Reviewer: Miranda Signed
Date: 10/29/2013 - 09:30 am
Title: There and Back
I'm really confused. Is that how it ends
Reviewer: Madison
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2011 - 12:04 am
Title: Daddy's Girl
Im very confused
Reviewer: Toni
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2007 - 11:37 pm
Title: Tatters
I'm finally starting to not be as confused as I have been...
Author's Response: Good. :) I hope you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/2006 - 05:07 pm
Title: Starlight, Star Bright
Spike with his shiny new humanity and still he doesn't show up in a mirror. And a little girl destined for her own apocalypse. Sounds ike their daughter. And poor middle-aged Willow following after some supernatural being in the dark. I can only imagine.
Author's Response: The first chapters are mostly flashback...heck most of the story is flashbacks, from one world or another. Spike wasn't human until three years after he was made a widower. So, that bit with the mirror- Spike's still a vampire.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/2006 - 04:33 pm
Title: Daddy's Girl
Well, that's all kinds of interesting. A little girl in a world without Buffy, Spike or the many other slayers. Doesn't sound like a place many would want to be. Leave it to Angelus to create it...
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/2006 - 04:33 pm
Title: Daddy's Girl
Well, that's all kinds of interesting. A little girl in a world without Buffy, Spike or the many other slayers. Doesn't sound like a place many would want to be. Leave it to Angelus to create it...
Author's Response: Some don't need help to create havoc.
Reviewer: Anon
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2006 - 02:30 pm
Title: Undertow
I really liked the prequel. But...
I've only walked out of two movies in my life. I've only thrown three books away. I'm quitting this story now. It's too contorted and convoluted for me to follow anymore and I just don't see the point. If you ever get around to reworking the story I might give it another try. As it stands, you're expecting much too much effort and patience from your readers with no payoff in sight.
Author's Response: I put in as much effort, perhaps more than you have, in writing this story. I saw it through to it's conclusion. I'm sorry that you don't feel that the time you've invested isn't worth the payoff. And, I am sorry to lose you. But I will be leaving the story as it stands.
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:31 am
Title: There and Back
Yep... it's me again... I wrote nearly seven months of entertainment when I meant eight, looks like I forgot how to count this morning... lol. Sorry for the mistake.
Mary
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:23 am
Title: There and Back
What a wonderful end to such a fantastic story. Although gotta say I wouldn't mind reading more adventures of the Dustin family. I really enjoyed the ride you took us on. This story really kept me on my toes and let me put on my clue hunting hat. I want to thank you for always answering my questions no matter how silly they were. Thanks again for giving me nearly seven months of great entertainment. And for old time's sake here's one last question. In ch. 14 Annunciation Spike noticed Talitha had a bird in flight birthmark like Joni was it just a coincidence?... or did I miss something? I'll keep a lookout for your next project. ^_^ Mary
Author's Response: Thank you so much for hanging in there with me. And, no question is ever silly! It means you're reading. If you take the time to ask it, I can try to answer.
About you'e last question: Nope. That was no fluke. That was baby Joni giving Daddy a "Heads up."
I'm giving the "Dustins" some time off, but they will return. My next endeaver will focus on the summer between seasons 6 and 7. Still Spuffy, of course. Please watch for it. It's coming very soon.
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:25 am
Title: There and Back
Wow, that was one LONG journey.
I'm glad that they figured it out in the end.
Very nice work indeed.
seeya
Author's Response: Thanks for giving my yarn a chance. I hope I can entertain you again soon. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 03/05/2006 - 05:02 am
Title: Motives
Good update, i can so imagene a snowman with spike's duster.
seeya
Author's Response: Thanks. I think it's the kind of thing he would do.
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 03/04/2006 - 10:26 pm
Title: Motives
Loved Spike's interregnum reunion with William and Edith. I've grown very fond of this family, so I really enjoyed Joni's memories of her Daddy building Spike the snowman. I just hope Homer gets to Joni before anything bad happens. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: It could get dicey. But please remember what Homer is. I've given you hints, most notable in, "Animi."
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 02/28/2006 - 05:59 am
Title: Quintessence
Mabel's backstory was interesting. After everything Angel did, I was a little surprised to hear Joni referring to him as her uncle. Joni bashing Angel is a fun thought, but Angel is nothing but trouble. If Joni does talk with him, my money is on him saying something that makes everything worse. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next. Great update!
Author's Response: Desperpate times...remember Spike didn't want Joni to find out what happened. If she talks with Angel...things could get ugly.
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:02 am
Title: Quintessence
No, i can't say that i have read that book. Poor mabel with her sunallergy, atleast she's with the right family.
seeya
Author's Response: Everyone needs to be loved. The story is about a boy who loved his toy rabbit so much that the rabbit became real... What was Joni's bunny's name again? :-)
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 02/22/2006 - 05:24 am
Title: Velveteen
I think I get the rabbit references now. I love the way story is playing out. Wonderful update! I really enjoyed it. :-)
Author's Response: Good on you, M.G.! Glad you liked it so much. -)
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 02/22/2006 - 03:03 am
Title: Velveteen
Ohh, a little girl that's even more cute'er then Joni.
And how sad that Spike forgot about her, well he didn't mean to of course.
I wonder about what Mabel said of him being an upper being.
seeya
Author's Response: Have you read the story, "The Velveteen Rabbit?" It might help you understand a little better. All will be explained. Only three nore chapters to go! Enjoy.
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/2006 - 05:49 am
Title: Prophet and Loss
Wonderful chapter! Mabel??!!! I never saw her coming. You really keep me on my toes Fetching Mad Scientist, I never know what you're gonna throw at us next. It's great to see Holland squirm for once. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. ;-)
Author's Response: No one saw Dawn coming either. That's *not* a hint. But, it may help put the confusion somewhere. I just wanted to give you guys a hint of better things. A happy ending, maybe?
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/2006 - 04:26 am
Title: Prophet and Loss
no no, defenitly not too much, she's supposed to be a cute little kid, right?
Buffy finally found her little girl back, can't wait to see what happens next.
seeya
Author's Response: Yep. Things are coming to a close. So, keep reading. Please?
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/2006 - 04:26 am
Title: Prophet and Loss
no no, defenitly not too much, she's supposed to be a cute little kid, right?
Buffy finally found her little girl back, can't wait to see what happens next.
seeya
Author's Response: Stay tuned!
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 02/09/2006 - 03:04 am
Title: Weapon of War
ohh, can Joni be any cuter.
Author's Response: Is she too much? ;-)
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 02/09/2006 - 12:21 am
Title: Weapon of War
LOL... Spike the 'Energizer Bunny' of vampires. I love that description for him, great line! I liked the great father/daughter interaction between Spike and Joni in this chapter. Brilliant plan Spike came up with to help Joni. Looks like Mommy has finally arrived! I can't wait to find out where things go from here. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: There's a reason for all the rabbit allusions. I'll try to explain next chapter. Have fun:-)
Reviewer: dihcar
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:36 am
Title: Animi
good chapter, it seems like a really strange world were spike and his dove are. Hope that buffy gets to them soon.
seeya
Author's Response: It all depends on how you see it. Remember, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2006 - 07:14 pm
Title: Animi
Wonderful update! So that's where Homer went. I like how Buffy recognized him for who he was so quickly. I'm glad Homer imparted his wisdom on Buffy. The song seems really important to Homer. It makes me wonder if there's a clue in it somewhere. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next!
Author's Response: It's easy to recognize your heart. Of course there's a clue. The answers already been given. See if you can find it. ;-)
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 01/27/2006 - 03:43 pm
Title: Mirrors
Awe, Spike got Joni back :) I'm glad.
Author's Response: Yep, he did. :-) The twist is, she never really was lost.
Reviewer: M.G.
Anonymous
Date: 01/26/2006 - 06:04 am
Title: Mirrors
What a sweet reunion! It was interesting that Spike didn't recognize Homer, but I guess he's never imagined himself as an old man. I appreciate the description of Homer, for a long time I wondered what he looked like. Great chapter as always!
Author's Response: I don't know about you, but *I* can't even tell what I look like without a mirror. Spike hasn't had a reflection in one hundred years. Certainly not that one. So, now you know what I think Spike looks like as an old man. Does it help with the story at all?
