Reviewer: nastyrulzz
Anonymous
Date: 12/15/2008 - 05:20 pm
Title: Lie to me.
Those were some ground breaking ideas... I loved the rape scene (gotta say that as a woman I'd naturally hate the guts of the scene like that, but it's spuffy we're talking here! & Spike, well... he's just so fine..). I absolutely adore your take on this, really brilliant, so far I only read justification-of-Spike theory (which is pretty obvious), but never such a twisted & smart way of presenting the bathroom scene. Spuffy is all mindfuck to me (which is why I love them so much) & you captured it so fine.
P.S. I loved the line that says how he in all his madness found way home..to Buffy - awesome.
Reviewer: Jill
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 06:18 am
Title: Lie to me.
Wow, this is really great stuff! The poem is beautiful in a very Spikey way, can easily see this as something he would create, and the insight into each of their thoughts at this time put a wonderful spin on the whole incident. Just wish Buffy's thoughs in this had happened in the show, you know? Great little ficlet, got any more of these hiding somewhere?
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed
Date: 12/17/2007 - 11:32 pm
Title: Lie to me.
Beautifully written and absolutely brilliant! I love the poetry, it very easily could have been written by Spike. And changing the pov for each of them gave a lot of insight into their feelings rather than just showing their actions. Nice job!
Reviewer: lisa_dec Signed
Date: 12/17/2007 - 07:02 am
Title: Lie to me.
I like this! Happy that Buffy realises she loves Spike and I like her different point of view at the attempted rape. If I can suggest some changes though, I would've written the words "He had hurt the girl" and "Ask me again why I could never love you" in italics instead of big letters. I think it gives the story better atmosphere, but that's just my opinion. I look forward for the next chapter!