Reviewer: adidasnmd
Anonymous
Date: 07/27/2016 - 03:46 am
Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Akela Signed
Date: 08/14/2010 - 08:23 am
Title: Chapter 4
i have goosebumps
Reviewer: olinka
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2009 - 08:54 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Good job, I really liked it :)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/2009 - 06:13 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Enjoyed! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 04/06/2009 - 05:34 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Yeah, these are only glimpses in Buffy's life.
There is a gap between them (the time between the chapters) and I have no clue how many time passed away since the last chapter and this (besides that Spike 'went through' a lot of girlfriends/one-night-stands[?]). And because I'm curious - how many more than time nine month did you jump forward between the last chapter and this?
PS - you didn't mark the story as finished.
Author's Response: Without really saying it in the story, the idea was that each chapter is five years apart. Ages 8, 13, 18, & 23. So in that time period, Spike did have a lot of girlfriends/hook-ups. Maybe the names in Chapter 4 are the complete list. And if so, it's kind of interesting that Buffy has been keeping such close track of them all.
Apparently, ever since high school, Buffy nad Spike had occasional hook-ups. But it had been about a year since the last time.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 04/06/2009 - 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Another turn... makes me wonder how it will end. (Because if I remember right there is only one chapter left.)
Reviewer: Brett
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2009 - 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Interesting. I wonder how the next part shall go.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2009 - 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Spike comes to the rescue more or less. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 04/05/2009 - 07:35 am
Title: Chapter 2
I see now (when it is too late) that you've added warnings to this chapter about xx/others. Didn't see it first so it was surprising to see that turn of events.
*refreshes recently added* The warning doesn't show on the recently added page though (no clue why).
A lot of break-ups in this chapter; looking forward to see the next glimpse/snapshot.
Author's Response: I think that the Recently Added page only shows the warnings for the 1st chapter. The page that lists all the chapters shows the different warnings for each chapter. I'm wondering if the correct protocol is to include all possible warnings on the 1st chapter even if the *bad* thing only appears in some chapter later on. Does someone know? thanks
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2009 - 02:14 am
Title: Chapter 2
ugh, a buffy/other, spike/other warning would have been appreciated for this chapter. i can't stand reading that, even if it doesn't last.
Author's Response: Apologies, rookie mistake.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/2009 - 07:22 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/2009 - 06:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Sibb
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/2009 - 06:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Spike strikes out when he is insecure, Angel hides his feelings and stays in the background and broods, Willow hides behind Buffy, and Buffy is drawn to the broodiness that is Angel and fights with Spike.
So...what you are pointing out here is that nothing ever changes? Cute!
Author's Response: I'm not even sure that I was totally conscious of all of these points. But that just goes to show how right you are. thanks.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 04/04/2009 - 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Cute first chapter :)
