Reviewer: ginar369 Signed
Date: 12/16/2013 - 01:40 pm
Title: One
I just found this story and so far I'm loving it!!!
Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2009 - 04:48 am
Title: Epilogue
ahh great story, its sad that willow couldnt be saved but im glad u made it that way, more realistic, after every thing shes been through sometimes its too late to be saved.
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 02/02/2008 - 10:13 pm
Title: Epilogue
What a fabulous story this was! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was suprised at how attached to your other versions of Buffy and Spike, I became. I looked forward to reading about the Liz and Will saga more than the great spuffy stuf f from our dimension. That was quite and accomplishment. Great work overall. Thanks
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 01/18/2008 - 08:26 pm
Title: Epilogue
Finally got around to finishing reading this wonderful fic I started reading ages ago and subsequently lost.
A bit sad OtherWillow couldn't be saved, but it just goes to show the power of unrelieved grief upon our little witchy control freak. Glad to see Oz again, and so good to see OurBuffy letting OtherBuffy in on the excellence of Spuffy before she could completely stuff her own life up.
A great read, thanks.
Reviewer: sister cuervo
Anonymous
Date: 11/12/2007 - 02:41 pm
Title: Epilogue
What a delightful, frightening and at times hilarious, story. Loved the variations on the Slayer/Vamp and poor Willow. Even as a villian, you made us feel for her even while I wanted to kill her, too. You really wove a tangled and thrilling web of adventure.
I love that figured out a way to I really enjoyed reading this one and will definately be looking for more of your work.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/07/2007 - 07:26 am
Title: Epilogue
Loved it :)
Last chapter was fun with the yellow slime / teasing. Joyce moved back in then? Even better for Buffy. And the best? Knowing now that she's in love and loved back :)
Enjoyed reading your story a lot.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/07/2007 - 07:19 am
Title: Twenty Five
Glad so see Buffy won't be alone in the house; Will is still there with her (she just has to tell him to stay with her too). Things should be better for her now.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:27 pm
Title: Twenty Four
Not so easy for Xander being the hero.. Willow reacted differently than they expected.
Wow I almost lost hope that they were able to stop evil-Willow. She was too far gone for her own good, driven by the circumstances but unwilling to change. Didn't expect Maggie to be the one to kill her. It was Willow or Buffy (Liz) would have died. ~
That's enough for today I'll decided. I'm getting too tired anyway. Till tomorrow if my time allows.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:06 pm
Title: Twenty-Three
Huh? Someone complained about your use of the name 'Liz'? Ah I see, Dawn was complaining :)
Riley has second thoughts about Willow? But he is still a part of the team that will attack. But maybe in doubt he'll help them. I know, not much of a chance for doing so.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/23/2007 - 04:23 pm
Title: Twenty-Two
Oh more guests now! And they brought Spike with them. :)
The others noticed how happy Buffy (Liz) was to have him back *g*. And good that Willow has enough experience now to get the chip out. Would be a shame to have Spike grilled by it.
Lovely reunion and a heartfelt apology. Loved it :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/23/2007 - 04:10 pm
Title: Twenty-One
You posted the updates to quick for me. Not sure if I'm able to read the rest today; we'll see.
Willow didn't get a warm welcome in the Initiative from Maggie but a welcome she got.
And even if Buffy didn't find Spike yet she had time to think. And she's coming around to the fact that her secret friend is Spike. Good to see that :)
Reviewer: Isabel
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/2007 - 11:26 pm
Title: Epilogue
Great ending to a great story! I loved it.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/2007 - 12:07 pm
Title: Epilogue
This was an excellent end to this entertaining story. Spike laughing at a slime covered Buffy put a big grin on my face. I loved their romantic yet funny banter in the shower, too. This Epilogue wrapped up every loose end handily - Joyce is back home, the alterna!Scoobies can come and go in this universe, Spike and Buffy are happily in love. Thanks for finishing this up. I really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/2007 - 12:00 pm
Title: Twenty Five
Liz' sense of loss and failure was beautifully realized, and her decision to open herself to Will makes sense in the context of the story. I loved Dawn's backhanded insult/advice here: “The hardest thing in this world is to live in it. Someone very wise—though deeply deluded—told me that once.” Deeply deluded, very funny and in voice. Buffy ordering Liz to "Be happy" was also lovely.
Reviewer: k
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/2007 - 07:20 am
Title: Epilogue
Nice :)
Reviewer: Sibb
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 10:50 pm
Title: Epilogue
This was an astonishingly fabulous story! Too bad that they couldn't save the evil Willow but it wouldn't have run true if she had all of a sudden reformed. Loved the ending--mom's back home and Spuffy loving all the way! And I really appreciated how quickly you updated this story, it is such a treat when authors update on a regular basis.
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 09:55 pm
Title: Epilogue
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed this story!
Reviewer: Cas
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:43 pm
Title: Epilogue
Thanks for the fic. Loved it, esp the ending.
Reviewer: Carol
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:40 pm
Title: Epilogue
You never disappoint, Peta. Good story that I really enjoyed. I'll be looking forward to your next fics.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 06:16 pm
Title: Twenty Four
Leaving The Initiative team all trussed up on the living room floor was a rather funny end to their dramatic siege. I found it delightful that the soldiers were wholly unprepared for the group on Revello Drive.
The confrontation with Willow was much more suspenseful. Her taunting malice was hurtful and she came to the end she deserved. I love that both Spike and Will were able to rescue their respective slayer. This was a very entertaining chapter.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 06:02 pm
Title: Twenty-Three
This made me laugh out loud: "Xander’s eye widened dramatically. “There’s an evil Willow on the loose?”
Buffy nodded. “And it gets worse. She’s apparently boinking Riley.” Willow's absolute revulsion at her other self was priceless.
Riley, on the other hand, seems a good bet to turn on The Initiative and his Willow. His admiration for Liz opens the door to his throwing in with the Scoobies.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 05:53 pm
Title: Twenty-Two
Liz' reaction to the familiar faces drove home all of her heart break and loss. It's no wonder she's so wary of seeking comfort in Will. That was a heart felt, touching reunion between Liz and Will. This chapter was positive and delightful. I can almost forget that Willow's out there hoping to turn Liz in to The Initiative. Almost.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 05:36 pm
Title: Twenty-One
Willow bullying Walsh into giving her full access to The Initiative was a delightful bit of table turning. I hope they both live to regret joining forces. I love Liz finally wrapping her head around the relationship she's already forged with her confidante. The fact that it's Will shouldn't change the feelings she's developed, right?
I don't know how I missed so many chapters in this entertaining story, but I'll try to play catch up.
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 12:47 pm
Title: Twenty-Two
That was so sweet! And two more chapters to read right away--thank you !!!
Reviewer: TammyAsh666
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 11:45 am
Title: Twenty Four
Well, I'm sure not going to cry over the loss of that Willow. The bitch really pissed me off, she had it coming. I was all giddy to have three chapters to read, but it's sad that the story is almost over. I've really enjoyed it. Can't wait to see what happens next=)
