Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 02/26/2009 - 08:39 am
Title: Chapter 7: Mercy in the Middle
The Spike and Buffy-fight; was that a dream or a memory?
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 02/26/2009 - 08:31 am
Title: Chapter 6: All falls down
Great chapter! I'm off to next one.
Reviewer: Teal
Anonymous
Date: 12/22/2008 - 01:59 am
Title: Chapter 7: Mercy in the Middle
i hope you keep writing the story! it's good so far.
Reviewer: Nicka
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2008 - 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 7: Mercy in the Middle
Good story.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2008 - 09:57 pm
Title: Chapter 7: Mercy in the Middle
Hush now what are u obsessing about the chapter and the song were both lovely, i just hope Buffy realizes she can't go back to that MORONIC , NEANTHERTHAL, IMBECILE, OHHHHH i hate Angel even when he's nice , but he's not in this fic. i hope u can write some sense into her, she could be so happy . I don't get it ,she's goin bAck to him right ? Uggh , that's horrible. Update soon Mrs . Darlinf, and don't forget the Capt and the Lady.
Reviewer: Random Reader Person
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2008 - 12:33 pm
Title: Chapter 6: All falls down
Love Love Love this story. This chapter was really good, and no it was not too long. (you should have kept it going)
I love Buffy's mom. She deffinitely makes this story 10 times better. And the speech she gave Buffy was really good so good job with writing that.
Keep up the good work, please please don't fall off the face of the earth again. The world of readers with no lives gets bored when you don't write.
Author's Response: Aw thanks you touch my heart random reader person. Can you be my personal peguin? I just want to stick you in my pocket and carry you with me forever..... even though for that other reveiw I should tell you to chase other people. ~Noel
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2008 - 01:59 am
Title: Chapter 6: All falls down
Great to see that you're back! I can't wait for more. The last scene was so touching.
Author's Response: Thank you so much I was going for touching. I will be updating on the weekends so stay tuned. ~Noel
Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed
Date: 01/07/2008 - 04:02 pm
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
awww this was a sad chapter.......i really hope you update again soon i cant wait to see what happens next.....the song really fit btw i loved it:)
Author's Response: thank you I am exctied to know too! ~Noel
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 12/23/2007 - 09:43 am
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
Ok seriously Noel you're killing us here! you need to write more!
Author's Response: I know I know! I am sorry for disappearing there for awhile but I am back for good! ~Noel
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 09:38 pm
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
Still upsetting, but hopefully worth it in the end! I think I am getting pretty low, I need a different kind of story of where Buffy doesn't use Spike for her own selfish needs! Know of any out there LOL!!!
Author's Response: seeing as too that would totally be going against her character I dont think ive found one yet but if I do Ill let ya know haha. I promise promise PROMISE it will get better! Just stay with me because its going to be a terribly bumpy ride. ~Noel
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 10/17/2007 - 11:12 am
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
Beautifully written! I got goose bumps, when I read it :) And that song was perfect.... Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you :-) I am so glad you enjoyed it. Telling a writer you gave the goose bumps is one of the best compliments you can give them. The next chapter should be up soon its mostly finished now. ~Noel
Reviewer: veronica
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2007 - 08:08 pm
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
that's just sad. i'm interested to see where this story is going.
Author's Response: it has to get bad before it can get better. now isnt that life lol ~noel
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2007 - 07:48 pm
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
great story, love them with lots of angst, but can't understand women who stay with abusive men
Author's Response: thank you :-) I know its hard to understand but I am currently writing the next chapter and I hope it will help you guys see from her pov~noel
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2007 - 01:10 pm
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
why is she so stupid?! why leave him again?? she knows she loves him and knows that he loves her so why would she go back to that jerk?!
on another note i am loving this story, i am very much hooked and can't wait for the next chapter. and i love how you tied in that song with the chapter and you're recording of it was really good too!
Author's Response: Thanks! lol Everyones very upset with buffy right now. but it gets better i promise! ~noel
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2007 - 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 5: Color Blind
And why did she have to walk out of his life once again ?, what is she committed to her marriage ? why live in hell whan you can reside in heaven. I don't understand , she's not alone in the world there are people that will help her ,so she's going to go back to that gross beast. I know , I can hear yu say wait and see JO,but I just don't know.
Author's Response: My best friend struggles with physical and mental abuse. Her husbands a bastard but she claims over and over and over again to not be able to leave him because she loves him. I dont understand it quite as well as I would like to but I have come to the conclusion-
Women want to fix things.
So the guys that hurt us promise over and over again to change and for awhile it seems better but than it goes back to the way it was. Buffy is dicovering that no matter how hard she tries she cant change her husband just like she couldnt change her father and a sick twisted side of her has almost grown to believe the abuse is normal. that there is nothing wrong with her relationships but something wrong with her, something that makes those men hit her.
With Spike shes always been afraid that if she really let him have all of her that demon would come out inside of him. That she would bring it out in him. She is very lost and very confused. She wont be for much longer though ;-) ~nd
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 09/28/2007 - 06:58 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
really liking this story more & more and lovin the manip
Author's Response: thank you :-) I however have no claim to the manip I just have permisson to use it :-) My talents only go so far.~Noel
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 09/28/2007 - 01:11 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
Sorry, I meant get rid of Liam :)
Author's Response: hahaha I was like...Riley? (thinking in my head) OMG did I put the wrong name in the story again! lol You almost gave me a heat attack! And girl he's gone as soon as I can get him out of here! ~Noel
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 09/28/2007 - 01:08 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
Spike will take care of her now :) and Riley.... please get rid of him!
Author's Response: lol
Reviewer: sirlaughalot1 Signed
Date: 09/28/2007 - 11:47 am
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
this is a really good story! i cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks hun! I am having such a blast writing it!~noel
Reviewer: Your biggest fan
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 11:10 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
wow each chapter I fall more and more in love with this story, it has everything a good romance needs, and I love the flashbacks of when they first met, love the flirting, love the end, the only thing it needs is the next chapter! this one's your best so far keep it up!
Author's Response: awww thanks! :-) The next chapter will be up soon. I have already started on it so it shouldnt be that long to wait. PS The flashbacks are my favorite parts to write! There are more of those to come too! ~Noel ;-)
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
How sad, I hope this doesn't go on much longer. I don't know how I feel about this story yet but I am gonna watch for the next update.
Author's Response: this story is def. angsty and its going to get worse. believe me when I say I know its not for everyone but alos believe me when I say that i am and always will be all about the spuffyness and no matter what happens they will always be together in the end. ~Noel
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 09:43 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Games
She certainly is a case study in contradictions, in one breath she say's Joyce should'nt have bothered because she's married and going to stay married ( to that asshole?) why? than she's crawling into bed with Spike and asking him to kiss her. I want him to , but I also want her to stop being dumb and stay, and not hurt Spike , but than where would the story be . I'm glad u got her away from Angel, but the line "i'm married and going to stay married" upset me , does she intend to go back to Angel, I hope not because that's just sad and all kinds of wrong, damn now i'm depressed. Great story , don't let her go back.
Author's Response: Yeah but thats Buffy for you...one minute shes begging for it and the next shes telling him it means nothing and hes beneath her. the girl is a head case! Im convinced lol oh mymymymymymy there is more B/A to come if I had her stay with Spike the story could be over by the next chapter but hey this is spuffy and its never that easy! Thanks for reading ;-) ~Noel
Reviewer: Your biggest fan
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 04:56 pm
Title: Seasons
....wow....I love this story already! you have me hooked, you are an incredible writer!
Author's Response: :-) thank you so much! I enjoy writing for you guys so much! Your my inspiration~Noel
Reviewer: Your biggest fan
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 04:52 pm
Title: Chapter 3:Rock Star
omg you are evil you cant leave us hanging ilke that noel!
Author's Response: haha I know Im sorry Im sorry but Im writing the next chapter right now as we speak and i promise it will be much much longer! ~Noel
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 3:Rock Star
Yes, did Buffy leave that freak of nature and gone home for help. Did Joyce call Spike deliberately,pleas say yes. give me more, Noel
Author's Response: hahaha I cant give alway all my secrets now can I? But I promise you will be finding out very very soon! ~Noel
