Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 02/23/2014 - 07:24 pm
Title: oneshot
Aww... sweet.
Reviewer: nmcil
Anonymous
Date: 11/02/2010 - 03:45 am
Title: oneshot
A lovely short story - I like your inversion of their roles - I like how you used Spike's insecurities and Buffy's stubborn streak -
Reviewer: mazza
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2010 - 05:18 pm
Title: oneshot
beautiful piece of writing - the anguish, hurt and anger. Wonderful end - enjoyed it completely.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/2010 - 01:47 am
Title: oneshot
Lovely. Thanks for sharing..
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/2010 - 09:49 pm
Title: oneshot
Nice narrative, would be a better syory with dialogue though.
Author's Response: Dialogue would have destroyed the format- unfortunately, not every story can be told in every style. This was a narrative that couldn't possibly also be a dialogue. *shrugs*
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/11/2010 - 12:20 pm
Title: oneshot
Love the twist (retelling); this way it went so much better. :))
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I just wanted to give Spuffy a bit of a happier ending this time... :)
Reviewer: katamaphone
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/2010 - 09:46 am
Title: oneshot
THIS!! This is how Chosen should have ended the series! Wonderful. I didn't even miss the conversations, my imagination filled in the rest. It's really a shame that the writers couldn't see fit to give the fans the same,justified ending they deserved. Why is it, the owners never think to acknowledge the people that keep them on the air by watching?...............OK, enough soapboxing::)) I read all you write voraciously, and enjoy it all. Kudos!!
Author's Response: Heh, I agree with you on all counts! I do like to think that, had it not been the last episode, Joss would have given us a much more satisfactory conclusion. :) And he does acknowledge some of them- didn't you see the Bangel kiss? >:( (Not that I'm bitter or anything, Nooo.) :D
Reviewer: lisak
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/2010 - 07:25 am
Title: oneshot
thanks i enjoyed that x
Author's Response: Glad you did! :)