Reviewer: Lyzzybelle Signed
Date: 06/23/2012 - 05:38 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Great story!
Reviewer: -jay-
Anonymous
Date: 02/24/2010 - 12:34 am
Title: Chapter Three
that was awesome, i absolutely luved it. *runs off to find the sequel*
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed...they're two!
Reviewer: Marisol
Anonymous
Date: 10/26/2009 - 04:26 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Despite a few grammatical and punctuation errors, I enjoyed the first two chapters of this fic. I also love evil, bad Spike.
Which is why it pains me to say that you sort of lost me with this last chapter. I like that he turned her, but some of your word usage turned me off and the hot gave way to giggles with sentences like...
He settled between Buffy’s parted thighs, as he cock throbbed at her molten entrance.
and
Due to his extreme size, Spike felt the muscles of her hymen at the tip of his cock, before he was half way into her quim. Spike’s eyes slammed shut at the silken lava that surrounded his cock. Pure heaven.
I mean this in the sincerest way possible, but I think you would benefit from having a beta reader. One who is knowledgeable in many areas, not just punctuation and grammar. Or a quick google search on hymens at the very least.
Please take this review in the spirit that it was intended. Not to make you feel bad. It's meant as real constructive criticism.
Author's Response: Sorry that you feet that way. I do respect your opinions. I feel that my misconception that one's hymen is inside the vagina is not uncommon. I did fix it...thank you for your information. In addition, if you would like to beta my story for the grammatical and punctional errors you can do so. If you do, I will give you credit for being the beta of the story
Reviewer: Marisol
Anonymous
Date: 10/26/2009 - 03:01 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Perfect gentleman... LOL. I don't think so. Sneaky evil vampire. (Just the way I love him).
Reviewer: Marisol
Anonymous
Date: 10/26/2009 - 02:51 pm
Title: Chapter One
Very interesting start. Like how they met. :)
Reviewer: AMI Signed
Date: 10/11/2009 - 02:14 am
Title: Chapter Three
OOOH I loved this! Hippy dippy Buffy and evil Spike. :) Loved Spike's inner thoughts and the sex was HOT!! Evil vamp Buffy was cool.
Now they can be together in their evilness forever feeding and having great sex! lol
I definitely think you should do a sequel.
Good story!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you did! There isn't enough evil Buffy.....it's fun to write her that way. You do see glimps of this side during Joss' world but never full blown. Debating a sequel. Just worried that it won't be as good as this. That's the concern. But my inner muse is begging to write one and she may win out!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 09:50 pm
Title: Chapter Three
holy shit!! totally awesome story!! i love evil spike esp when he can get innocent buffy!! great story and nice daddy add in. keep it coming
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! debating a follow-up story.....mmmmm maybe?
Reviewer: spuffy chick
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 05:36 pm
Title: Chapter Three
one word... HOT! :)
Author's Response: thank you for the vote of hottness!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 12:00 pm
Title: Chapter Three
This is really different! I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to write something completely different than my typical stories.....I'm glad you felt that it worked!
Reviewer: Mary
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 11:58 am
Title: Chapter Three
I thought it was evil and sexy. But I think you're looking for the word visage, not vintage.
Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying. I fixed my spelling error thanks!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 10/10/2009 - 11:43 am
Title: Chapter Three
nice. interesting. i'm always up to see people's take on evil buffy and spike. i liked it a lot. good job
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! There isn't a lot of evil Buffy and Spike......I enjoyed writing this! I'm glad you liked reading it!
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 04:42 am
Title: Chapter Three
Hello Buffy the Vampire..
enjoyed
Author's Response: I'm glad that you did!
Reviewer: msspikester Signed
Date: 10/10/2009 - 12:39 am
Title: Chapter Three
What a way to go! I liked how you paid tribute to the anniversary of Woodstock, even though they never made it there...yet...(given the chance of Spike or Woodstock, I can tell you what I would choose.)
I enjoyed that immensely, consider it a job very well done.
Author's Response: thanks! most of my stories are sweet even though a little of Spike's wild side shows. this time I though "what the hell" and wrote him completely evil!
Reviewer: Spuffygirl
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/2009 - 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter Three
I love it. So hot and I love Evil Spike
Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoyed writing evil Spike! In Joss' world and on this website, evil Spike is not always represented. His angelic face and devotion to those he cares about, we forget that he is a vampire!
