Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2010 - 02:32 am
Title: Chapter Four
Oh, you don't have to worry about me not wanting to continue reading this story. I was disappointed that you have Spike noticed her watching him but I'm loving the story. I just felt that I may have been funnier if he found out another way. I don't know what way. I think it is that so many times we read Spike having the hots for Buffy and dreaming about her. That is is nice for a change to read it the other way around. I don't know and that is why I'm not a writer. But I'm enjoying the story very much. I just hope that it is Buffy that makes the first move on him. It would be nice to see Buffy go after Spike every once in a while. She should go after the hotness that is Spike. I'm still curious on how they are going to meet. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you will continue to read. More will be coming soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2010 - 12:42 am
Title: Chapter Four
how hard is it to just go next door and meet her? why is she so unobtainable? that's what i really don't get. why fantasize when you could have the real thing?
Author's Response: Everyday people see someone that they never approach. Despite how much they want to. In his case, he doesn't even know if she's real. He's only seen her once. He doesn't know if she was just a fantasy or some such. Plus, where the fun in that?
Reviewer: Lynnette Signed
Date: 01/12/2010 - 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter Four
HAHAHA. Spikey has got it bad. love your writing style, btw.
Author's Response: *blush* thanks so much. I do try hard to write well.
Reviewer: lynnette
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2010 - 12:44 am
Title: Chapter Three
that was hot and hilarious when she got caught with her hand in the cookie jar. please keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: I like that analogy! A new chapter will be coming soon
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2010 - 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter Three
That was really hot. I don't blame the girl for being obsess with watching Spike naked and pleasuring himself. I'm kind of disappointed that you had him notice her right there. That you had Spike realize that someone has been watching him. I'm only disappointed because I find it very cliche and I feel that most authors would go that way. I would have liked better if Spike found out another way somehow but that is just my opinion. I'm still loving the story though. Very much. That is one hot banner. Spike is one hot man. I want, I want. LOL
Author's Response: I'm sorry to disappoint with having Spike catch her. My muse determines where the story goes and I rarely go against her suggestions, she hasn't steered me wrong yet. I do understand if due to this you are unable to continue with the story.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 09:57 pm
Title: Chapter Three
That was pretty darn hot, and wicked. Love that he knows about her now. And is as easily entranced. That's pretty cool. Two people aching for and searching for each other. Wonder how long she can go without him. I cannot wait for more. Please, update soon.
Author's Response: Update will be coming soon, I promise
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 09:48 pm
Title: Chapter Two
As if there was any question that she would be back there for the Spike show. Gotta wonder when they shall meet. Can't all be about the window. Looking forward to that moment.
Author's Response: No it's not all about the window, more will be coming soon
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 09:38 pm
Title: Chapter One
Never again. My ass. You don't enjoy that view and know it's right outside your window and never look again. She'll be back for more.
Author's Response: Of course, who could stay away from THAT!
Reviewer: Rose
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 09:34 pm
Title: Chapter Three
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 04:11 pm
Title: Chapter Three
I can't imagine how embarrassed Buffy must feel! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: More coming soon!
Reviewer: lori
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 03:21 pm
Title: Chapter Three
I thought the story was going to be all-erotic and very meta. I was so glad you could I inject comedy in addition to naughty-neighbor Spike's recognition and returned desire.
So glad Spike seems unattached at the moment and thus the self-love. Although it seems criminal for him to be without even a 1-night stand, wasn't sure how an obsessed Buffy would have reacted. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I do enjoy writing serious, but I'm a comedian at heart. Life is way to serious to be any other way. Due to Spike being a very sexual creature, the self-love doesn't mean he's not rocking someones world. It just means that he needs more. Don't you wish you were his neighbor?
Reviewer: lori
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 03:11 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Your description of Buffy's desire is so tangibly thick and exquisitely written. I had to walk away from it mid-chapter to get a drink of cool water. What ever will she do if and when she meets her platinum-haloed fallen angel especially if her raging libido gets her off on the sight of him alone? I feel so lucky that I also have chapter 3 to read. Yay!
Author's Response: *blush* I appreciate your review immensly. Yours and others are what keeps me writing
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 02:49 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Hmm, kind of funny.
Author's Response: Thanks, can't be all serious!
Reviewer: jen
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 02:05 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Woohoo! He knows!
Author's Response: And now the real fun begins
Reviewer: demona424
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 01:16 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Sexy and hilarious at the same time! Can't wait to see what they'll both do next. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! I'm glad that you liked!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/03/2010 - 12:12 pm
Title: Chapter Three
How lucky that Buffy got the room with the window. :)
Heh ... Spike found out now. Seems for Buffy the days to watch him unnoticed are over now.
Looking forward to see more of Spike's reaction.
Author's Response: Don't we all wish we had that type of view?
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 05:24 am
Title: Chapter Three
I guess her sexual fantasy has become a reality of sorts.. He knows but she is now embarrased.. as we know she would be..
Still waiting for that meeting.. enjoying
Author's Response: A meeting will be coming soon
Reviewer: BlueEyes
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 02:33 am
Title: Chapter Three
I am so happy that he finally caught her in the act literally and the way she responded by disappearing so quickly from view upon discover hilarious but so something I can see happening. Now to look forward to there eventually meeting which I hope happens; but hopefully not too soon I am also hoping that you will make it so they start a window flirting thing.
Author's Response: A new chapter will be coming soon! Thank you for your review. They really help the muse create!
Reviewer: DW
Anonymous
Date: 01/02/2010 - 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter Three
That was scorching! *fans self* Your writing is good... makes me feel like I'm right there. You're doing good and I can't wait for more...neither can Spike! lol
Author's Response: *blush* thank you for your review. I try to put the writer there. I'm glad that I was able to do that.
Reviewer: teal
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2009 - 10:22 pm
Title: Chapter Two
i'm loving this story. it makes me laugh how unpleasuring her past lovers were bcuz we all know spike will pleasure her more than the 3 of them combined just by looking at her! haha oh i love these types of stories where it's impossible for them to resist each other. nice start. i hope you'll update again soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, the three lovers that I was referring to...Riley-blah!, Parker-double blah, and Angel-my story explains all.....I believe that even in Joss' world Spike was the ONLY one to sastify her, that's why she always fought it so. Update real soon
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2009 - 07:02 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Wondering if Spike knows he's being watched....Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: No, like a typical male, he's clueless!
Reviewer: BlueEyes
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2009 - 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter Two
With Buffy getting so horny I think it would only be fair if she did a similar performance and caught Spike's eye as they pretend to not be aware of the other watching them. I can't wait to see how Spike responds when he catches her spying. Well I hope he catches her and continues his routine.
Author's Response: His response will be coming soon!
Reviewer: mellissa
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2009 - 04:37 pm
Title: Chapter Two
This is such a great story so far. Can't wait til they finally meet!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you're enjoying it
Reviewer: Jen
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2009 - 01:52 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Hot dog! More!
Author's Response: Mores a comin'!
Reviewer: spikey
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2009 - 12:07 pm
Title: Chapter Two
I just read the two chapters now and I love it so far. More than love it.
Naughty Buffy, spying on Spike. Not that I blame the girl. I know I would. Spike being a hot guy and all. And if you are going to walk around naked with the curtains open then you are only inviting people to look. Not saying that I think it is right to look into other people's homes. But at the same time I feel you can't fault someone for looking if you have the curtains open and you are standing around naked or pleasuring yourself. I really got a kick out of this chapter. How Buffy was like never ever going to happen again. Yet, she couldn't resist and still kept on spying on Spike. At least she admits that is now obsession. I also laughed hard when Buffy finally had an orgasm by just looking at Spike but never did with any of her other lovers including Angel. Spike is just sexy like that. That is a good thing. I'm curious about learning more about the hot stud Spike but also don't mind Spike being a mystery a little longer either. I just hope that he doesn't know that he is being watched. I think most authors would go that way. I think it is better if he is clueless about being watched. That is just my opinion. Doesn't mean you have to go that way.
Last but not least. I love that picture of JM. I couldn't stop drooling over the picture. Then I finally was able to take my eyes away from the hot picture of JM/Spike to read the chapter. So pretty. Can I touch please?
I look forward to seeing how Spike and Buffy would finally meet. But I don't mind at all if they don't meet for a while and or if they meet soon. Most stories I would Spike and Buffy to meet right away. With this story I don't mind. I like the mystery of Spike and Buffy wondering about this hot man. But I also wouldn't mind if they met right away either. So, whatever way you go then I would love. But I'm still curious how Buffy would finally meet her hot man.
Author's Response: Yeah spying on someone like Spike, tests the fine line of morality. I agree infringing on someone's privacy is a big no no, but with a body like his and clearly he is not ashamed of it the way he exposes himself to the outside world it would be a travesty NOT to look! Ha HA! I'm glad that you're enjoying my story. A new chapter will be coming soon, I promise!
