White lies and consequences
oh god this is awful. i feel like my heart is breaking :(
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 09:13 pm
Title: Tough love
omg this is awful. u'r killing me here!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 08:58 pm
Title: Don't kill the messenger
oh wow this is gonna be so hard for both of them. poor spike finding out that way and now just lying their worrying. and poor buffy. this is just awful. but i love giles and he'll help them both. i just know it :)
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 08:44 pm
Title: Bad day to be a friend
love it. i really do love faith. this was a fabulous chapter. surprised she doesn't know who gunn is. hopefully she'll bring him to talk to spike :)
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 08:26 pm
Title: Tough girls cry too
oh poor buffy. this is so awful. and now she has to tell him two things it's gonna crush him. the story of how spike got hurt was interesting tho. wasn't expecting that. and jake is a douche bag. i hope dawn is home to be w/ buffy. ps. i really like faith, i was just thinking we haven't seen her in a while
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 08:06 pm
Title: When it rains, it pours
oh no! the baby!!! she's gonna have a miscarriage isn't she? oh no :( poor buffy. and now she has to tell spike two things :( that's awful.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 07:50 pm
Title: Blissful oblivion
YAY BUFFY!!! here she comes to save the day!! hehe yeah willow gotta watch those drinks lady. especially on shady lane. altho that whole thing did probably help buff a lot and will get their confidence that much sooner in getting the dirt.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 07:34 pm
Title: White trash just wanna have fun
damn it buffy! an hour! u left willow alone for an hour. seriously i hope she's still in one piece!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 07:22 pm
Title: Quality time with good friends
ya i love the enthusiasm now. hope it cares over into later. also is it monday yet cause i wanna see what happens when buffy tells spike hehe :)
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 06:57 pm
Title: Sugary treats, and sour threats
that was intense. but i'm with dawn, she's right. she has to tell spike. he deserves to know and she's stalling too much. especially now that he knows there's something she has to tell him. also the convo w/ dawn was great. i love the sisterly comments
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 06:13 pm
Title: Testing friendship's limits
seriously? buffy, u didn't lock the doors. AGAIN! she really is blond some times. and im' glad she talked to gunn and i liked the talk they had. im' also glad that she is gonna tell him but she's right they need time to talk and right now they don't have it.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 06:05 pm
Title: Destroying prison property
OMG u've got to be kidding me! i knew something was gonna happen. i mean who wasn't gonna notice them missing for so long? omg please don't kill him! omg
