Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 09/11/2012 - 07:23 pm
Title: Chapter 22
Oh, you big tease, ending the epilogue before the big finish! Oh well, I loved this story. An excellent job balancing the tension, angst, sappy stuff and smut.
Could use a good editing; plenty of grammar errors, typos, etc. (Example, at the top of this chapter, I'm pretty sure Buffy's wearing Spike's button-up shirt, not shorts, with her purple boy shorts!).
Author's Response: HA! I just did a read through and fixed some issues that were previously unnoticed. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 09/11/2012 - 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 17
Oh, boy, Buffy's a cowardly bitch. Oh, and in a prior chapter you used "bemused" to mean "amused..." this is wrong. Bemused means "confused." Common error and it took me a long time to get that straight myself!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: analise
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2009 - 08:31 pm
Title: Chapter 12
spike wrote twilight about BTVS... rotfl... dangerously hard, between and through my hacking cough. (I'm sick, this definitely brightened my day).
All together: awesome, if not slightly painful.
Author's Response: You know the funny part? I actually wrote that chappie before I read Twilight if my memore serves me right. Go figure. Anway, Im glad to hear that you enjoyed the story and that it helped lift your spirits just a smidge on a sick day. Thanks for being kind enough to leave such a sweet review!
Reviewer: Em
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/2008 - 02:28 pm
Title: Chapter 22
*applause*
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Em! I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Signed
Date: 07/09/2008 - 01:55 pm
Title: Chapter 1
LUV IT!!!! What is the address to that house!?!
Author's Response: LMAO! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Adrianna
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/2008 - 02:42 am
Title: Chapter 22
That was a great story. Would be awesome to see what happens after the proposal if you are up for a sequal!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Adrianna! I'm pleased as punch that you enjoyed the story, it's been done for a while and it's very exciting to get a review now! Sadly, I have too many other story ideas so I don't think I will ever consider doing a sequel, but you never know. Thanks again and I do hope that you check out some of my other stories, you might find something else you like.
Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed
Date: 03/06/2008 - 05:05 am
Title: Chapter 8
OH NO! I can't believe you just left it there, if this wasn't complete and i could read on, i would so hit you!
Was also completely H.O.T With capital EVERYTHING!
Author's Response: Lucky you, huh? And me, I guess, that the story is finihsed and your threats won't escalate into violence! Thanks so much, glad you liked!
Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed
Date: 03/06/2008 - 05:03 am
Title: Chapter 7
Really know how to get a girl worked up, don't ya? That was just so good!
Author's Response: I know, I am totally evil...Sotia tells me often! lol! Thanks so much for the review, hun!
Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed
Date: 03/01/2008 - 06:50 am
Title: Chapter 4
mmm, groping is always of the good! lol! Loved thia chapter. i just found out now that i cant remember any of this story! lol! Luckily i'm reading it again, to refresh the memory of its oh so hottness! lol!
Author's Response: Glad you are loving the story, especially the second time around! Thanks so much for the wonderful reviews that you have left thus far!!!
Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:48 am
Title: Chapter 3
mmmm, hotness! lol! Poor Spike, wanting all of Buffy's firmness and having to pretend he doesn't know what came over him! lol!
Author's Response: Yes, poor pitiful Spike...I should go comfort him! :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:46 am
Title: Chapter 2
Aw! Spike is so cute when he's over protective! Eugh, hate Angel, but know that isnt going to last long so its all good! lol! See you in a min! lol!
Author's Response: Yeah, Angel is most certainly not a likeable character in this story; unlike most of my other stories. Thankfully, he doesn't last too long!
Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:43 am
Title: Chapter 1
Gave me goosepimples! lol! Promised i would review, and didn't have time yesterday, so gonna do all the chapters that i have read today! lol! Really liked how u explained everything, and their first meeting, so Spike! lol! See you next chapter! *wink*
Author's Response: YaY! You just made my night so happy! I just came into work, sat down and decided to check my email and...Whoopie: New Reviews! Thanks so much!!!!
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 05:00 am
Title: Chapter 22
::drops popcorn and runs out the door for a ciggy:: THAT WAS SOO AWESOME!!!! i was kind of "ummmm" in the middle of the story but THANK GOD it ended the way it did. and you never brought Willow back. that kind of bummed me. and i kind of did wonder what happened with Riley. but just this as an ending chapter was so great and heartfelt! i loved that you ended it with her dancing and getting caught. LMAO GREAT JOB SERENITY!!! A+!
::runs back out before brother catches ciggy smell::
Author's Response: Glad you approve! After finishing the story, I realized I had forgotten about Willow and Riley; however, I was really really really ready to mark this as complete. Since you read it all at once, you didn't have to suffer from the long bouts of nothingness and dealing with my lack of muse. It just needed to be done with. Thanks again for all the wonderful reviews!
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:45 am
Title: Chapter 21
guess what i did this whole chapter? sat here with my feet up, eating popcorn, and smiling/giggling like a mad hatter. and i have to be quiet cuz people are in bed in this house. and the laughing caused me to choke a little so i had to put the popcorn down around the time all the sex started happening.
and OMG! those are his famous last words: “Otherwise, you’d know the whole pride thing was just a smokescreen.”
every Spike fan worth their salt knows those words!! he has no pride what-so-ever when it comes to love and Buffy. i'm so glad you put that in there.
that and: “What the bloody hell?” LMAO see when you put that, i picture the time he chained Buffy up along with Dru and threatened to stake her for her. and she goes on like "the only chance you had with me was when i was unconscious" and he just goes off!! major laughage! okay, now back to my popcorn and QUIET giggle fest.
Author's Response: I can so picture you laughing so hard that you choked on popcorn, fairly easy since Ive been there myself.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 20
YES!!! THANK GOD!!!! GET THE BABOON OFF HER!!!
and you brought Fred and Wes in that's so sweet! i loved Fred and i cried when she died! when Wes died...it was more of a salute. he had fought the good fight but those last six months had just changed him so much. he went from a poncey, cry from a punch kind of man that you laughed at, to someone you really didn't want to mess with. he'd become harder and more respected in my opinion. and to have Giles and Jenny at her party was so sweet!!! great chapter!
Author's Response: There, I see you are finally happy now that the lumbering baffon has been removed from the story. I, too, cried like a baby when Fred died. Still do as a matter of fact whenever I watch that episode. Of course, I liked illyria, but she's no Fred. Wes turned out to be someone totally hot and badass, which is amazing considering the blubbering idiot he was at first. Glad this chapter was up to your standards, dear.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:13 am
Title: Chapter 19
p.s. brown paper bag=i COULDN'T BREATHE!
Author's Response: I'm shipping one to you as we speak! LoL!
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 19
okay, i went back and read the poems. and oh! my! gawd! i can sooo hear his voice in my head cuz i've heard his poetry on tape and........::grabs brown paper bag::..........................he makes me wanna cry and go to sleep at the same damn time. i have actually went to sleep with James Marsters in my ear! it's a heavenly expeirence! he's just so soothing! okay, i've wiped away my tears *seriously i cried. he's that good*. chapter 20!
Author's Response: I haven't been fortunate enough to fall into slumber with his beautiful voice in my ear, I can totally visualize him doing that poem.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 03:56 am
Title: Chapter 19
i couldn't do it! i couldn't read the poems! they were just too personal and frankly, too embarassing. and i can NOT watch someone emabarass themselves. that's why i'm a writer, not an actor/singer. but i know, I KNOW, i'm gonna have to go back and see if it was mentioned on who that brunette was. i'm thinking maybe Dru? i'm gonna have to build up the courage here and woo! could he be my teacher!
Author's Response: Although I have covered most of the reviews that you have graciously left for this story and Breathless, the emotion and thought that you put into them still astounds me. Thank you, again, for letting me know what you are feeling and thinking while reading my stories.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 03:41 am
Title: Chapter 18
to quote Ron Weasley: "She needs to sort out her priorities!" i don't think you've made her out to be a "hateful, selfish, demon-woman" but i have called her a bitch on many occasion, cuz she hurt Spike and i LOVE Spike so when Spike gets hurt, I get all defendy. lol but i would looove to read that review though!
p.s. plan Spuffy *snicker* LOL and i would never EVER say this: “You’re the one I need, Riley.” she's not in love with him! i'd just be friends. end of story. i know that she has abandonment issues but i do too. and i still wouldn't settle for someone i'm not in love with, no matter how painful it ended b/c hopefully they'd understand. this is a long ass p.s. so i'm gonna go....next chappy!
Author's Response: Yea, glad you understand where I am going with this...lots of sordid pasts and tumultuous emotions to deal with and whatnot.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 03:29 am
Title: Chapter 17
don't hate you...i hate her!!!! stupid bitch!!!!! *mind if i run after Spike?*
Author's Response: Good to know, was expecting something to jump out of the computer and strangle me for being evil.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 16
I’m sorry, but I just can’t. It’s too much, please forgive me.
*sighs...pushing anger away* OK, let's pick this apart shall we? first off, that STUPID BLONDE BINT say's "I'm sorry". well if she had stayed instead of running off like a COWARD, there'd be nothing to be sorry about now would there? Next. "I just can't." YEAH, THERE'S AN EXPLANATION!!!! that's like you saying no and the other person saying why and you saying because. IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE! that is NOT a reason!!!! Secondly, "It's too much." what's too much?? all you've been through? everything you two have fought for? trying to be with each other when everyone was telling you NO? SETTLING FOR RILEY?! that's just SICK! you are a coward and you need to face the music!!! grow up! BE WITH SPIKE!!!! Lastly, "Please forgive me." UM.....NO!!!!! not until you come up with a good reason for being a stuipid bitch and running from the only guy that made you happy! then maybe i will!!!
*sighs, shakes hands out of nervousness and lights a cigarette. folds paper, hands it to Serenity* mail that to Buffy will ya?
Author's Response: Wow...nicely performed rant, Mon. As you will come to realize while reading my stories...I am an uber evil bint who likes to drag my readers threw turmoil before making with the happies. Just be patient!
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 02:45 am
Title: Chapter 15
and i sort of ended up here too! and so did Serenity! and Sotia! and SG.....do you think he'll invite us all in????? *knocks on door*
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Don't I wish...daily. Thanks babe!
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 02:35 am
Title: Chapter 11
i said chapters but i meant paragraphs!!! honestly!!! why would i tell her to run from Spike? ::scoffs:: i mean, have u seen him naked???!!!
Author's Response: I picked up on what you were trying to convey, no worries.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 02:32 am
Title: Chapter 14
like i said Joyce is a liar!! i knew it!!! can i smack her? like for real? just BAM! now drink ur gin! bitch! i'm like sooo mad right now cuz remember when i said she slipped on the seven year thing? uh-huh i knew she was hiding something! and you haven't made it any easier Tori! first they were too old/young, now they're student/teacher!! i just want to pull my hair and skip to the big finish! *goes off mumbling*
Author's Response: And now my job is done! I love evil cliffhangers and impossible situations...Lots of ANGST! WooHoo! Joyce is very much evil so far, but promise she'll get better.
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 02/24/2008 - 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 13
tricky tricky! so glad he was there! ewww on riley!! i like that you put Willow and Tara together, even if it's beginning, shy Tara. and huh! i wonder where she is?! *twirls hair*
Author's Response: Yeah, wonder of wonders?!
