Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 12:58 am
Title: unforseen
20160131 junda
Reviewer: mrichard
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/2012 - 03:43 pm
Title: progress
You are a wonderful writer please finish this. Thank you
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 03/31/2010 - 05:17 am
Title: progress
at first i thought the story was draggin along, but as the chapters go on the story gets better n better, more please..im hooked! :)
Reviewer: Nicka
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2008 - 01:51 am
Title: progress
I like, and want more, please update soon.
Reviewer: jen
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/2008 - 01:38 am
Title: progress
yay a new chapter!! loved it! can't wait for more!! please don't make us wait another four years for the next one :D
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/03/2008 - 08:34 am
Title: blood bares all
Ah.. sadly the last chapter for now.
At it seems a bit of progress is made on the Spuffy front; Spike is believing Buffy now. Maybe you could say Spike got his crumb: Buffy acknowledged to be jealous.
Lilith may be a hard opponent to fight.
Hopefully Buffy and Spike will be able to do it together.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/03/2008 - 08:12 am
Title: stalking seduction
Lilith is indeed very keen to go into the house; too bad Spike doesn't see that clearly, still meeting Lilith...
I hope Dawn's plan will work; but Buffy must tell Spike how she feels. Otherwise it won't help her / the plan won't help.
Thought so...plan failed. But Buffy saw Lilith's true face now.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/03/2008 - 07:49 am
Title: venom
Or not the FE as I know it? Because this one can touch things (and maybe so destroying the crypt herself).
Lilith then... oh no, I don't like 'hitting' her for Spike. At last Buffy is jealous but that can have an effect Spike won't like
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/03/2008 - 07:30 am
Title: the double-edged sword
I had to giggle about Spike's incident with the chocolate sauce. Mmmm Spike with chocolate. Buffy was very worried that Spike had melted *g*
Grrr... if Buffy only had dared to speak, instead she let Spike go. Silly girl...
But who has destroyed Spike's crypt? Did Xander dare to do it?
Oh my, the first evil arrived.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/03/2008 - 07:08 am
Title: foot-in-mouth-syndrome
Good to see Buffy hasn't forget what she noticed before, her always (very often at last) doing what the other want. Therefore I loved the lecture Xander got :) Buffy didn't even have to mention that Xander was the one that tried to rape her in the past.
Fun when Buffy was stalking Spike and got surprised as well Spike confronting Buffy about the 'slayer's dream' *gg*
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 06:23 pm
Title: shame and the old clichι
Ah... at last Buffy was sorry that she went for the nose again ;-)
Awe, that went well :) And at last she knows When in the hell was she going to learn to listen to her gut instincts, instead of listening to everyone else?
Enjoyed Buffy's thoughts..
And then you've fooled me, it was only a dream ... (even if Spike was there; maybe that triggered it). Good thing indeed that Spike knows now that Buffy still wants him.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 05:56 pm
Title: forgiven
Awe, Buffy found him (well kind of if you think Dawn told Buffy). And she asked him to forgive her... that was what he needed. Too bad it was only a dream.
A good thing that Buffy talked to Giles, telling him the same (that she loves Spike). So maybe his dream isn't so farfetched.
Ops.. busted now :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 05:31 pm
Title: point of fact
I wonder if that was Spike that Buffy sensed out of the crypt.
I'm glad to see that Spike still loves Buffy... that gives me hope.
And almost Buffy caught him... maybe it was indeed Spike she saw.
Evil cliffhanger... Dawn under attack.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 04:53 pm
Title: breaking it down
Clever Dawn, she made Buffy talking and admitting some things. And now Dawn knows for sure that Buffy wants Spike back.
Oh and Dawn got missed. Is Spike busted now?
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 04:39 pm
Title: reflections of abandonment
So there may be more to the necklace then I first thought... and Dawn kept her word, Buffy doesn't have a clue about Dawn meeting Spike.
If Spike only knew how much Buffy is missing him.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 04:15 pm
Title: what dreams may come
Glad to see Buffy did some thinking while Spike was gone and can - at last to herself - confess that she missed him.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 - 03:51 pm
Title: unforseen
I'm trying to catch up with your story :)
So Spike doesn't have the chip any longer well he doesn't need it. ~ I loved both POV at the begin of the story / this chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 04/23/2008 - 10:11 pm
Title: progress
I enjoyed this, please keep writing!!!
Reviewer: Bryntrev
Anonymous
Date: 04/17/2008 - 11:31 am
Title: progress
"You need to get this god-damned thing off before I rip it off of you." and finally an I love you! ^_^
I liked this scene between the two of them. It was funny, touching and irritating - just like our favorite couple! Great dialogue and interplay between the two of them. I also like that Buffy realizes how much her past actions have hurt Spike (hated that on the show - they were especially vicious to him... weren't they were supposed to be the *good guys*?)
Also liked your attention to detail regarding the history with Lillith. Looking forward to the new chapter. :)
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 04/16/2008 - 08:24 pm
Title: progress
i can't tell you how thrilled i was to see this updated and a great chapter it was , as a teenager i had read all about the legend of Lilith and it's a great idea that your using this myth ( or is it) in this story. Update again soon.
Reviewer: crazycaunck44
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2008 - 02:15 pm
Title: blood bares all
Another fantastic chapter to a fantastic story. I've really enjoyed re-reading this and seeing where things have been changed up. Also, loved how Clem refers to Dawn as a "little human", too cute. Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Chapter 13 will be coming up soon!
Reviewer: Bryntrev
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2008 - 11:43 pm
Title: blood bares all
Great chapter. I liked the comparison (and Buffy's resulting jealousy) regarding Lira/Lilith & Dru - knowing that would be the only type of woman that might draw Spike's interest away from Buffy. I also liked how Buffy admitted needing Spike, rather than just saying that she loved him. I think that him feeling wanted and needed is just as important and is overlooked a lot of the time.
Looking forward to your next update. :)
Author's Response: If there is ONE thing that is DAMN sure to result in Buffy's jealousy, it's seeing Spike attracted to a woman who bears resemblance to his girlfriend of a hundred years. If Buffy threw a fit about Drusilla back during Something Blue, when they were under a spell, just think of how peaked she'd be now :) And as for Buffy needing him -- I've studied Spike. And I've identified myself with Spike. And what has always captured me about him is the same for me: Spike needs to be needed. He needs to be loved, too, of course, but he needs to know that he's important in someone else's life. Even if it doesn't amount to love :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2008 - 09:58 pm
Title: blood bares all
i was going to plead with u to please continue this fic which i have been following for a long time, than I read Katamaphones reviews and all I can see is ditto. Please don't leave us hanging again, I really like this fic, and always wished for a continuation.
Author's Response: Chapter 13 will be up next week :) Chapter 14, hopefully, will be completed and up the week after that :D Thanks for reviewing! AND for being patient with me!
Reviewer: Tamara
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2008 - 04:46 pm
Title: blood bares all
Buffy really does need to occassionally crack a book , doesn't she? If she had she'd know who Lilith is.
Author's Response: Buffy's never really had a reason to know who Lilith was. It was never exactly a concern for her during the whole world-saving spiel. And even if she did see her name in a book, it was only in passing, just a brief glimpse before she jumped to something else.
Reviewer: katamaphone
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2008 - 02:39 pm
Title: blood bares all
My dear girl; do I dare hope for a new chapter in the near future?.............. This is a story I have followed for a long time. Many times I have re-read it and hoped for a continuation. I'm very pleased to see you haven't given up on it. ..........I very much enjoy your writing style. Your dialogue is natural and very easy to read and your fight scenes are realistic and flow well. The words that you write I can see as "pictures", or scenes in my head. You're very talented and I can't wait to read more. This feels like an epic in the making::)) My favourite kind of story to read.
Author's Response: You DO dare hope! Chapter 13 is ready and waiting on the burner! I'm hoping to finish writing Chapter 14 before posting it, but even if I don't, it'll be going up sometime next week :)
