Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/20/2013 - 01:15 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
Very, very sweet!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/19/2013 - 04:43 am
Title: Chp One ....about your Easter bonnet...
Cute so far, but the whole thing sounds very British, and so does Buffy. Public schools in the US don't do Easter things (separation of church and state) and bonnets are not really done here (not for scores of years), but the idea is very charming!
Author's Response: Hi yes, I've been told off about this story before! Again, written many years ago when I was just starting and someone wanted an Easter story quickly. I had no idea about the separation of church and state in US in those days - I hadn't watched The West Wing yet! When I was growing up, Easter was celebrated in most schools over here - now it is very commercialised and mostly about chocolate, eggs and little rabbits because you mustn't offend people of other religions. My early Buffy does sound English. I think she's better in the later stories and in Future Imperfect, I always say its because they've been married a long time, she has picked up Spike's way of speaking!
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/2007 - 02:14 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
Great Easter story
Reviewer: Goldylocks
Anonymous
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:58 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
What a lovely story, I ended with tears running down my face (but in a good way) I really enjoyed it, please write more like it.
Reviewer: Isabel Signed
Date: 03/28/2005 - 08:03 am
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
That was so sweet. I loved it. Buffy really does need to have fun sometimes instead of being all business like. The Easter eggs were such a cute idea. Good story.
Reviewer: Isabel Signed
Date: 03/28/2005 - 07:54 am
Title: Chp 2 The Apology
Great emotional conflict, very well written. I like that Buffy felt bad from not setting things straight with Dawn and telling her who made the bonnets and the explanation of how she feels inadequate in her parent role and misses her mom. Great chapter
Reviewer: Cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/2005 - 08:52 am
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
TNX for writting! ''Have wonderful day, too
Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed
Date: 03/26/2005 - 11:40 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
cool very, cool!
Reviewer: nixiet
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 11:31 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
Thank you for such a sweet story that still managed to be suggestive. Have a wonderful Easter!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 09:53 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
Lovely.
Reviewer: winkle
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 09:46 pm
Title: Chp One ....about your Easter bonnet...
how old is dawn exactly? isnt she a bit too old for easter bonnets??!! maybe you could have thought of something more believable that spike could have helped buffy with... like making chocolate eggs or something...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The bonnets weren’t all for Dawn, but for the girls to wear at the school market. Too young? Oh dear, we make them in England for people to wear at Easter bazaars and bring and buys. In chapter 3, Spike does at least distribute chocolate eggs.
Reviewer: Franchesca
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 08:00 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
Very sweet and Spuffy story, but I would change the rating to a G or PG. Licking Spike's finger does not constitute sex (even though I would personally pass out if I actually got the opportunity). Happy Easter!
Author's Response: Many thanks for the review. You’re quite right. I’m not quite sure how the high rating got put in. Well, I am, because i did it, but automatically and without thinking! Thanks for pointing it out.
Reviewer: Jenn
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 07:28 pm
Title: Chp 3 Stop Hiding
that was a great story i loved. Happy Easter to you as well. :)
Reviewer: nixiet
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 09:43 am
Title: Chp 2 The Apology
A lovely treat! I'd love to read more in time for Easter! Keep it up.
Reviewer: Cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 07:53 am
Title: Chp 2 The Apology
I hope you'll update soon - please more :)
Reviewer: lindsay
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 12:53 am
Title: Chp 2 The Apology
great so far, keep it up.
Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed
Date: 03/25/2005 - 10:32 pm
Title: Chp 2 The Apology
love that she turns to him!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/2005 - 09:24 pm
Title: Chp One ....about your Easter bonnet...
Very nice story. It is very sweet.
Reviewer: Isabel Signed
Date: 03/20/2005 - 08:43 pm
Title: Chp One ....about your Easter bonnet...
Very, very, sweet. I love it.
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/20/2005 - 04:08 pm
Title: Chp One ....about your Easter bonnet...
How cute!
Reviewer: Bernardette
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/2005 - 02:27 pm
Title: Chp One ....about your Easter bonnet...
Oh Yes a very cute story. Please continue to update soon and often. Looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
