Reviewer: baonmi
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Reviewer: Niori
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/2009 - 03:47 am
Title: Seven
I had to take a few days to decide how I wanted to review this. That's how much of an impact it had.
Firsdt off, as a writer you are amazing. The story itself was amazing, even if it did leave a bad taste in my mouth. Just the content was so. dark (yeah, you warned me and I went in expecting it). It had me shuddering, and a few times I got that sick feeling in my stomach. Oh, and the end had me in tears (that's nearly impossible to do).
All of that just shows how powerful your wirting is.
I don't know if I can truly say that I 'enjoyed' this story, but it was powerful and well worth the read.
Now excuse me while I go read some shamless fluff to make the depression go away.
Author's Response: Hi Niori
Thank you for taking the plunge and reading this story. It is by far the darkest thing I have written (and that's saying something! LOL) I really appreciate you saying that it is powerful and that my writing is good. I'm not really sure where this one came from. *Note to self not to use an evil twin prompt again* : D
I hope you will try my other fics. I have Tracker on here and will be posting a sequel to it called Tracked Down from Monday. I think these stories are probably the best writing that I have done.
Most have my stories have dark themes, but none are so bleak as this one. Some are funny in a kind of twisted way and I have some Spangel fics on my lj that are pretty light! :D My lj addy is on the profile if you want to read non Spuffy.
Thanks again for taking the trouble to review. I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 07/12/2009 - 12:43 pm
Title: Seven
I personally think that you are an incredibly talented storyteller, even though I did not like the story being told. The story left a very bad taste in my mouth, so to speak, but your writing ability is so superb that I'm willing to keep an eye out for future stories from you, however I will never ever read anything that you label as 'dark'..lol. I know now to take you at your word with that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that you would try another story of mine - being the owner of the site - that means a lot. That story is the darkest that I have ever written and it's not something that I'm planning to repeat! LOL! On here there is Good Job, Spike which is a lot lighter though still a bit twisted - maybe you could take a peek :D My next offering on here will be much lighter :D Thanks again, Pari.
Reviewer: alison cantrell
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/2009 - 07:10 am
Title: Seven
seriously twisted, maybe for a sequel Dawn could bite the heads off some puppies. Only kidding, probably too tame, best I could come up with at short notice. Anyway, I was warned but I thought 'How bad can it be?' Answer, bad. Thank you for an entertaining hour.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, the Dawn thing does sound a little tame! Maybe try Good Job, Spike - it might give you a bit better exeperience. Thank you so much for taking the trouble to comment. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2009 - 09:59 am
Title: Seven
i read your story last night and I waited to review because I wanted to think about what I wanted to say.
First, I think you are a very good writer, but the darkness and torture in this story horrified me. I know that you gave plenty of warnings and I skipped over this story several times before I read it. I know that there does not always have to be a happy ending although I like them and I think that Spike's ending had to happen this way but I don't know if I am up to reading any more stories like this. I rarely cry when I read Spuffy fiction but this ending broke my heart.
Author's Response: Hi Bridget. Thanks for giving the story a go and for saying that I am a good writer. Perhaps I painted too vivid a picture eh? Offers cookies for your tears and points you in the way of Good Job, Spike which is 'different' but not dark and actually a bit of a giggle :D If you see another of my fics on here pleae give it a try as it won't be so gruesome as this one was - I promise. :)
Reviewer: darlaslilgirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2009 - 08:59 am
Title: Seven
i've read the fic from 1-7 now and i have to say you are a great writter. i think i may have been desensatized sometime before reading this fic as i didnt really get squicked out by it after your warnings. i definitly felt for spike due to your writting ability and im glad you gave both spike a well deserved ending, i'd have been disapointed with a happy ending.
i actually cant wait to read more of your writting after this.
well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for such lovely and encouraging comments.
I must admit that I was surprised at the number of people commenting on how dark it was when I thought I did a good job of warning them exactly what the content would be.
I felt that there was no way a happy ending could be conjured up out of what had happened and so I'm glad that you thought that it fit.
I have two other stories on here - Goodbye, Spike - dark and Good Job, Spike - bit twisted but I think a bit funny too! LOL For all my other work check out my lj spikes-evilbint.livejournal.com. Got lots on there - but mostly slashy. I especially like Concentrate, Spike and Gulity As Charged. And the novel length The Birthday Present :) If you read I'd love to know what you think.
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2009 - 07:01 am
Title: Seven
this story was deeply disturbing, however, i finished it like you asked, and I'm glad that there was a little bit of spuffy. I really hope that this story doesn't deter readers from reading some of your other work.
Author's Response: Thank you for being brave enough to read. There was a little Spuffy there - just a hint. Hopefully people will read the summary and warnings and still give me a chance - whatever I post here next time won't be so dark - I promise. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Shakes Signed
Date: 06/24/2009 - 05:05 pm
Title: Seven
Okay I really couldn't stomach a lot of what you wrote. I read chapters 1-5 (painfully closing my eyes at times) and skipped right to chapter 7, eager to see what the conclusion was for this fic.
I think the ending was VERY appropriate. Though it is difficult for most authors to write sad endings, I think that it's unrealistic to expect one, even if the entire story has lead to nothing but a sad ending. I commend you for your outstanding ability to conclude such a dark story in such a bittersweet way.
Though I will probably never read anything else of yours (my apologies but it's not quite my cup of tea. xD) I do want to say that regardless of some of the nasty reviews you have received, you should feel nothing but proud. Some people feel the need to be completely rude, even when they have no business to. Ignore them and continue writing. It may not be MY style but that doesn't mean its good. Cuz it sure as hell is.
Disturbing work, but OUTSTANDING.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support. I really appreciate it. This is the darkest thing I have written and I don't think I'll delve that deep again! LOL! The muse went a little crazy when I saw the evil twin prompt on nekid_spike.
Chapter six wasn't at all gruesome so go back and read if you skipped it! Hee!
I totally understand that you don't want to read more of my work - it isn't for everybody - like I can't read het porn - but if you're not adverse to a bit of Spander try Concentrate, Spike on my lj - Angel helps ghost!Spike with a bit of a problem! Not dark at all!
Thank you once again for being so supportive. I'm planning a lighter fic so maybe take a look at that when I post ?
If anything I post here is dark I will label accordingly like I did this one :D
Reviewer: sightless Signed
Date: 06/24/2009 - 02:49 am
Title: Seven
I cried. Hard.
Beautifully done. I was hoping for a happy ending, but this fits better.
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Author's Response: Thank you very much. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: iT
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2009 - 11:39 pm
Title: Seven
Oh, that's so sad!!! If only Buffy had got there a little sooner, or slit her wrist and made him drink. :(
That was very dark, but well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It had to end with dust but I wanted it not to be Spike's decision. TwinSpike essentially murdered him. Thanks again for giving the story a chance and for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 08:25 pm
Title: Seven
:( sad but am thrilled with writing. I like to see a writer push themselves to cross boundaries, either for themselves or for the masses. This definitely isnt for everyone, but I must say, the writing was very good.
Author's Response: I have really appreciated your comments. It is gruesome I know. My darkest ever, I doubt if I'll go so dark again. The prompt of Evil Twin just made me think that an incarnation of a notorious vampire would be very evil indeed. Thank you for saying that it was well written.
Reviewer: Sandy
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2009 - 06:02 pm
Title: Seven
That was certainly a very intense story. It may be sad to say but I think this is the first time I've wanted Spike to be dusted. He had been put through so much and I don't think he would have ever recovered. He was in so much emotional and mental pain and being such a strong vampire before, he just wouldn't have been able to stomach being weak, pathetic, afraid Spike.
I did have some trouble with EvilSpike and his behaviour towards Spike - not really understanding it. I don't see why he would act that way, torturing Spike. We see in the Angel series that Spike had to get someone else do the torturing for him as he didn't seem to have the stomach for it or perhaps the 'hard-core' evil for it - unlike Angelus.
Thanks for your story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for your comments.
I wrote the story for the evil twin prompt on nekid_spike the lj comm. So TwinSpike had to be bad through and through. He might have looked like Spike but as we saw he most definately wasn't like the Spike we've seen before. Real Spike had that evil in him years before though otherwise he wouldn't have earned his reputation in the Watcher's Diaries - Angel also warned them of how Spike could be in School Hard :)
I have read a lot of dark stories that somehow manage to conjure up a happy end (written them myself too! LOL) but like you said - Spike was too broken to be whole again in this story. Please check out my lj for my other stories - a couple of Spangel are actually quite funny! Hee!
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2009 - 05:00 pm
Title: Seven
Wow! That was an incredibly intense story! You did a great job with very dark subject matter. It was interesting to see a truly evil Spike.
Jenn
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you though that I did a great job. It means a lot. Head over to my lj spikes-evilbint.livejournal.com for stories that aren't Spuffy. Some are much less dark. :)
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 08:10 am
Title: Six
ok... I really hope you update this soon. The torture and torment that our beloved Spike has had to endure was beyond terrible, but I knew you would make it all better. At least I hope you will *cringes* I am curious to see where you take this, and look forward to the dusty demise of TwinSpike :)
Author's Response: Thank you again for taking the trouble to comment on each chapter.
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 07:48 am
Title: Five
oooo so sad :( tongue fixed, but can she fix our beautiful Spike any more? *sobs* I hope this ends well.... off to next chapter
Author's Response: Poor Spike - he is so badly damaged...
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 07:34 am
Title: Four
woohoo! Looks like he may get out of this. I hope he can prevent TwinSpike from hurting anyone else.. but, I have to wonder is this a trap, the magics just stopped working? hmmm... onto next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the trouble to comment - I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 06:36 am
Title: Three
I survived it, but I am so worried Spike may never heal. Please let there be something good that happens soon. And good, Lord, dont let him hurt Dawn too. I am guessing she will be the one to figure it all out.
Author's Response: Thank goodness you survived! :D
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 06:13 am
Title: Two
I will say this story isnt for everyone, but I am hanging in there. I hope that spike comes up with a plan and that maybe willow can heal him in the future. Swiss-cheese spike is not as sexy :P As for Buffy and her gang, NO ONE can tell the difference? fools.
Author's Response: I know it isn't. Even for me this is darker than dark! Thank you for being brave and for commenting
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 - 05:55 am
Title: One
what a mess they've all gotten themselves into! I'm sure it will get worse before it gets better.. am off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for giving this undoubtedly dark fic a chance :D
Reviewer: Brett
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2009 - 07:09 pm
Title: Four
Oh! Maybe now Spike has a chance to escape because his evil twin is not using his magics. I just hope something doesn't happen to Tara and the rest of the scoobies.
Author's Response: There is a chink appearing in TwinSpike's armour - let's hope they can act on it! :D Thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: chris
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2009 - 07:06 pm
Title: Four
I read this fic over on LJ and although it was very dark and almost difficult for me to read at times , the writing was excellent and you did a superb job of showing the pain and torment that Spike goes through.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It is very dark - probably my darkest. I do have my more light hearted - though twisted and tongue in cheek - fics over on my lj too :D Thank you so much for your support, it means a lot.
Reviewer: Angi
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2009 - 04:20 pm
Title: Three
Hmm, what to write? There have been warnings, but it still surprised me how graphic, cruel and evil the story got.
Somehow the only thought I have after chapter 3 is:
What on earth would anyone halfway sane make want to write something like this?
Author's Response: Fair comment! LOL! :D
Author's Response: At first your comment made me chuckle, but while I know that what I wrote isn't everyone's cup of tea - it is clearly labelled and to cast aspersions on someone's sanity is actually rather rude.
Reviewer: Cynthia Bryant
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2009 - 12:16 pm
Title: Two
When will this become 'spuffy'? When will it progress past Spike repeatedly being raped by his doppelganger? I read this even though it was disturbing because I thought it, Spike's capture and rape by his double, would be a means to an end, that it had a point. Now it just seems like that's all there is to the story, because that has been 95% of the story. I think you have incredible writing skill because your description of Spike's torment was visual enough that it was very bothersome for me, it invoke deep emotional feelings. That being said is there a true point, plot to the story and I have to be a bit more patient, or will it continue as is in which case I really don't care to continue reading it.
Author's Response: Hello Cynthia. Thanks for giving this story a chance, and for saying that it is well written. The story is seven chapters long and is complete. There is Spuffy in this both involving TwinSpike and real Spike but I have to warn you that it is not a happy tale. They will be posted daily once I have acheived verification from the site. I totally understand if you decide against continuing, but there is a little more to come plotwise. Thanks again for taking the time to comment.
