Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 09/30/2012 - 02:19 pm
Title: Three
This is so fluffy and sweet. I just love it. I like your addition to the usual claim thing. The only way they can die is to be beheaded. I like that; never heard it before.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 09/20/2012 - 09:45 pm
Title: Two
This is going to be a wonderful story, I can already tell. This is how season six should have gone. What were those writers thinking?!
The only thing is I wished it went into more about how everyone reacted to the news. I can imagine Xander doing one of those, "Buffy you're possessed. He's a monster."
Spike is such a romantic and Buffy is so sweet. I loved how you made everything so happy.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 09/20/2012 - 09:41 pm
Title: One
Awesome! Buffy is going to tell her friends about her and Spike. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Nova Signed
Date: 09/02/2010 - 10:32 pm
Title: Chapter 10
just found this today. really liked it. hope there is no bad guy, but angel bashing is a go. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There won't be any bad guy as I have trouble with writing fight scenes. If you like Angel bashinh, I suggest you look out forr my next update to my fic Something True. there will be Angel bashing there.
Reviewer: magnus374
Anonymous
Date: 08/15/2010 - 02:00 am
Title: Chapter 10
Just wanted to say that it has been a nice story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, look out for the sequel.
Reviewer: sus
Anonymous
Date: 08/14/2010 - 06:20 pm
Title: Chapter 10
I love your storyline. And for the bad guy, I don't like any of them but if I had to chose, I would say that Angel was the baddest of the two of them.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've got a list of ideas and it all depends on how the muse feeds me.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/13/2010 - 09:08 am
Title: Chapter 10
I love this story. The way you express your characters in your writing is so heartfelt and sincere. I love the way the emotions are described through the narrative flow. I can't wait to see how the story turns. Hmmm...I see that Angel is making a remarkable ass out of himself as always. Now the question is, will the absent protective father figure Giles whom Buffy trusts and loves dearly follow in Angel's footsteps and make an ass out of himself as well? Hmmm...I'm thinking no. Buffy is going through so much right now and certainly doesn't need that to stress her out even more. I am so tired of Angel and Xander's s##t. I mean for real. Angel's holier than thou attitude and Xander's gee I'm getting married to an ex vengeance demon and have mucked up too many times too count and am still obsessed with Buffy who I can't ever have? Pathetic much? Well, hopefully, Xander will have to learn to deal. Maybe Angel will be dusted in this one? LOL. Yeah, Spuffy fan here. Or maybe Angel will see the light and be the grandfather to the twins since he is Dru's sire and part of the Aurelius line? I wonder what will happen with that and how Dru will react once the claim is taking place? Giles would make a great godfather or maybe even take care of the twins for them. I know too much review, but I love your story and I am so excited with the way it stopped. I look forward to the next chapter and hope to read your other story as well. Good luck with school. Don't know how you can do everything your doing all at once. Much smoochies...Muah.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, this has been the most in depth review I've had for any of my fics as I have a few on fanfiction.net under the pen name basket-case1880.
Thank you for your ideas for the next part in the series. I had no true idea of what to do, really, but I do know I will now include Dru in some form, will ask for more ideas when the time comes for her to make an appearance.
The way I cope with school, real life and fanfics is insomnia, when I can't sleep I write.
Reviewer: Nana
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/2010 - 01:22 am
Title: One
I just read your story for the first time - it's very good. I like you cliff hanger ending, makes me want more. I hope real life gets better for you soon. I will wait patiently until you start the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks. If you like episode rewrite type stories, I've got a Something Blue rewrite called Something True. It's still a WIP, but I will be focusing more on it for the moment as it was my first Spuffy fic I began posting.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/12/2010 - 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Awe so Buffy having twins is now confirmed.
Enjoyed the update, I'm not sure yet if I'd take Angel or Giles to be the bad one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. If I don't get much response to my options on here when I repost this on fanfiction.net I will create a poll for readers to decide. If not, I'll just write what comes to me.
Reviewer: spike_lizard Signed
Date: 08/12/2010 - 01:09 pm
Title: Chapter 10
i think both cause angel would not be there unless someone didn't call him and giles and him at the same time
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As said in a previous chapter, Xander called Giles in lieu of Willow. Xander's intentions were entirely dishonourable when he called, but I'm still contemplating whether Giles' intentions are of the good or the bad.
Angel found out through a vision sent to Cordy by the Powers That Be, but that will be explained in the next part.
Reviewer: Nana
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/2010 - 04:59 pm
Title: Chapter 9
This is the first time I have read your story, it is really good and has a solid foundation. I really enjoy the family stories along with baby fics. Who will be the bad guys I am wondering? I am looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it's always good to see new readers. I'm thinking of bringing Giles and Angel into the story to play alongside Xander against Buffy being with Spike. Just have to see where my typing takes me.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/09/2010 - 02:15 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Enjoyed the update - sweet family time. When the babies are there, they'll be a lot more busier.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Once again, I apologise for the huge gap in updates, semester B of my second year was tough but things should be a lot smoother 'til about September when I go into third year and start the actual degree course.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2009 - 05:50 pm
Title: Eight
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/10/2009 - 04:45 pm
Title: Eight
Fun when Spike found the pics. Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm about halfway through the next chapter, but my coursework is building up, so it might be a while
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2009 - 03:44 pm
Title: Eight
Giles bashing. I prefer when a story keeps Angel a nice guy. If you do a series have it end when Giles at the doorstep. great way to get people to read your next story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I've had a vote for each side, so it all depends on what road my inspiration takes me. I'm like the Robert Frost poem 'TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth'
Reviewer: Laur
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2009 - 10:36 am
Title: Eight
Great chapter..can't wait for more....
GILES AND ANGEL BASHING!!!!! The fact he even THOUGHT and DID called Angel is just wrong.....
Author's Response: Thank you. That will be my first priority when writing the sequel to this fic.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/2009 - 05:42 pm
Title: Seven
Poor Buffy! I guess having twins was a bit too much information for her at the moment! More please!
Author's Response: I'm planning the final chapter of this part to be the next one as it's where Giles arrives, so I need some time to work out the angst for the confontation with Giles. Which is why I've decided to make that chapter the first of the next part in the 'Happy Family' series.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/25/2009 - 04:57 pm
Title: Seven
Awe, twins? That's a surprise. Than they can indeed use both names. :D
As for italics: TSR uses 'normal' HTML codes, just like LJ. See here
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I've managed to fix the fault now.
Reviewer: spuffy
Anonymous
Date: 08/30/2009 - 01:44 am
Title: Six
yuck! disgusting! please dont elaborate on the cravong !!!! lol
love the story!
cant wait for chappie 7!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I don't think I will elaborate.
The next chappie should be up within the week. Sorry in advance if it's not, internet connection is going to be dodgy by the end of the week.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 08/29/2009 - 12:31 pm
Title: Six
Xander is always causing trouble! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm thinking of bringing this part to an end soon. Making part 2 to be round about the birth and part 3 the mating and wedding.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/29/2009 - 08:02 am
Title: Six
Oh such a spoilsport. Xander had to tell Giles. I hope only good things will come out of it (not sure how Giles will react).
*shudders* As long as Buffy likes what she eats. *gg*
PS: I think you didn't close the tag right for the italics after Spike's note, it's sill italic.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm still trying to get round the whole italics problem, don't know how to get it out of italics.
Reviewer: menolly
Anonymous
Date: 08/28/2009 - 10:31 pm
Title: Six
love the story. as for pregnancy cravings my best friend craved chocolate chip cookie dought ice cream and vineger and tabasco sause all mixed up with a spoonful of peptobismo to follow
Author's Response: Thanks. The only craving I can remember any of my family having when they were pregnant was ice, and that just sounded plain boring. I used to eat some disgusting ice cream concoctions when I was younger so that was why I opted to use ice cream and personally pickled eggs are disgusting.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 08/15/2009 - 02:38 pm
Title: Five
Looks like the gang took Buffy's pregnancy well. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: As they say, this is the lull before the storm. Just wait til Giles finds out. Can you guess who phones him?
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/14/2009 - 12:35 pm
Title: Five
Telling the Scoobies went really well, Buffy was lucky.
Anya was very helpful, it will definitely better for Buffy to work there.
Author's Response: Thank you for the support. I'm kinda stuck with where the next chapter will go, but I'm thinking more fluff between out fave couple before Giles turns up.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/2009 - 05:50 pm
Title: Four
Spike and Buffy are so cute together! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Things get even more cutesy in the next chapter.