Reviewer: Kirsty Signed
Date: 06/11/2009 - 12:16 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Buffy walking to a tree was absolutely hilarious.. And probably the mist embarrassing thing to do. Spike's reaction was perfect, both times.
Like the story so far. Hopefully there will be more Spike soon.
I also like Cordy & Co. A good story needs a bitch or two.
Author's Response: Glad you liked Buffy and Spike's reactions to each other. There will be more spike soon we just have to round out the characters a little first. but don't worry. once he's there he's not going away. he's crazy like that. glad you like the villians too :) thanks!
Reviewer: Pet Signed
Date: 06/11/2009 - 11:26 am
Title: Chapter 3
I really like this story so far. It's a great start. Looking forward to see what happens next. Hope you'll update again soon.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Pet that means alot. ur stories are great and hopefully i will :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/11/2009 - 07:47 am
Title: Chapter 3
I like their goals :)
Even if they won't make it (but I hope they will) it's good to see them 'fighting back' now (regarding Cordelia). And Faith will be a big help for Buffy and Willow.
Enjoyed :)
Author's Response: glad you liked the goals. It wasn't an original intention with the story but while i was writing it just fit. glad to see it works. glad you enjoyed yourself :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/11/2009 - 07:37 am
Title: Chapter 2
I hope Faith would become a new friend for Buffy and Willow; glad to see I was right. This way they'll have some fun this summer - including getting back to Cordelia and her followers. :)
Author's Response: ya great guess about Faith. I wanted to make her friend not foe and she's def a good friend to have around to shake things up.
Reviewer: msspikester Signed
Date: 06/11/2009 - 12:58 am
Title: Chapter 3
I don't think the bitch squad knows what they're in for. Now it's 3 against 3...even playing field. Still trying to figure out all the maintenance men's identities. Got Spike (yummy!), Wesley (or Xander?), Robin Wood or Gunn (both chocolatey goodness!), and I originally thought it was Angel, but now I believe it's the adorable Doyle. Am I guessing correctly?! Keep going, I am very interested.
Author's Response: Good guesses. I won't tell you if your wrong or right but i will say most of ur first guesses are on the right path. hehe i know that's evil but i like a little mystery still. you'll find out soon. promise. i'm glad you like it. thanks so much and i'll have more soon :)
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 - 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Especially considering it's your first story! You're already much better than I was when I started lol There's lots of possibilities, I can't wait to see where you go with it :)
Heehee I like that Buffy and Willow were both taken by the hotness of the maintenance guys :P It's nice to see Wes in the story too! Mmmm, Marlboro Man Wes was awfully yummy.
Aww poor Buffy walking into the tree *giggles* Hey, it would've happened to me too - I feel her pain lol
Keep up the great work, hon! *smoochies and hugs*
Author's Response: Ooh yay Pagan! I'm glad you found it here. Wouldn't have gotten here w/o your help :) *hugs* Thanks for the uber compliment :) ur amazing. and rugged Wes was def yummy hence why i went w/ him *sigh* Ok must write ch. 4 so i can get it to u asap!
Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 - 11:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Wooot!!
Great start! It is great so far. BTW I laughed my ass off when Buffy walked into a tree (it is something I would do if faced with Spike too)
And then I laughed AGAIN when Spike said "Crazy chit just walked herself right into a tree." That was good.
I can't wait to read more. Great job!
*Hugs*
Author's Response: Huggles!!! Glad you liked it Chanty. Ya i kinda figured that's what i'd do so why not make Buffy do it. Glad you liked Spikes line. I think he's funny :) hehe. thanks!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 - 07:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1
I like the start, it was fun :)
Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: Jake Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 - 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Little brat, you could have told me I needed to be logged in to review for you. LOL could have done this earlier. I really do like it and can't wait for more. Update fast please! I like the concept and your characters seem well-rounded already.
Author's Response: I'm a brat only for you :) I'm glad you liked it and i will update soon. You'll just have to wait your turn like everyone else
Reviewer: Spikelissa Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 - 06:32 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Sneaky only excepting signed reviews lol! I'm so very proud of you! As I told you, not one for AH. Wellll, seeing that your story is definitely a good start...maybe...But I'm still supernatural stories at heart kinda gal, lol I hope that my beta skills are ok and that we continue to work together! Amazing and can't wait to see the rest!
If I was Buffy...I would have passed out, or got week in the knees and fell right where I was standing, or ran backwards straight into a tree. So ya I'm there with ya Buffy with the total Hotness that's Spike!
Author's Response: Thanks Lissa!!!! I know your a supernatural girl at heart but i'm so glad you like mine :) makes me feel extra special. and your beta skills are wonderful you know that. and we will work together more. you ain't gettin rid of me that easy :)
Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed
Date: 06/10/2009 - 06:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1
This is a pretty good beginning, not bad for your first story. I don't blame Buffy, if I saw that man, I'd be bumping into trees, tripping over my feet, all that embarrassing stuff...lol! I'm sure he'll soon realize that she's not like the other girls, and hopefully Faith is just a new friend, and not competition. I think Buffy and Willow could use another friend. Can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! That means alot since i read your stuff all the time. Thanks! You'll just have to wait and see about Faith :) i ended the chapter there for a reason *rubs hands together evilly* glad you like it. i'll be added more soon :)
