Reviewer: jenna
Anonymous
Date: 03/04/2015 - 06:31 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Lol very funny
Reviewer: Steph
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/2014 - 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 1
Definitely liking this plot so far. I did notice that Chapter 6 was cut off prematurely though. Will we be able to read the rest of the great steaminess?
Reviewer: spikeakawilliam Signed
Date: 02/16/2014 - 12:02 am
Title: Chapter 16
Lol. Madea is awesome! I like the grit comment. I will find it hilarious if Anya follows the movie. :p
Reviewer: SeaPea Signed
Date: 01/23/2014 - 11:46 pm
Title: Chapter 15
The first part of this chapter was terrifying. I'm glad Graham is thinking a little more rationally. That poor demon.
Reviewer: LostHeart Signed
Date: 01/11/2014 - 02:21 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I love it
Reviewer: LostHeart
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2014 - 03:55 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Wonder if she realises that he still didn't answer the question...
He's a bad, rude man
Reviewer: LostHeart
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2014 - 03:38 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Nice chapter.
I like how you described the meaning of dawn for them - it makes sense that they'll choose it as a name
Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed
Date: 01/03/2014 - 12:31 am
Title: Chapter 10
I should have been commenting on this from the beginning, and shame on me for not. That last chapter was great. Your inner monologue with Spike was dead on I think.
Reviewer: LostHeart
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2013 - 02:27 pm
Title: Chapter 8
It seems to be quite common but it bugs me, when the Whirlwind (Darla, Angelus, Drusilla and Spike) is called the Scourge of Europe. The Scourge of Europe (to my knowledge) was another name for Angelus, like Spike was the Slayer of Slayers. I could of course be mistaken.
Did I mention my pet peeve about the 'Powers that be' being refered to by Buffy and her friends? It's because I can't remember it ever happening in the series. I know I'm kind of stupid for getting hung up on stuff like that and now that I got it out of the way: I really like a lot of your ideas and think you are creating a good story with an easy flow.
Maybe Anya should talk to Xander about all his prejudices. I always wondered how Buffy knew that Whistler wasn't evil but kind of like a balancing demon and how she deals with that concept - I mean there are times when she doesn't go for the kill but she doesn't seem to have a thought out method about that and it's not like she ever bothered to learn a lot about the different kinds of demons and so on. Willy's place is kind of like a neutral zone but most of the time it's just plot convenience... *grumble* love it when author's go through the effort of thinking further than that.
Wish you the best and am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for sharing your work.
Reviewer: LostHeart
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2013 - 02:20 pm
Title: Chapter 7
Such a sweet moment at the end there...
Hmm, I wasn't really on board with Buffy and Spike having sex when you let it happen. I don't think Buffy would have it in her to have "meaningless sex" during season 4, apart from that, I am really into the story. Wondering about the little loose ends you left here and there - but that's the point. Isn't it?
Reviewer: LostHeart
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2013 - 09:38 am
Title: Chapter 1
Aw, the end of this chapter just broke my heart. Wonder what Buffy's feeling though. She must be sad as well.
*sigh* Just gonna have to keep reading
Reviewer: Joan
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/2013 - 11:00 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Hooked
Reviewer: Lawrence Quill Signed
Date: 12/27/2013 - 12:31 pm
Title: Chapter 6
Completly rivited!! Please keep updating! At the bottom of Chapter 6, the text cut off, right when it was getting hot and heavy too!
Reviewer: EMI
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/2013 - 05:26 am
Title: Chapter 1
I swear, colective conciousness is real. These last few months I've been digging through the archives for a plot that had Dawn as they're magicaly concived child around the time of Something Blue. Where Spike is desperatly pulling all the stops and even going as far as to create his own so that Buffy and his Nibblet will be happy, Safe, and Secure, while Buffy stuggles with Duty, Feelings, Instict, Pregiduce, and the fear of the Unknown. Thank you so much for writing this and I deeply hope that you will continue to update, or I may just cry. I may end up crying anyway if Buffy gets snaged by Walsh before Spike can make a pre-emtive (sp?)srike with rallied demons to send the Initiative into lockdown.
I'm also concered that spike is going to get so frustred that he'll get pissed drunk and do something stupid to make Buffy close him off to the side lines. I hope Tera gets to come around to provide some calmness and and some unbiased advice and hopefully gain a quicker self esteam boost being in close contact with Spike, the one who sees all.
And although I know losing Joyce would be utteraly heartbreaking, I hope you keep that to canon because it would force Buffy to realize she needs someone to lean on, and that it's perfectly natural to allow someone else to take charge for awhile. Becides, watching Spike have to step up as Alpha Male/Head of House/Devoted Father would be both amazingly hot and Godamn funny.
Waiting ansiously(sp?),
EMI
emilybernau@gmail.com
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 12/01/2013 - 02:16 am
Title: Chapter 2
Loving this story. Your characterizations are spot on! :D Please keep posting.
Reviewer: Sara
Anonymous
Date: 11/29/2013 - 04:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1
I gonna assume that the baby thing will be explained, maybe in a flashback, becuase that part of this story threw me. It kind of took me out of the story abit because it was just there for seemingly no reason. Anxiously awaiting the next part and hopefully the backstory.
