Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 12:53 am
Title: Prologue - Dream a Little Dream
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/30/2012 - 04:07 am
Title: Epilogue: All Roads
This is an extremely lovely story. I love the way you craft the intricat plot, and grab the reader from the beginning and keep us sucked in. Characterizations are so spot on, especially Spike. Zack and Rosie are superb original characters, kudos.
My only big criticism is there are some words spelled very wrong, some really strange turns of phrase and some 50cent words that are (or sometimes maybe just seem to be) used wildly incorrectly. Also, there are many passages with a strange set of descriptive phrases that don't seem to make any sense at all. I am pretty well-read, and I honestly couldn't make heads or tails out of some passages. Made it extremely difficult some parts of the tail, but I ended up skimming theses parts, and I hope I correctly guessed the gist of them. On the flip side, there were quite a lot of words that MANY authors use wrongly that you got right, so that's a plus.
Overall, I enjoyed it, even if I didn't always love all the turns (like what happened to Buffy, ultimately). You have a real gift for plot, characters & dialogue -- I hope you are still writing!
Reviewer: laindenver
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2009 - 12:31 pm
Title: Epilogue: All Roads
This is a fantastic story! Perfect blend of romance, angst and humor. I've read most of your stories in the past few days- I can be a little obsessive- and have loved everything you've written. I really feel like you stay true to the original characters. Please keep writing so people like me can keep reading.
Reviewer: Nicka
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2008 - 03:11 am
Title: Chapter Forty-One: Silver Satin Wings
Loved that bet, more please.
Reviewer: Kathryn
Anonymous
Date: 05/18/2008 - 05:45 pm
Title: Prologue - Dream a Little Dream
I have always loved this story and I always wondered about its title. So I just broke it down and I must say I am impressed. The title is quit witty, I admire your creativity.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 01:40 pm
Title: Epilogue: All Roads
ow its over, I loved it and wonder if she will ever meet back up with her family by would love to see more of the LA and Spike Buffy, with or without Angel,
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 01:17 pm
Title: Chapter Fifty: Dance with the Devil
OH so they finally mated to one another.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 11:43 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Nine: Here We Found Plutus, The Great Enemy
So I wonder if Buffy will really ever find them again.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 10:52 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Eight: All I Need
nope I guess it wasn't, oh and I loved the hot chocolate plocie.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 09:47 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Seven: Bring on the Rain
Oh I hope Xander changes some tomorrow.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 07:19 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Six: Ravages of Spirit
Oh I love Spikes little speech, and wonder what will happen in Sunnydale.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 06:41 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Five: Tell Me Something Good
Oh that was great with Spikes singing.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 06:11 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Four: The House's Fall
So we souled Angel and dusted Darla and I loved the little girls laid talk with her father.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 05:40 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Three: Post Hoc Ergo Propter Hoc
Oh I can't wait to see what happens after the curse.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/18/2007 - 05:03 am
Title: Chapter Forty-Two: Tub on a Flowered Mat
Oh I wonder what she will say.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/17/2007 - 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter Forty-One: Silver Satin Wings (2)
oh I love it.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/17/2007 - 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter Forty-One: Silver Satin Wings
Oh so looks like they made up.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/17/2007 - 06:00 pm
Title: Chapter Forty: Deliverance
OH I don't think Spike will really hate her
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/17/2007 - 05:29 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Three Great Troubles
So Tara is there now, did she not go to England with Willow and GIles.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/17/2007 - 05:25 am
Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Devil in the Belfry
interesting fight
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:05 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Forgiveness
So they talked well sort off.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:42 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-Six: Sacrament
I like that little girl.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:27 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-Five: Morning Song
Oh I hope they can get through this,
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:07 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-Four: The Tower of Learning
Oh I loved Cordy in this.
