Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 09/02/2014 - 02:33 am
Title: One Chapter
Just re-read... Terribly cute, but much too short!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 06/30/2012 - 01:39 pm
Title: One Chapter
Sweet!
Reviewer: ZLB
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/2007 - 12:33 pm
Title: One Chapter
Me niether. After all that he did Xander still finds the need to push the overgrown boyscout at her and she jumps up like a good girl and runs after the moron. Please! When he gave her that ultimatum she should have offered to help him pack! As for Xander, his need to tell Buffy who was and was not acepable to date was the one thing I hated about him. All in all a good guy but when it came to that area of life he wasn't much of a friend, more like a dictator. Anyways Loved it great job.
~ZLB
Reviewer: Ariel Dawn Signed
Date: 05/09/2005 - 09:10 am
Title: One Chapter
I like! Very nice re write!
Reviewer: Mariana
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2005 - 10:26 pm
Title: One Chapter
what an awesome re-write!!! i just loved it!! it was terrific!!! great great job!! though i would have loved for them to finish that scene on the couch, preferably a NC-17 ending...wouldn't you consider doing a short sequel of that? ;) anyhow...you did an excellent job...thanx so much!!!
Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed
Date: 05/08/2005 - 01:33 pm
Title: One Chapter
Aw, very nice. =)
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed
Date: 05/08/2005 - 01:31 am
Title: One Chapter
absolutely loved it
Reviewer: bloodshedbaby
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/2005 - 11:48 am
Title: One Chapter
oooh, very nice!!! So very awesome. I didn't really like the way that epi went either.
Reviewer: Sara
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/2005 - 08:06 am
Title: One Chapter
Great story. Sooo much better than what actually happened. I'm all ready for the sequel now.
Reviewer: Bernardette
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/2005 - 07:22 am
Title: One Chapter
Loved your version better Should of been your way. Would of made the show more interesting. Maybe you could do a sequel to this. Please think about it.
Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~
Anonymous
Date: 05/07/2005 - 05:22 am
Title: One Chapter
I'm with you that the speech never sat right with me. Riley put them all in danger with his little stunt. Xander didn't even care about the reason why Buffy was leaving Riley. He was just all you should be with Riley go chase him. I got so mad when she actually did chase him too. This was an excellent rewrite. I'd say it is prime for a sequel too. {Winks}