Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 07:58 am
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
Ohh Update Please?? :):) Screw liked I love!
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 07:54 am
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
I really love this story. The only advice I can give you however is to get a beta to read through your chapters to pick up the tiny mistakes that Microsoft Word may miss for eg: "stay her for a couple of days" instead of "here". The beta will also help you in your paragraphing, in which in itself will help create a greater and tension filled atmosphere.
All round I have to say Well Done!
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2008 - 07:48 am
Title: A Call to Arms
Lol. The names are just too hilarious! The contextuality of them... brilliant lol. In all you have a very interesting story here. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: c98 Signed
Date: 06/27/2008 - 10:50 pm
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
This is very good! I can't wait for more... in fact... :) would you mind linking me to Niamh's story, I am really getting into the setting....
Crossovers with 300 are also calling to me... apparently period pieces are my thing,,,
Thanks, C98
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/26/2008 - 05:27 pm
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
heh heh Spike underestimated Buffy. His nose has to suffer now *gg*
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2008 - 01:05 pm
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
I love it! I love it! This fic is wonderful! You write Spuffy Snark really well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: hotlipedjen
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2008 - 06:44 am
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
Glad to see the update.
Reviewer: gaeilge
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2008 - 04:59 am
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
shorn is spelt wrong.......
ha she broke his nose funny
Reviewer: Ashmo21
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/2008 - 02:49 am
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
You Updated!!!! I'm falling sooo in love with this story! I can't wait 'til the next part
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/2008 - 11:13 pm
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
LOVED IT!! lol i cant believe she broke his noes and i really want them to be together. PLEASE update as sooon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Reviewer: Sibb
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/2008 - 09:57 pm
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
Love seeing another update! More, more, more...
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/2008 - 09:19 pm
Title: Is minic a bhris béal duine a shorn (It’s often a person’s mouth broke their nose!)
great to see his updated
Reviewer: guest
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2008 - 05:54 pm
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Wow I must say that this story is becoming very ineteresting! Nicely done with the writing! Hope for more! I wanna see if Buffy the chosen one is able to hold front against this rather sinfully sexy man! hmmmmmmm I wonder! lol! Can't wait and plz don't let us wait too long for an update!
Reviewer: guest
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2008 - 05:52 pm
Title: A Call to Arms
Two words for you hun; "WANT MORE!!!!!!"
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2008 - 01:23 am
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
DAMN, THAT WAS HELLA GOOD!!LOVED IT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 10:00 pm
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
thisone is funny especially the names look foward to more
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/04/2008 - 03:50 pm
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Oops - I just noticed what I wrote. I've meant: I haven't read Niamh's story so I can't compare these too.)
So Buffy needs to rest? Seem she doesn't think so ;-)
Big surprise for Spike.
I wonder if she would have beat him if she wasn't hurt.
More battles with words ahead? ~ Looking forward to more. (BTW - you could use some more space between the paragraphs too. Seems to me as if they have vanished.)
Reviewer: Sibb
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 12:25 pm
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
What a wonderful start to what promising to be a fabulous story! Keeping my fingers crossed that you'll be giving us regular updates on this one.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 11:33 am
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
I really like this story so far, and Spike is shown great. Can't wait to see the verbal sparring between them and how Spike will enjoy having the upper hand for now!
Good writing.
Reviewer: mozza
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 09:33 am
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
A battling princess and a Sexy leader who could ask for anything more? I will!!! And say write more!!!
Reviewer: HolyMoley
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 09:32 am
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Ooo! Great opening and I like the style to this stoory I look forward to seeing more of it it has great chemisty.
Reviewer: Ashmo21
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 02:43 am
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Oh I like....I like a lot! heehee.... I can't wait to see the rest! I can totally see Spike as a Roman and Buffy as a Celt!
Reviewer: Record Breakers
Anonymous
Date: 06/03/2008 - 10:36 pm
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
I love this please write more its very cool
Reviewer: Raspy_Luv
Anonymous
Date: 06/03/2008 - 06:40 pm
Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
yeh, uhmmmm....like, this is totally sexy. lol! I do so adore fics like this. Wanna read more! :)
Reviewer: letitia
Anonymous
Date: 06/02/2008 - 08:11 pm
Title: A Call to Arms
Okay now this just has me on the edge of my seat. Loving this thus far and I can't wait to read more.
