Reviewer: Jane
Anonymous
Date: 07/08/2011 - 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Sweet
Reviewer: Racheal
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2011 - 09:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1
That was really awesome! You should turn it into a long story!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 - 06:08 am
Title: Chapter 1
Very touching, and at the end, a lot of hope for a better future.
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2011 - 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1
very sweet, and very touching.
Reviewer: bettyb Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 - 04:55 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Lovely! It's practically perfect as is, but a second part, where we discover how and why Spike has returned (and what exactly he is now) would be interesting too. Of course, I'll be satisfied if you just decide to leave it as is; it's just that it raised some questions (as you no doubt intended!) Bravo!
Author's Response: maybe I will, I've been working on finishing up my old WIPs but this one came out of nowhere and I had to write it. Thank you for the suggestion and the awesome review :)
Reviewer: Devin
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2011 - 10:44 am
Title: Chapter 1
You did it again, sweet. This was awesome. Had my heart at the end, it did.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!
Reviewer: Edgehead
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2011 - 10:18 am
Title: Chapter 1
I REALLY love it....!!!!
Would you mind if I make you a storyart for it?
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Of course - and i'm about to show my ignorance here - is story art like a banner or something?
xx thanks for the review