Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 02/11/2014 - 12:30 pm
Title: Forever and always.
Sweet story. Lots of errors, though, especially these last few chapters; could use a good beta.
I really like this Spike, such a good guy.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 02/11/2014 - 04:22 am
Title: Misunderstood Part 1.
You've twice now used the word "distort" when I think you've really meant "distraught."
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 02/11/2014 - 04:15 am
Title: Coming home.
Good start. Lots of spelling, grammar, and word-use errors, though. Could use a strict editing to make for a better read.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/2010 - 04:33 am
Title: Coming home.
um just curious...what banner? nothing pops up for me
Reviewer: The Lady Meow
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/2010 - 11:45 am
Title: Coming home.
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Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2010 - 01:36 pm
Title: Forever and always.
Yay, a very happy ending! Thanks for sharing. :)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/16/2010 - 07:47 pm
Title: Forever and always.
Loved it! Sorry to see it end!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/15/2010 - 12:49 pm
Title: Forever and always.
Awe, they are all at a good place now.
Enjoyed the read; good place to end the story now.
Reviewer: Amaya
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/2010 - 05:44 am
Title: Forever and always.
Hello. I liked this fic very much. Now PLEASE try to finish the other stories that you have, like Tricky Propositions. Thanks.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2009 - 05:40 pm
Title: Happy Birthday Buffy.
Awesome fic! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/11/2009 - 06:35 pm
Title: Happy Birthday Buffy.
Good to see an update today :)
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 12/10/2009 - 04:11 pm
Title: Coming home.
Oh yes definitely better with regards to the errors/typos. I am really loving this story, and can see Spuffy falling in love and I'm falling right along with them. Keep up the great work, you've got skills and they only look to be getting better.
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 12/10/2009 - 03:59 pm
Title: Coming home.
This is a very interesting start, there were quite a few typos, errors with the tenses and grammar but that could easily be addressed with proofreading or sending it to a couple of beta readers. Still it is an interesting beginning, it definitely did what I think all first chapters should do, which is capture the audience, pull them into the story, and hopefully make them want to read more. I shall read more but again I suggest you send it to a couple of betas, I say a couple because one can always catch what the other may have missed. Good luck.
Reviewer: Yikes!!
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/2009 - 08:45 am
Title: Happy Birthday Buffy.
holy crap, you need a NEW beta. There are run on sentences everywhere, as well as missing words and grammatical errors.
Reviewer: Amaya
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/2009 - 05:07 am
Title: Happy Birthday Buffy.
Hello. It was a long time ago that you updated. Please try to do it more often, because I would like to read the end soon.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/05/2009 - 06:18 pm
Title: Live For Me.
Even if I hoped you wouldn't kill off Spike I'm glad to see he woke up now. :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/16/2009 - 05:33 pm
Title: Keeping Promises.
What a twist, having Parker to break out. I'm not mad that he is gone now.
I just hope Spike is okay.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/08/2009 - 09:36 am
Title: Harmony.
After Spike's realization how much in love he is with Buffy this was quite a turn of events. Last chapter a love declaration everybody heart and now this? Buffy is too hurt to see that things don't fit here.
Poor Buffy... Spike didn't say much.
Author's Response: Spike is really taken by surprise so no he doesn't say a lot, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 02/08/2009 - 01:37 am
Title: Harmony.
i found this chapter a bit out of place after the last one, you have spike thinking he's in love with her and singing that song to her, then you have her catch harmony all over him, it just seemed out of nowhere for me. harmony's a slut basically, so i do believe that she just jumped him, but at this rate, i find it hard for buffy to ever really trust him and i can't say that i blame her, she doesn't seem to be getting much of a break.
Author's Response: I know it seems a bit strange but you are right Harmony is a slut so..... i want this to be a bit of a struggle for Buffy the try and trust another man but fear not all will be explained in the next chapter.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/31/2009 - 07:16 am
Title: Ever the same.
What a confession; doing it in a song that everybody could hear left no doubt about his intentions. Spike is ready to catch her when she falls. If Buffy is ready for it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review.
Reviewer: Laura
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2009 - 02:31 am
Title: Friendly conversation.
Hey this is really really good.... im so excited to read whats going to happen next. when do you think your going to post the next chapter?
Author's Response: I'm glad your liking it so far the next chapter should be up within a week from now, my Beta is going over it at the moment.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 12/10/2008 - 08:21 pm
Title: Friendly conversation.
Author's Response: ok!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/11/2008 - 02:04 pm
Title: Friendly conversation.
Spike didn't react to Buffy's call for a month and expected her to sink in his arms when he met her again? Soooo wrong, Spike.
He didn't like the 'brush off' so maybe he will call back now?
TNX for the updates :)
Author's Response: Your welcome, glad you are enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/11/2008 - 01:57 pm
Title: The beauty in breaking down part 2
And there I thought ditching Harmony and going to drink a coffee would get Spike some points ;)
Buffy is still very stubborn not to talk. And soooooooo not jealous ;)
Author's Response: Yeah right not jealous at all lol, thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/11/2008 - 01:55 pm
Title: The beauty in breaking down Part 1.
Good news regarding the demo tape for Buffy; it was good to see Buffy so happy for a moment till the memories with Parker came back. *shudders* Poor Buffy.
It didn't help too that Spike told her he had a date (and she saw him with Harmony). But at last he was honest.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
