Reviewer: Lily
Anonymous
Date: 04/13/2012 - 03:52 pm
Title: Chapter 9
I'm DYING for an update on this story! It's so, so cute! And Spike so, so hot! :)
Reviewer: Clara
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/2012 - 03:41 am
Title: Chapter 9
I'm so happy that you updated! I'm loving the relationship that's developing between them. Can't wait to see more chapters! :)
Reviewer: Guest
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2012 - 06:41 pm
Title: Chapter 9
OMG two chapters in as many days, I Love this story it's my favourite!!! Thanks, god I love this Spike and Buffy just perfect....please keep it coming:))
Reviewer: Albie
Anonymous
Date: 03/13/2012 - 08:10 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Another great chapter. Their sexiness is great, but the tenderness that bookends every move is what makes it all the hotter. I liked Spike admitting his fears at the end of the chapter, showing much more below the swagger and confidence. Same with the shy boy when meeting Joyce. All great. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: VETTE
Anonymous
Date: 03/11/2012 - 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 9
They're too cute together, Spike has the right idea to court his girl and make her realize that her first time should be special and memorable. I would love to see them go on a date that Spike planned filled with flowers, dancing and a location that they can call their own. Row a boat, carve their names to a tree, have a picnic with blind-fold taste testing. I'm a romantic sap, but the way you write this story, it brings it out in me. Look forward to more.
Reviewer: VETTE
Anonymous
Date: 03/11/2012 - 01:55 am
Title: Chapter 8
Love the pace taken to discover their sexuality together. Spike being grown up enough to know that Buffy is exploring new territory in physical pleasure and is allowing her to emotionally catch up to what she is feeling. Buffy's "first's" in their relationship are a big responsibility and severe damage can be done to her confidence as a woman if not handled delicately. Love how sweet they are together and how Spike is proving to be a man by savoring the innocent moments of his virginal girlfriend.
Reviewer: Mosaicmaker Signed
Date: 03/10/2012 - 06:14 pm
Title: Chapter 3
I feel a little foolish admititng this, but I don't ndertsand what Buffy meant when she pointed out that Spike's hair wasn't naturally white. I'm assuming the voting thing was her indicating she was legal but the rest, I am pathetically in the dark.
However ; this a fan-fucking-tastic story so far (and I see no reason why it won't continue to be) so please keep up the good work?
Mosaicmaker
Author's Response: She can vote, meaning she is over eighteen and his hair is bleached not naturally white, meaning that he is not all that old. It was just a little teasing since he was all caught up on the six years age difference.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. :)
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 03/10/2012 - 04:05 am
Title: Chapter 9
I absolutely love this story - so pleased to see another chapter. Started the day just right.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/10/2012 - 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 9
They are too cute! I love how he keeps pushing her little baby steps along in their getting-to-love-making and all of her captured reactions to it. She is so innocent! Were any of us ever that innocent? Hard to remember. Love it. Update soon!
Reviewer: prhotness Signed
Date: 03/09/2012 - 11:45 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 03/09/2012 - 08:11 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Well, that had to be the hottest hand-job I've ever read. Thanks for the smutty update!
Reviewer: jmf1029
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/2012 - 07:20 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Yea! I was so happy to see another update. This is by far my favorite Spuffy story right now. I read it from the beginning every time you post a new chapter. I never get tired of it!
Reviewer: zachamy4444
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/2012 - 07:01 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Another great chapter!! Looking forward to more. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed
Date: 03/09/2012 - 05:19 pm
Title: Chapter 9
*fans herself* Damn, words of encouragement do you good. ;) It was sizzling, blush-inducing hotness and they didn't even take off all their clothes. I can't express how much I LOVE this version of Buffy and Spike. It's the best mix of cute and hot. Thank you so much for the delicious chapter!!! More soon? Please, please, pleeeease?
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/2012 - 04:44 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Enjoying all of their "talks" .. relationship.. sex.. etc. And how he is afraid of not living up to her expectations.. and more than in bed I assume..
The girl is determined..
Waiting for his talk with Mom..
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/2012 - 06:37 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Just read this from the beginning. I love this. The chemistry between them is just perfect and the dialogue just flows. Please update soon! =)
Reviewer: Albie
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/2012 - 07:54 pm
Title: Chapter 8
What a fantastic update. I nearly did a dance. Absolutely loved that moment when Spike admitted he was hers. So lovely. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: spuff_fan
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2012 - 03:02 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Ahhh - I *LOVE* this story!!
I had seen the posts as it has progressed, but told myself I wasn't going to get hooked on anymore WIPs so I would wait until it was complete and read all the way through!
Well, I broke down and am I ever glad I did! I was hooked after chapter 1!! Your characters are fantastic and I really enjoy the interactions so far! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Guest
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2012 - 05:51 am
Title: Chapter 8
I Love, Love ,Love this story...please keep going this is my favourite Spike yet:)
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 03/06/2012 - 05:40 am
Title: Chapter 8
I just found this story....I love it! Determined Buffy is so cute, and I love stories of bad boy Spike and innocent Buffy. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2012 - 03:32 am
Title: Chapter 8
He met her gaze with narrowed eyes. “You have me. Alright?”
And at that moment, he confesses to her how completely hers he is. Great moment. Great emotion. Throws them both a little off, but they still get to have their fun. And the things he's gonna teach her. Liked the fact that is was a bit awkward and not perfect. It is her first time... Buffy should not be porn star quality for her first time just cause it's Spike! Glad you made it real. :) Amazing! Update soon!
Reviewer: HiddenFan
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2012 - 01:15 am
Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I have been waiting for another update to my current fav! Thanks, it was hot.
Reviewer: Erin_Jacqueline14
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2012 - 12:48 am
Title: Chapter 8
Wow I thought u weren't writting anymore but wow I loved the chapter
Reviewer: prhotness
Anonymous
Date: 03/05/2012 - 10:59 pm
Title: Chapter 8
GREAT chapter!
Reviewer: anon
Anonymous
Date: 03/05/2012 - 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 8
MORE MORE MORE!!! So cute so far!
