Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:24 pm
Title: Chapter 26
Yeah. They just need to have sex, stat.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:21 pm
Title: Chapters 24 & 25
The movie was loads of fun. Why are these two not flinging themselves onto the nearest bed and having their wicked way with one another?
Oh, yeah, #10.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:17 pm
Title: Chapter 23
Whee! Suntan lotion and massages and spankings, oh my!
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 22
I really enjoyed their getting to know one another, and Buffy pretty much having a porno soundtrack going through her head whenever she's in Spike's presence just cracks me up.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:06 pm
Title: Chapter 21
I love the sharp, funny dialogue in this, and when the characters get serious they're still perfectly in voice. It's a delight to read.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:01 pm
Title: Chapter 20
How can Spike possibly show any restraint after that blowjob admission? I admire his resolve.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:56 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Cooking as foreplay was delightful.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:36 pm
Title: Chapters 17 & 18
Buffy imperiously calling Spike Ken and making him model shorts was hilarious, and then you get them tussling and touching and my mind goes to a very happy place.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:31 pm
Title: Chapter 16
And the sexual tension just keeps on getting tenser. I love drunk!Willow. She's so cute and nosy.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:27 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Ooh, I loved Buffy defending Spike and putting Dru into a rage.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:08 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Buffy getting Spike's car detailed was cute, and had nothing to do with not wanting to be seen in it otherwise, right?
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 04:59 pm
Title: Chapter 13
You're building the tension beautifully.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2007 - 04:54 pm
Title: Chapters 11 & 12
Perfect Cordelia voice, and the way she keeps referring to Spike as "It" is both awful and hilarious.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:31 pm
Title: Chapter 10
I love drunk Spike ham handedly hitting on Bouncy, fluffy Buffy. He's going to feel dreadful in the morning, isn't he?
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:27 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Excellent tension building under all the seething and insults.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:24 pm
Title: Chapter 8
I love Xander and Anya in this. This exchange made me laugh out loud:
"What kind of a name is Buffy?" Anya wondered.
"Rich," Xander said.
"Oh," said Anya, considering it for her first-born." Anya contemplating naming her first born after some random rich person is delightful.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:19 pm
Title: Chapters 6 & 7
Great set up. Buffy all alone and Spike heartbroken and at loose ends with her forgotten cell phone...
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:14 pm
Title: Chapters 4 & 5
This was hilarious: "I didn't get your name."
"Buffy."
He laughed, "I'm serious." She was glaring at him. "Oh. So are you."
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 3
It was all snappy and snarky until that last line. So, he really was trying to kill himself.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:04 pm
Title: Chapters 1 & 2
I just love this story. Big, mean, drunk Spike intent on killing himself only to kill Buffy's car instead. Their dialogue is a delight.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2007 - 06:26 pm
Title: Chapter 34
Excellent chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/26/2007 - 04:49 pm
Title: Chapter 34
Oh and I meant last time I didn't read this story before... not the twist, to be exactly.
Who had thought that Cordelia telling Buffy's secret would lead to some closure for Buffy now :)
For threatening Angel Cordy made it up again ;-)
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 11/26/2007 - 04:05 pm
Title: Chapter 34
Oh that was good.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 11/26/2007 - 03:58 pm
Title: Chapter 33
Oh that was good.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 11/26/2007 - 02:51 pm
Title: Chapter 32
Oh that does not look good for Buffy and Spike.
