Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/04/2013 - 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
Beautiful.
Reviewer: jadefrost Signed
Date: 08/01/2008 - 08:14 am
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
i loved the story and can't wait to rea more of your stuff. The only problem I found was the many errors in text. I'm sure most of them are typos but they did make reading a little difficult. Do you have a Beta? It's something worth looking into.
Reviewer: quirks
Anonymous
Date: 06/08/2008 - 06:01 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
i really enjoyed this! thanks
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 02/02/2008 - 09:19 am
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
I absolutely loved this story. There were a few places that could use polishing up with a Beta - and I seemed to get the impression that you might be Swedish and writing this in English. If that is true - it really puts me in awe. This story and was great and I loved the whole thing. Thanks everso for writing it.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:26 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
OH I loved it, wish you went farther would have like to find out what everyone thought in the end and who was on the phone.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:14 pm
Title: Chapter 6
OH I do like the Buffy killing the Immortal, it just didn't make sense the love of her life died and she was with him. Wonder how he will get past the Harmony bit
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:05 pm
Title: Chapter 5
OH I wonder if they are going to work thinks out or break the claim
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 4
yep she was in a relationship with him, but not like he thinks.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 3
OH she might have done something to acept I wonder what he will say.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 2
OH I hope she can stay to change enough that Spike won't die and Tara.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/11/2008 - 05:48 pm
Title: Prolouge - Chapter 1
OH I want to see what Tara will say to that.
Reviewer: sus
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 11:36 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
i loved this. original story line and so sweet!
Reviewer: Jessy Signed
Date: 12/21/2007 - 04:30 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
Cool story. Loved the idea that Buffy killed the Immortal, perfect ;) And I don't believe that Spike would stay away from her.. It was only to make the show, but they should've gotten a convincing reason... I liked that she forgave him, but I'm not sure if she would or should so quickly :P
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:55 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
That was just...awesome and really beautiful. Loved it! Go Willow!
Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews, all of them! I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:50 pm
Title: Chapter 6
Really hope she gives him a proper ass chewing at some point for being such a git. Great chappie!
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:45 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Ok, as long as you fix it, then I should be allright. Just...make it right.
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Oh I hope they wake up together and not divided by time. That would suck.
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Oh, that was just...hot and sweet and so many other words that I just can't think of at this moment. Loved it!
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:19 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Yea Buffy for telling Xander off! Wished she would have actually done that a time or two in the show. On to Spuffy-lovin'...
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:13 pm
Title: Prolouge - Chapter 1
This story sounds really interesting. Liking it so far. Loved how Buffy gave Willow some lip about her addiction. Great!
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 12/19/2007 - 02:35 am
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
So sweet! Loved! So it was Willow who had made their dream come true :) / Ariadne
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 12/19/2007 - 02:14 am
Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad they found each other :) *off to next chapter*
Reviewer: LadyEnchanted Signed
Date: 12/18/2007 - 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
awe. how cute was that?
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you.
Reviewer: leanne
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/2007 - 10:26 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
Great story - but man you need to watch your tenses!! It was really distracting to read "was" when it should have been "were" and "had" instead of "has." There severeal instances of using words that were spelled similarly or sounded similar, but were the wrong word completely. It made me loose my place in the story while my brain tried to figure out what you wer saying. Keep working on your grammar and tense and you'll really step your writng game up a lot.
Author's Response: I'm working on it and I hope my next story will hold higher quality. Luckily I'm getting some help now. I'm glad you enjoyed the story anyway! Thank you for pointing out some of the problems in it.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/2007 - 06:06 pm
Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue
Really enjoyed your fic!
Author's Response: Glad. Thank you so much!
