Reviewer: ImNobody
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2014 - 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 4: What Grounded Means!
I'm finding it a little hard to suspend my disbelief in a world in which an 18 year old college student gets grounded. Or perhaps I just can't believe in an 18 year old Buffy in any universe who would accept grounding.
Reviewer: Miranda
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/2013 - 09:39 pm
Title: Chapter 22: Promises
Long story pretty good but still felt like something was missing at the end.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 06/20/2012 - 04:52 pm
Title: Chapter 22: Promises
A good ending, I always like when Buffy realizes that she doesn't have to be normal, she can have more.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 06/20/2012 - 02:27 am
Title: Chapter 22: Promises
Thanku for adding my request. I loved it and also the other additions. You're a wonderful writer! I'm sad to see this story end...but look out for a new story? I hope to see that soon. And I stil have Rescue of Dawn :)
Great story! I loved the closing of it. It was an opening to a new chapter in their lives.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 06/17/2012 - 06:03 am
Title: Chapter 21: Making Things Right
A good talk.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 06/16/2012 - 01:38 pm
Title: Chapter 21: Making Things Right
Finally, she admits to loving him. This was such a nice chapter.
As always you are so sweet to me...thank you.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/13/2012 - 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 9: School Woes
Oops - so many chapters to catch up with. Can't do it all today, will have to come back later.
I'd thought first that Buffy would be definitely bored. But it seems she is starting to enjoy her new life even without her powers.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 06/10/2012 - 02:29 am
Title: Chapter 20: Story Telling
Good she needed to talk with him.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/2012 - 04:37 pm
Title: Chapter 20: Story Telling
I'm looking forward to reading Spike's reaction to her describing the relationship between her and William. I'll read and beta tomorrow!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 06/06/2012 - 01:19 pm
Title: Chapter 19: Back Home Again
Now she's back and trying to fix everything, nice. But now she needs to explain things for Spike. This is really confusing for him.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2012 - 01:07 pm
Title: Chapter 19: Back Home Again
Now that i know there are more chapters, the build-up to spuffy is exciting!
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/26/2012 - 11:16 am
Title: Chapter 18: Saying What You Feel
So happy that she is going back to Spike. She learned the value of his love while she was in that world.
I absolutely love her speech to William.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/24/2012 - 02:01 pm
Title: Chapter 18: Saying What You Feel
Wellwritten sorrow and emotionel pain but the end gave hope for next chapter.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/23/2012 - 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 17: Pain
It was sad, but written well.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 05/22/2012 - 08:32 pm
Title: Chapter 17: Pain
Omg! You are excellent with the additions. It seemed so real to me. I really enjoy this story. I can't wait for that happy ending!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/21/2012 - 10:37 am
Title: Chapter 16: All Because of a Kiss
Very intense chapter, poor Buffy, and poor William.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2012 - 03:34 am
Title: Chapter 16: All Because of a Kiss
That was hard to read even a second time. The addition you made was perfect just like I thought it would be.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/19/2012 - 11:16 pm
Title: Chapter 15: Bronzing It!
I like the budding friendship of Anya and Buffy. I'm looking forward to William's Thining Spot meeting!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/14/2012 - 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 14: Change in Plans
Buffy is missing her old life but is trying to make the best of this one.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/2012 - 02:57 pm
Title: Chapter 13: Football...Soccer?
I just re-read your additions because I loved them so much!
.....I still love them, lol. :)
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/2012 - 08:25 am
Title: Chapter 13: Football...Soccer?
You're so sweet. If I ever need a confidence boost, then I'll read your author's notes. :D
Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love the additions. You went into so much depth.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/13/2012 - 02:51 am
Title: Chapter 13: Football...Soccer?
Good thinking from Buffy.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 05/11/2012 - 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 12: Making the Most of a Wish
Brilliant! I love the additions!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/11/2012 - 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 12: Making the Most of a Wish
Nice.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/09/2012 - 02:25 am
Title: Chapter 11: Heroes
It's good for William that Buffy tries to bring him out of his shell.
