Reviewer: Amanda
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/2007 - 10:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Ooo evil place to leave off. . .
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 03/04/2007 - 06:52 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: *bite me*
Anonymous
Date: 03/03/2007 - 05:56 pm
Title: Chapter 3
This is awesome. I like buffy's idea. It's amazing.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/02/2007 - 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Ouch. I feel for William; that's sad. After the break up with him she was ready to have sex with Angel what she didn't in the time she was with William? No wonder the jealousy is eating him up. ~ I wonder what Buffy wasn't telling (what she stopped to say after William said she wasn't resisting).
Buffy got jealous herself when William told her to want to date others. I wonder if she'll go back to him. Even if he doesn't say so he's still hurt about Angel being Buffy's first.
Joyce? Didn't expect her to come, find them. And now she even have them switch rooms ;-)
Still wondering where this one here will lead; looking forward to find out.
Reviewer: gotkona
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/2007 - 04:52 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Missytheslayer Signed
Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:26 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Lol... sneaking out. So, Spike and Buffy are finally getting on the right track, the Joyce shows up, sends Spike out, and Buffy's got an evil little plan? lol, great update! More soon please!
Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed
Date: 03/02/2007 - 12:16 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Wow! What a chapter! I mean that in a good way, of course. ;)
I have to make this quick though (I'm at work, hehe).
I'm kinda sad that Buffy did sleep with Angel, although I'm curious about this part:
“I’m sure you couldn’t resist.”
“Actually, I--.”
And whether that really meant anything more than just what's there. I dunno if I'm making any sense, lol.
I'm glad though, that Spike and Buffy seem like they're giving being together another shot! Yay! Good for them.
I'm also wondering what this punishment that Joyce has in mind for them is.
Great chapter, looking forward to more. =)
Reviewer: Suzee
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/2007 - 10:59 am
Title: Chapter 3
I think your Spike actually fits Spike better than a lot of AU ones do...Yeah everything with Buffy and Angel'd probably drive him crazy, but on the show Spike always wanted to be with Buffy, whether she was with Riley or not or whether he thought she had been...True Angel can be a different story, but Im seeing this as the way Spke always wants to e with Buffy even if he's not sure he's over things she's done.... And I think I just made no sense, but I promise what I was *trying* to say was a good thing :)
I hope you're able to update it soon :)
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 03/02/2007 - 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 3
So sweet.
Reviewer: Devin Signed
Date: 03/02/2007 - 01:15 am
Title: Chapter 3
Good to see this updated, but I think I really should not read Spuffy fanfics after watching I Love New York-- because the entire time I was imagining Buffy as New York, Spike as Mr. Boston, and Joyce as Sister Patterson. SO not characterizations that work (but your fanfic is great, haha-- if you haven't seen that show this is probably a really confusing review, but I promise, it was WEIRD, lol). :) Update soon!
Reviewer: Obsidian
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/2007 - 12:27 am
Title: Chapter 3
Hmm... I *like* this story, really, but Buffy? She's really getting on my last nerve. It's like she's getting off on leading Spike on, and he's being such a poon! lol I hope he grows a pair sometime soon, and Buffy gets over herself. I understand she was hurting when Spike cheated, but it seems that she's getting her payback times ten. But, keep it coming. Who knows? We may all be pleasantly surprised in the future.
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 03/01/2007 - 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Wow...it's too bad Spike wasn't her first. That just sucks! Why is Joyce being so strict about it? Update soon please!
Reviewer: Meekly
Anonymous
Date: 03/01/2007 - 11:06 pm
Title: Chapter 3
I have to say that I think your writing is getting better and better with each story and I really loved the first to chapters of your new fic.
But I'm not buying Spike here, and maybe that's the way you are planning it, I don't know. If he was really truly deeply in with her, he wouldn't be able to let it go. He'd try and front, but without the perspective he seems to lack as of yet, I think it would fester and broil in a passionate guy like Spike, especially if he's a virgin himself. Hello, Insecurity.
Can't wait to see how you play it!
Reviewer: ~Eris~
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2007 - 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 2
Love this!
Reviewer: Amanda
Anonymous
Date: 02/21/2007 - 05:00 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!!!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 05:08 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Just found your fic and love it. Can't wait til the next update!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/18/2007 - 10:13 am
Title: Chapter 2
Loved the banter between the two (Buffy and Spike).
But Buffy is a bit dumb (naive?)if she thinks she can have both men around, Spike and Angel ("the two most important men in my life to get along and become friends"). When Spike is still in love with her I guess it's hard to see Buffy with Angel. Would be the case for me if it was my Ex. (Personally I don't think that Spike was too hard on her. He just told her some truth, how he felt.)
Buffy wants to keep them both and now she saw that she can't have all (everything).
Wow.. Buffy is very emotional, trying to find a ride of her own. Unexpected twist: She dumbed Angel now? I didn't see this coming for now.
But Spike isn't really happy with Buffy's decision because he thinks she did it for him. Is he trying to call Angel because of that to make things right? Then he is a better person than I would be (at last I think so; I'm not sure if I would call my Ex boyfriend to bring them together again). But maybe Buffy has to end things with Angel again for her own reasons to be sure about it. At the moment she's so torn (about her feelings).
Reviewer: Suzee
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/2007 - 06:30 pm
Title: Chapter 2
I really liked this chapter--and the way that Buffy and Spike's relationship isn't simple but that they're both trying to figure some things out and how everything's going to work now :)
Reviewer: Sara M.
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/2007 - 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Ok, first I love this line : “What’s wrong with three wheels? I had a tricycle once and, it was super fun.”
If I ever write a story I am going to have to use it in it, I hope you don't mind.
Second, this is turning out so different than I thought it would. I'm really enjoying it, its a great story.
Third, March 1st? Is that going to be when the next update is? If so that is so mean to put that there!! But I'm thinking that it will be worth the wait...
Reviewer: Meagan
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/2007 - 10:08 am
Title: Chapter 2
I don't know what to say. I'm interested where this story is going...but this Buffy is something else. Ex-boyfriend Spike is still in the picture after he cheats on her, which the way it's being described, seems pretty trivial. If he was caught full on making out with her, then thats one thing, but if it was like he said, she kissed him and then was caught, that's another.
Then Buffy hooks up with Angel a week after their break up, and were "studying" together prior, no wonder Spike was suspicious, cause to hook up that fast from a break up, there had to be something going on, if not physical, then emotional, and that can be just as wrong.
Then there's the thing where Buffy is playing Spike, and Spike is just putting up with it. She was kinda flaunting her relationship with Angel in Spike's face, she had to have known that he was still hung up on her, they've only been broken up for about a month now.
Buffy also doesn't seem to have much regard for Spike's feelings, she does what she wants with him when she wants...which that by itself isn't horrible...I 'm just confused about how she says she loves him, broke up with current boyfriend when Spike said she had to choose, but she puts him off when she starts it.
I want to see where this goes, but I'm not quite sure what to make of this Buffy. Cause honestly, the "genuine" self reflection she's experianced in this chapter seems kinda forced compared to her actions.
Reviewer: gotkona
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/2007 - 08:52 am
Title: Chapter 2
So glad you updated. I was wondering what happened. Will look for next chapter March 1
Reviewer: Missytheslayer Signed
Date: 02/16/2007 - 08:48 am
Title: Chapter 2
So it'll be updated on March 1st? Ok... This story is great! Can't wait to see the whole Spike?Angel conversation play out.
Reviewer: Roxy
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/2007 - 06:13 am
Title: Chapter 2
Okay, I like where this story could be going but I can't help but feel that Buffy's being selfish and clueless, and Spike has no backbone. I mean, she knows Spike still loves her, how could she even expect him to just come with her to Las Vegas while she's shacking up with Angel and be fine with it?
I wonder how they got from breaking up to being the bestest of friends, and so fast...
Well at least Spike told her the truth sorta
looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: jenny
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/2007 - 02:36 am
Title: Chapter 1
that long for the update are you trying to drive us nuts!!! i can't wait to read the next chappie!!! update soon!!!!
