Reviewer: Mia
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/2008 - 05:33 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
Not to be rude or anything but, can you get on with it already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: janice
Anonymous
Date: 09/03/2007 - 12:51 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
you are A-MAZING. please more? please? please? ill be glad to fill up this red box full of 'pleases' if it means just one more chapter of this marvelous story..
Reviewer: Tia
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/2007 - 08:04 am
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
Oh this is another beautiful story by you, sweetie. I couldn't stop reading it since this morning and I am hoping, begging you kindly to update soon... please?! I noticed that you last updated this piece a few months ago.....I hope life is treating you well and that you will find the time to update this beauty soon..
You are an excellent writer!! Keep it up, dear! I can't wait to read more of your writing!!
Reviewer: jennifer
Anonymous
Date: 04/19/2007 - 12:02 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
oh i just love this story. i started reading it last night and couldn't hardly stop to go to bed. this is the best fic i've ever read so far! it's just so different from what everyone else is putting out there. hurry with the updates please.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2007 - 10:48 am
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
I was offline almost three days so I'm behind reading. Now I wonder why is story is under "recently updated" but without a new chapter. I saw some reviews that are a bit confusing about you not longer writing this story bad I don't see any A/N from you. Could you maybe edit the last chapter to make it clear what's the matter?
Thank you! It would be really sad to see the stories not finished so.
Reviewer: Mac 1
Anonymous
Date: 01/10/2007 - 10:16 pm
Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you
Did you say that your work is there but all wonky? I have, on occasion, fixed suddenly and unaccountably wonky work by doing a complete change of font and margins, that type of thing. I have no idea why the wonkiness occurred in the first place, but I was able to fix it that way. Of course the fix was trial and error so what actually worked is still completely unclear to me. Great help, huh? :-) I hope you are able to recover it. If not, the detailed draft sounds great. Thanks. :-)
Reviewer: jenny
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/2007 - 11:25 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
*sighh* you ROCK
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:08 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: J
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2006 - 11:15 am
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
Great chapter. And yeah Spike is selfish, but that has always been a part of his character. He's still too damn hot to hate!!! Can't wait for another update!
Reviewer: Mollie
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2006 - 08:06 am
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
Great chapter!! So much pain!! I cant wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2006 - 07:55 am
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
So bittersweet...
Talk is good. And Spike even managed to answer one question without talking.
At one point Buffy has to make a leap of faith in the future. Sometimes you'll have to risk something if you want to get something worth.
Loved the update, looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: tis-kit
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2006 - 06:24 am
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
I do love this story.
Thanks for another enjoyable update.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 10:29 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
more please
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 07:53 pm
Title: Ch. 30 Hindsight's 20/20
Will she believe him... or protect her heart.
Enjoying the update.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/20/2006 - 12:20 am
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 09:10 pm
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
more please
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 09:06 am
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
Still with you.
Intense chapter. So Gabriel got his will and gave Buffy her gift even if she didn't want to. But I'm glad Buffy stopped herself in time. And not only because I want her back with Spike: If she had uses Gabriel she would have regret it later because it only was because her and Spike, not about Gabriel.
Spike still has a long way to go but when he stays in NY he has a chance to work on that.
I have an entry in my LJ with some links to LJ Comms etc. If you need them let me know.
Reviewer: v4viper
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 09:01 am
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
Still with you and loving the story
Reviewer: jo
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 08:01 am
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
wow this is very good ( dont' like Gabriel , no matter how nice he is ) I love angst especially when it's Spike hurting Buffy, but he was really harsh in the beginning, and now i feel sorry for Buffy because she wants to be able to be with him , but trusting him again is something i don't think i would be able to do . can't wait for more and please don't forget "At your Doorstep' now that one has angst.
Reviewer: tis-kit
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 05:53 am
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
I don't hate Spike. Yeah, he's been a bastard, but he is turning things around and in doing so he is desperately trying to recapture one of the few good things he once had.
As to the beta thing, I can't in good conscience offer myself as I am no writer and it's a long time since I studied English; however I'm more than happy to re-read stuff and being English I could perhaps help with Britifying Spike! Feel free to email me at tista@he2.co.uk. Otherwise, I'm sure if you post a request at the forums a real beta would be delighted to help.
Reviewer: Nicki
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2006 - 11:04 pm
Title: Ch. 29 What are we doing here?
I'm loving this and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2006 - 03:01 am
Title: Ch. 28 Hello, Love
Gabriel knows he is in 'danger' now, now that Spike is back. Therefore the superglue. Good for Spike because Buffy is annoyed now :)
Knowing Buffy has a boyfriend now hurts Spike; but he has no right to because he was with Drusilla. But Buffy doesn't love Gabriel, only trusts him. That's important but not enough.
Spike has to win her trust back but I don't know how.
Reviewer: tis-kit
Anonymous
Date: 11/17/2006 - 01:11 pm
Title: Ch. 28 Hello, Love
Your use of language is amazing; so lyrical and fluid.
You're one of those people who can write about emotions and regardless of whether there is any plot I would read it solely for the pleasure of your words.
In case I haven't made it clear, I enjoyed this update, a lot. More soon please?
Author's Response: Haha, if only my English teacher thought the same thing. Really though, thank you so much for the compliment, and more will be coming soon =]
Reviewer: J
Anonymous
Date: 11/17/2006 - 11:04 am
Title: Ch. 28 Hello, Love
WOOOOO doggy!!! That was a heavy chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Pretty pretty please, with a cherry on top!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next update'll be coming soon.
Reviewer: Roxy
Anonymous
Date: 11/17/2006 - 07:12 am
Title: Ch. 28 Hello, Love
*snifffs* poor Spikey...and also poor Buffy...poor them! You know, on the one hand I like Gabriel kinda, I mean he's sorta kidna Spike-ish, and somehow I see him in my head as Wood, despite the image you showed. But on the other hand I really hate him, because he's standing between Buffy and Spike! Gahh! Anyway, I Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, Gabriel's one of the characters that you hate to love (at least, he's that for me), but you like him anyways.
