Reviewer: Judyth
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/2012 - 12:14 am
Title: 44
Thanks for the story. As long as you eventually finish, it's all good.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 07/04/2012 - 07:01 pm
Title: 44
I loved this fic. The romance was fairly fluffy, but had enough angst to make it reasonable and interesting enough. Loved the Edith bit, and the Gay!Evan/Evan!Victoria twist. Would have loved to see an epilogue that showed their reunion and reintegration with the Scoobies. Oh, and I think you might have used two different spellings for Stewart/Stuart... I thought he was introduced as Stewart and then it was Stuart at the end, but I haven't double-checked that.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this story - it was entertaining and really well done!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 07/03/2012 - 10:13 pm
Title: 12
Love it! So far, this story has been fantastc... and you're one of the best writers on this site, so I feel compelled to issue a backhanded compliment by letting you know you have a few words used incorrectly (it's a compliment, because I usually don't bother with the writers whose works are riddled with mistakes):
1) nonplussed actually means the opposite of what you meant
2) invariably - you meant undoubtedly (or a synonym)
3) tortuous - you actually meant torturous
Words one and three are mistakes I've made myself, so I'm sensitive to them...
Hope you're out there still writing; you have a talent!
Reviewer: lenore
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2012 - 08:05 pm
Title: 35
Best story yet...thanks for a good read
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2010 - 01:59 am
Title: 1
Well, it took you until Jan of 2007 to finish it and took me until Aug of 2010 to read it all (I had to start over) but I'm glad you finished it and I'm very glad I read it all. It was one of the best I've read in the Spuffy Fanfic universe. Thank you for sticking with it through all your RL trials and hardships and thank you for sharing your talent! The tale was awesome! Hugs.
Reviewer: laurdania
Anonymous
Date: 10/14/2009 - 10:33 pm
Title: 44
well i lucked out then, i didnt have 2 wait at all 2 read it. and i do love it :) great job!
Reviewer: kimberly l
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2009 - 11:03 am
Title: 44
This was great. Loved the story, would like to have seen the meeting of the scoobies, and would love to have seen Buffy bring the baby home, (Joyce would be a great foster grandmother. You know w/a little tweaking, change the names, you could probably get published, The world is always looking for new authors and the latest trend is vampires. Ya' never know, look what happened to JK Rowling when she was trying to write with a baby. Hope you and your friends are doing well, death is often easier to deal with than the dying, but both are tremendously difficult, even when it is not blood family but family we have chosen, Thank you for a wonderful story!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 12/04/2008 - 02:10 am
Title: 44
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2008 - 11:07 pm
Title: 44
Great story. Loved the plot twists and the character development. Just a few fyi's: there were a few inconsistencies - when you first introduced Evan's mother her name was Roberta and then it changed to Victoria in the next chapter. The other one was late in the story when Spike reflected on how Buffy had to stab Angelus and send him to hell - but at that point she had confided in him that it was really Angel. Anyway - you had months between chapters and I read it as a whole -so it was not unexpected to have a few minor things sneak by. Great story. Thanks for persevering and finishing it. I am to have a c-section in 5 days for twins and hope I can still find time to read stories as you have managed to work writing in around raising your son! Thanks again.
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2008 - 11:06 pm
Title: 44
Great story. Loved the plot twists and the character development. Just a few fyi's: there were a few inconsistencies - when you first introduced Evan's mother her name was Roberta and then it changed to Victoria in the next chapter. The other one was late in the story when Spike reflected on how Buffy had to stab Angelus and send him to hell - but at that point she had confided in him that it was really Angel. Anyway - you had months between chapters and I read it as a whole -so it was not unexpected to have a few minor things sneak by. Great story. Thanks for persevering and finishing it. I am to have a c-section in 5 days for twins and hope I can still find time to read stories as you have managed to work writing in around raising your son! Thanks again.
Reviewer: Schehrezade
Anonymous
Date: 09/22/2007 - 11:26 am
Title: 44
What a joy to discover you have finished one of my all time fav fics!!!! I was wondering now that it is complete can I add it to the rest of your fics you gave me permission to archive on Elysian Fields - I would be so thrilled if I could!
Hugs
Schehrezade
Reviewer: spikette55
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/2007 - 01:25 pm
Title: 44
That was a great ride. I wish Spike could've kept the ring tho...and Dawn too, then they really couldn't ever part...sigh.
thanx again, must tread on to more Spuffy.
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2007 - 08:19 pm
Title: 28
a good story but i think you are forgetting that they are in England, aren't they or have i missed something? they wouldn't pay 100 dollars for a suit or 10 dollars for soup-its the good old British pound all the way.; and we don;t walk in blocks but streets and the restaurant has a car park not a lot. otherwise enjoying the story
Reviewer: sirc
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/2007 - 01:13 pm
Title: 44
Well... It took a while, (and even more for me to actually read it :P), but it's up now and I finally finished it.
Well done :)
Reviewer: Dragon_1215
Anonymous
Date: 03/01/2007 - 05:31 pm
Title: 44
Excellent story. I couldn't put it down. Sorry to be so late to review, but I don't read anything until it is completed. Very AU, but still works well in the Buffyverse. Though I hoped Spike could keep the Gem. Looking forward to a sequel, if ther is one.
Thanks fo all the work.
Dragon
Reviewer: Serenity
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 04:14 am
Title: 44
Just wanted to let you know that there are still people out here reading your fic. Dunno if you will ever read the reviews since it is completed, but still wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this story. I like stories where Buffy just gets off her high horse and admittedly falls in love with Spike. (The way it should have been all along!)
Reviewer: Esther
Anonymous
Date: 02/04/2007 - 03:09 am
Title: 44
SQUEE!!! What an ending!! Oh, hon, I'm sorry your muse left you before this was finished, but I'm so happy with the result. Fantastic epilogue, hon, and I'm so glad that you gave us a farewell with Hettie and Amelia, too.
Reviewer: MG
Anonymous
Date: 02/03/2007 - 09:45 pm
Title: 44
Great story. Glad you got to the end.
Reviewer: Squid
Anonymous
Date: 01/16/2007 - 12:38 am
Title: 44
This was great. I guess, lucky for me, I didn't begin reading until it was finished. But it was one of the best fics I've read in a long time. You should try to come up with more. I really like the camradarie you developed between Spike and Buffy, it's one I hadn't seen before. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Squid
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/2007 - 09:24 pm
Title: 19
Very erotic...and very sweet.
Reviewer: Deena
Anonymous
Date: 01/06/2007 - 09:43 pm
Title: 44
I'm a person who can only read completed stories, If I started stories as the chapters are offered I'd never get anythings else done because I'd have to many stories started, I loved this story, I could not tell by the read that it took so long to complete. It was worth the waite for all who read it I'm sure, Thanks for not giving up on it. I'll wait patiently for your next.
Reviewer: Tanja
Anonymous
Date: 01/06/2007 - 06:24 am
Title: 44
This was a truly amazing ride, I loved every word of this story and I really hope that you'll write more someday.
Reviewer: Bigbird
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:38 am
Title: 44
I loved this read it from start to finish so missed all the delays but really glad you finished it - I hate when they are just left hanging! well done
Reviewer: Tanja
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2007 - 01:31 am
Title: 26
Wow! Just... wow!!! Absolutely beautiful!
Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Signed
Date: 01/04/2007 - 05:44 pm
Title: 44
I had a blast reading this. Your original characters were fun to read, and I loved every bit of the Spuffy goodness. Thank you for writing this awesome fic! :)