Reviewer: Relurker
Anonymous
Date: 02/03/2016 - 12:16 pm
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
This is a really beautiful story, I loved the way these carachters come alive and the excellent way with words that LadyWenham has. It doesn't matter that it was written so long ago, it deserves the warmer praise!
Reviewer: kamw30
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2014 - 07:46 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Dear David's Mrs.
Now I know it' nearly a decade since you've been out of this fandom - I can't, for love or money remember what I was into that long ago - but I thought it'd be nice to let you know I loved this. I'm glad you wrote the little note at the end because it felt like you put a little of yourself into it. It was gentle and kind. It was generous in characterisation even with it's villians - if you can call Giles and Angel villians.
I loved the open ending. I loved your Buffy. It goes without saying I loved your Spike (let's face it, those of us who read this are always partial to William).
So......anyway........... well done 9 years, 3 months later.
(Praise never gets old :-)
Reviewer: Saggit
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/2009 - 03:43 pm
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Very nice, tightly written, and with good character voices. I also agree: it makes good sense to leave Spike's decision unknown at the end, because it really doesn't matter. All that matters has already taken place, and has found its conclusion.
If you need a future beta for a non-all-human, look me up. ;)
Reviewer: analise
Anonymous
Date: 08/28/2009 - 07:56 pm
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Thanks for a wonderful story. Its friday and my brain is fried so I can't really review well, but I enjoyed it, especially since they weren't crazy in the sack the whole time (makes it really hard to skip parts and still find the plot). I also like leaving it up the read whichever he decided. Me, I'm actually ok with it either way.
Thanks again.
Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 06/08/2009 - 04:47 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
great story. i liked how you showed the similarities between angel and angelus in terms of playing with peoples heads.
Reviewer: Zaira
Anonymous
Date: 10/22/2008 - 03:17 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I just came across your story looking for some 'post chosen' fic, and I'm stunned. This story is great! It was more believable than the most in the characters of Buffy and Spike. I liked that you showed the struggle it it for Buffy to finally accept Spike, cause lots of fics just sort of jump to this sudden realization out of nowhere. And I liked the fine line you draw between souled and soulless Spike, cause there obviously is one. I don''t always like Dawn but you wrote her great and funny as a Brat that DOESN'T whine all the time. All of the banter was just really and Spike's snarks where just really genius.
I have seldomly read a fic thought through this well and written this great, without lengthening it with endless repetition of philosophy. Of reading your others and hoping maybe you might write more one day? That's really a talent you've got there!
Reviewer: Elena
Anonymous
Date: 09/29/2008 - 08:01 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I loved this story! I appreciate the open ending, but of course, he does NOT need the soul ;). I'm off to check your stories to see if you ever did do a sequel. If not, please!
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/2008 - 09:34 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Just finished this story, and I loved it. I like the fact that you left it open ended. And yes, you're right -- they only thing that matters is that Buffy realized that she loved him with or without the soul.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 10:23 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Oh I love it, but wish you would have said if he chose the soul or not,
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 10:04 am
Title: Part Twelve
Oh I hope she does, it will hurt him if she doesn't
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 09:51 am
Title: Part Eleven
Oh I hate Angel
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 09:41 am
Title: Part Ten
Oh please don't tell me what Angel said made him leave.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 09:31 am
Title: Part Nine
Oh I loved it, but Spike is right in a way about Angel.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 09:16 am
Title: Part Eight
well that was an easy 20 wonder how she figured it our exactly, even though she said he looked her in the eye did he not do that the past year.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 08:29 am
Title: Part Seven
oh that was good the way Buffy put it to GIles.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 06:45 am
Title: Part Six
oh I loved it.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/12/2007 - 06:32 am
Title: Part Five
Looks like Buffy and Spike are going to be having another chat.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/11/2007 - 08:03 pm
Title: Part Four
we she didn't say she loved him but it seemed like she was willing to try,
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/11/2007 - 07:28 pm
Title: Part Two
why do i get the feeling his soul is gone
Reviewer: Toni
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/2007 - 11:07 pm
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I really liked this story. I don't know how old it is, I found it by "random" selection.
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 04/24/2007 - 07:17 pm
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Oh I love this. I agree that the premise of Buffy ripping the amulet from Spike is unlikely, but I love what you've done with it, particularly the conclusion that Buffy should be able to love him whether he has the soul or not, and that it has to be his decision whether he gets it back again. I like the jealous and resentful Angel too, so true to character.
Reviewer: Tanja
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2007 - 12:43 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Beautiful story. I like the open ending and most of all I loved to read about Buffy finally realizing she was in love with Spike regardless of the soul. I like to think that he'll remain soulless. Even though it was an amazing gesture he did on the show to get his soul back, I liked his not-ensouled version way better and I honestly believe he proved himself enough... he doesn't need a soul to be a good guy. I really hope there'll be a sequel to this story, it was truly a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Devin Signed
Date: 12/31/2006 - 04:50 pm
Title: Part Two
Haha, I was wondering about whether the Lord of the Rings thing was a part of the fic or just a nerdy reference. :) Because I was enjoying them immensely, haha. Cool fic, interesting idea, reading on right away!
Reviewer: Rose
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/2006 - 03:58 pm
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Very well done !
Reviewer: Shayhop
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2006 - 08:07 am
Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. Great job with staying with the characters. Very believable.
