Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 07:42 pm
Title: Part One
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 01/22/2013 - 08:27 pm
Title: Part Five
Love this. Love the taboo (though in real life this situation would squick me, I love the fantasy). Glad you didn't take it to it's probably quite angsty logical conclusion. Though I suppose Liam could die at some point (through no dastardly method), and Buffy and Spike might be able to somewhat respectably get together officially sometime after he's done with college....
Reviewer: laurdania
Anonymous
Date: 10/26/2009 - 12:13 am
Title: Part Five
ooh! taboo smuttyness! me likes! thanks :))
Reviewer: spikeluv84
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/2009 - 09:19 am
Title: Part Five
awww c'mon! u HAVE to do a sequel!!! that was freakin' awesome!!! i was hoping that u'd have Angel cheating but damn....sequel!!
Monica
Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed
Date: 01/11/2009 - 10:37 pm
Title: Part Five
I really, really enjoyed this fic, although I do wish it had been longer. There should be a sequel :)
Reviewer: Em
Anonymous
Date: 10/27/2008 - 12:43 am
Title: Part Five
Oh, how little he really knows.
Love. It. Well done.
Reviewer: Elodie
Anonymous
Date: 10/01/2008 - 11:21 pm
Title: Part Five
lol, I liked this quite a bit, usually it's step sibling fics, today not so much. Well written, was wanting to read the fall out or their happy ever after, but oh well.
off to go read more by you/
Elodie~
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 12:22 pm
Title: Part Five
I enjoyed the tension of Liam's sudden appearance and Spike's warring anger and insecurity. This ending was erotic, but also a little melancholy. Liam's not a bad guy, and this affair is going to continue right under his nose. He's already suspicious, so I can't see this ending well for anyone. Oh, well, this was an emotional, erotic read and i found it very entertaining.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 12:04 pm
Title: Part Four
This is erotic as hell, but very sweet, too. Spike's every fantasy is being fulfilled. I don't see him giving this woman up easily.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 11:51 am
Title: Part Three
Spike has certainly put his porn watching to good use. He's a natural. His lack of experience isn't showing, but his adolescent inner monologue is charming.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 11:38 am
Title: Part Two
This is white hot. You've built unbelievable tension. Spike's embarrassment at the first impromptu kiss believably led Buffy to take charge and give in. Spike being a virgin adds another level of eroticism to the pairing.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 11:27 am
Title: Part One
You've captured the simmering attraction and aching longing these two are harboring. Spike's adolescent fantasies are being fueled by Buffy's beauty, but he's also picked up that the feelings are mutual. The only stumbling block is their self control. I'm off to see how you get them over the dirtybadwrongness of giving in.
This gave me a giggle: "Or some other sort of token protest. He usually skips over this part, because even in his wildest fantasies he really can’t figure out how he could ever seduce a woman like Buffy."
Reviewer: guest
Anonymous
Date: 09/28/2008 - 12:18 pm
Title: Part Five
Disappointed that this story already is done. But quite happy that you wrote it. Like I said, I am always happy to see a younger Spike and older Buffy story. My kink. I like how you ended it but at the same time I just wanted Buffy and Spike to run away together. But I guess she has to wait until he is of age. I just would never be able to pull off sleeping with my husband and then sleeping with his son right under his nose. Which is what Buffy is going to do with Spike. Anyways, hope to read more from you. cough, cough, sequel,cough. But really I hope to read more from you.
Reviewer: Talia Signed
Date: 09/27/2008 - 08:03 pm
Title: Part Five
Oh, come on, this could easily have a sequel. Deny Thy Father, pshhh, what you're really doing is denying us good kinky!Spuffy, and everyone loves kink. This was so good. You should really consider writing a sequel, I want to know what happens. : (
Great job, though.
Reviewer: Pet
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2008 - 12:26 pm
Title: Part Five
Nooo! I don't want the story to end! But I really loved it. :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/27/2008 - 08:55 am
Title: Part Five
Mmmm conflict. Liam as back. So what to do now....
~ Read it all now. So it just ends... to what? Buffy sleeping with both of them?
I enjoyed the read a lot till here but the end is way too open for my liking.
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2008 - 07:30 am
Title: Part Five
Not the end. They're playing with fire and with Liam being suspicious already...... I know in my little world Buffy will leave Liam for Spike and they will live happily ever after. Spike wouldn't make the ultimate sacrifice for love and kill himself would he. That's not what you were suggesting - was it? Really great story and I enjoyed reading enormously. Thank you.
Reviewer: jen
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2008 - 04:05 am
Title: Part Five
Good fic
Reviewer: spikes_slayer08
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2008 - 02:40 am
Title: Part Five
OMG! I just realized that you have ended this fic.... NNNNOOO!!!!!!! Please tell me your joking... i really hope you re-consider and continue with it!
Reviewer: spikes_slayer08
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2008 - 02:38 am
Title: Part Five
WOW! Awesome new update love it!
Reviewer: Shadowsbabe
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2008 - 12:30 am
Title: Part Five
I love this story. I think it may be one of your very best.
I know I'm going to be in the minority but I'm so glad you stopped it here. I like the bit of hope you left for Spike. If you continue this story it's going to get messy and sad very quickly and poor Spike will learn some hard lessons about love and heartache.
I know we should feel somewhat sorry for Liam but let's face it that's not going to happen on this site. And if Liam already has suspicions, this affair isn't going to last much longer.
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/2008 - 09:50 pm
Title: Part Five
WAT!!! I THOUGH U WERE JOKING!! i looked at the status of this fic and it was incomplete and now its complete, so sorry about the other review. i CANT believe its over, i hope that u continue with it but if not i cant wait to read more of your work. THANX
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/2008 - 09:48 pm
Title: Part Five
YAY, I LOVE THAT SHES STILL GOING TO BE WITH HIM!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i like that u actually made liam suspect wat is going on between them and i hope that they break up so that her and spike can end up together and happy. also i hope that everything works out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read wat happens next between them. THANX
Reviewer: Jenn
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/2008 - 09:40 pm
Title: Part Five
awww it can't be over all ready i'm not ready yet theres so much more you could of written there should be a sequel or something it can't end like this yet.
Reviewer: AMI
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/2008 - 09:17 pm
Title: Part Five
WOO ! This was HOTTT !! Really liked how it ended, with things up in the air , like anything can happen . That must have been one damn long grocery list LOL .
Maybe a short fic to see how they are a couple of yrs from now ? OR NOT ..
