This was really good, especially the beginning. Seemed to lose its way a bit at the turning point (when Willow did the reversal spell), and the climax (at the Intiative) was also quite muddled. Spike & Buffy were so unforgivable, I'm not sure it could have believably been resolved so quickly. Also, seems odd not to have looped back around to Willow to figure out the order of things, and to make clear to all the characters which things were spell-related and to what extent. Dialogue was good, especially the first half, and especially with Spike. Promising writer, just needs some polish to tighten up plot.

Haha.

.... what happens next....

:(((((

Aww....

Poor Buffy.

Poor Buffy.

Does he? :)

Dun dun dun...

'Course there is.

Haha. Poor Spike.

amazig fic.