Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/2011 - 05:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1~ Routine Interruptus
&heart;
Reviewer: angie_s
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/2010 - 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1~ Routine Interruptus
What a wonderful story! PLease finish it!
Author's Response: Angie,
I have every intention of finishing the story. Life has taken so many twists and turns, there just hasn't been time and I don't want to post until I can do it right. Thanks so much for the nice comment.
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/2009 - 06:55 pm
Title: Chapter 41~ Aftermath
Woohoo! An update! Thank you so much. I hope Spike heals soon. I'm glad that things are going to well between Giles and Leah. Hope Dawn's ok!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for sticking with me. We're getting near the end and I have a lot of loose ends to tie up before a grand finale.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 01/30/2009 - 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 40~ Rescue
Whew! That was close , this chapter's been a long time comin but well worth it. I would beg for you to update soon , but, well you know. But i'm still here , hangin on every syllable. Til next time.
Reviewer: katamaphone
Anonymous
Date: 01/30/2009 - 12:37 pm
Title: Chapter 40~ Rescue
Hello!!! So happy to see this update! Thrilled even! I was really worried that he'd die. I should have known you'd find a way to save him ( go you::)) I ab-so-lute-ly LOVE this story! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: katamaphone
Anonymous
Date: 01/30/2009 - 12:36 pm
Title: Chapter 40~ Rescue
Hello!!! So happy to see this update! Thrilled even! I was really worried that he'd die. I should have known you'd find a way to save him ( go you::)) I ab-so-lute-ly LOVE this story! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 10/15/2008 - 05:30 am
Title: Chapter 36~ Puzzles
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/2008 - 07:24 pm
Title: Chapter 38 ~ Peril
suprise explosion cool
Author's Response: Boom!
More soon.
Reviewer: katamaphone
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/2008 - 08:01 pm
Title: Chapter 37 ~ Confidante
So glad to see a new chapter::)) Loved the chapter; and the whole dynamic of the burgeoning commraderie between Xander and Spike. Very funny, especially the mental visual of a dancing Spike grooving to the Xan-man's tunes no less.............Now I have to wonder about what caused the explosion, if Spike's back is broken, if Dawn's okay and if Buffy's too weak to take down ol' Binney himself?.............. And the saga continues ...........I can't wait to find out::))
Author's Response: *hands to head* So many questions!
I figured groovin' to a rock band that uses bagpipes lent a little color to the mix. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks so much for commenting. Stand by, more coming soon ...
Reviewer: Carol
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/2008 - 09:37 pm
Title: Chapter 37 ~ Confidante
NO, don't leave it like this!!!!
I love Spike and Xander interaction - this was very well done.
One of my favorite stories.
Author's Response: Now, you know I wouldn't do something like that unless I had a plan for a pretty quick update. Been in your shoes too many times enjoying other author's cliffhangers.
I love that you love it. And I love that you commented! Thank you!
Reviewer: Rich
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/2008 - 08:20 pm
Title: Chapter 37 ~ Confidante
As usual, this is very well done. Both dialogue and characterization are excellent. However, I have ywo questions : 1. How can a vampire's legs fall asleep when their blood doesn't circulate to begin with ? 2. Was it really necessary to cripple Spike twice in the same story ?
Author's Response: Hi Rich,
Good questions, both. 1. At first, I wrote a long answer in explanation and then retracted it, deciding that Binne is not the sharpest knife in the drawer and would have thought in those terms as a human. I'm sure the workings of a vampire physiology have no interest to him whatever. 2. What makes you think Spike IS crippled? You know he's injured, but you only have Xander's say so. Also, vampires may have all sorts of super strength and senses but they are infinitely vulnerable to all sorts of things. Their existence is really quite fragile. Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you are enjoying the story and I love that you take the time to say so. Thanks again.
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/2008 - 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter 37 ~ Confidante
what a cliffhanger
Author's Response: That's what I was aiming for. Thanks for commenting kw!
Reviewer: Lou Signed
Date: 06/10/2008 - 06:02 pm
Title: Chapter 37 ~ Confidante
Brilliant chapter. I really liked the interaction between Spike and Xander. Then the stunner ending!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Lou. So many threads weaving intricately together to make something whole. Glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/2008 - 04:00 pm
Title: Chapter 37 ~ Confidante
wow, wonderful, powerful chapter. it was brilliant, but you left it there!!!
I love this story and am delighted to find an update. more please
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. I lurve hearing from you guys.
I left it there? Hey! That's a cliffhanger! *hee*
Will the answer to Xander's woman problem finally "dawn" on him?
Is Buffy hot, sweet and wet and ready for Spike or did she hear the explosion too?
Is Spike up to it or is he really hurt?
What must the commandos be thinking?
Tune in next time ....
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 05/23/2008 - 08:48 am
Title: Chapter 36~ Puzzles
Finally an update , jeesh , I almost gave up on you , glad your back now gimme more.
Author's Response: Jeesh!
Ain't it the truth?
Long fics are my favorites and waiting for the author to update is hell. But when it finally happens it's a squee! Thanks so much for commenting, thanks for being glad I'm back and yes! yes! more, more...coming right up!
Reviewer: Francine
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/2008 - 07:02 pm
Title: Chapter 36~ Puzzles
I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this. I really appreciate it when an author goes out of their way to finish a WIP. Thank you.
Author's Response: No! No abandoning! Abandoning bad. Finishing good. Definitely gonna finish. Thank YOU!
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/2008 - 02:30 pm
Title: Chapter 36~ Puzzles
wonderful to see you back. loved the update, really beginning tohate xander, but you want us to don't you? poor dawn....she'll find her way eventually. the characterisation is well written. more please
Author's Response: Xander can really be a pain in the ass, can't he? I've had a love/hate relationship with him right through the series. thanks for sticking with me.
Reviewer: moonchic1023
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/2008 - 02:01 pm
Title: Chapter 36~ Puzzles
You still have readers and I am glad to see a new chapter up! Can't wait to see where the rest of this story goes!
Author's Response: Thank so much! I love the writing, but sometimes ya gotta make choices and writing had to take a back seat. The good news is I've got the rest all plotted out and I found some new plot bunnies under my bed!
Reviewer: katamaphone
Anonymous
Date: 12/01/2007 - 04:11 pm
Title: Chapter 35 ~ Interrogation
I was looking for you and your story again. I didn't have internet for awhile(sob)::))..I am very happy to say that I found you!!....................... I have to tell you; I just love this story, and very much look forward to seeing the next installment in this tale........Very concerned with Buffy's increasing weakness; is she being drugged perhaps? I keep thinking about the Crucimentium (or however you spell it). Loving the interactions between Buffy and Spike...........suffice it to say ; I like everything about this story and I have since reading the very first chapter. .....Heroes and demons and villians ..oh my!!!When you finish it I will be saving it so I can read it whenever I want. good sagas are something you read over and over and this is one of them.
Author's Response: Hi kat,
Getting your review is just what the doctor ordered. Real life has kept me away from Mr. Giles. Soon you'll learn what's happening. Thank you for the wonderful review.
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 09/19/2007 - 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 35 ~ Interrogation
not sure about Giles telling all about the school, I am sure he could have come up with another believable story, he risked the police going back to the station & telling all and it getting out to the press. and just a little niggle of mine-the police nor Giles would have said gotten, its an Americanism, nor would they have said in back, they would have said at the back. Sorry for the tiny critique because its such a good story & so well written
Author's Response: Thank you for that. I didn't know my Americanisms showed that much. You all say things so much better than we do. I just answered a review that made the same comment about Giles story. Remember that above all else, Giles is an honorable man. (MY Giles is, in any case) He can hide the truth, but to blatantly lie, when faced with direct questions? It's just not in his make-up. Don't worry scaryscouse, I've got it covered. Thanks much for the comment.
Reviewer: spuffyfan
Anonymous
Date: 09/19/2007 - 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 35 ~ Interrogation
Love it. You write so well. Truly a talented writer. More please.....
Loved it when Buffy says to Spike "but when am I going to get lucky" so great. Yeah, Spike step up the plate and help Buffy with her problem.
Author's Response: Hi Spuffyfan. Me too!!!
Thank you for your kind words. I love writing. I always wanted to and my friends in fanfiction have given me the courage to throw caution to the wind and give it a go. Just one thing, it was Dawn who says "when am I going to get lucky>" Buffy, bless her, is finally getting some again. *G* And you never know, Dawn may just get lucky too.
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 09/19/2007 - 05:03 pm
Title: Chapter 35 ~ Interrogation
i'm surprised Giles didn't have a better cover story...
looking forward to more
Author's Response: What better story than the truth. Giles is an honorable man...He can hide the truth, but to blatantly lie? I don't think so. All will be revealed!
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Samara Signed
Date: 09/14/2007 - 05:00 pm
Title: Chapter 34 ~ Thoughts, A Penny's Worth
I just did a marathon read of this story, and I am so blown away! I thought it was a very realistic vision of what might have happened. Also, I almost cried with poor Buffy! I am so glad Spike finally got back on track. Please keep updating!
Author's Response: Samara,
So nice to have you aboard. I'm so pleased you are enjoying. Next chapter soon.
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 09/04/2007 - 06:30 pm
Title: Chapter 34 ~ Thoughts, A Penny's Worth
Great chapter glad to see Spike and Buffy back in the swing
Author's Response: Thanks kw. Stay tuned, we're starting to wind down now.
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 09/04/2007 - 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 34 ~ Thoughts, A Penny's Worth
I love this story. Always happy to see a new chapter posted.
Really happy that Spike and Buffy finally had their hot moments. Laughed when Spike couldn't wait and Buffy thought she hurt him. But it really was a sweet thing to see our Spuffy couple so happy again. Cause it was breaking my heart to see Spike and Buffy so down.
Author's Response: Hi spikey,
I'm happy you are enjoying the story. I love the reading and writing of fanfic because it keeps us in touch with the characters we loved so much in the show. I always believed that Spike and Buffy belonged together.