Reviewer: squawks
Anonymous
Date: 02/21/2007 - 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter 5
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! leaving her to starve...hmmm, so i assume the guys who look after a girl have to look after her the whole time? thats good maybe they'll get more privacy. Really hope to see more soon i cant wait to see how you build up Buffy's trust in SPike.
Reviewer: Cas
Anonymous
Date: 02/21/2007 - 06:49 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Ooops - maybe Spike is supposed to do more to train her than just run of the mill rape and torture. Better learn some French fast. And what's whith Angel wanting to "stop in" once in a while.?
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/20/2007 - 01:19 pm
Title: Chapter 4
So Spike doesn't understand a lot of French but Buffy speaks a bit English too. I really wonder why the rooms aren't video monitored ~ especially with Buffy being Angel's new favorite. They are so sick, doing this to the girls it must be fun for them to re-watch.
This will not be easy for Spike, going through what Angel wants of him. That this is bad for Buffy (and the other girls), that is clear. I hope Angel and his men get punished. Soon and very hard :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/20/2007 - 01:09 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Oh Buffy speaks French. Is she French (because of her name).
Parker is an asshole.. but I guess the other are the same. How cruel.
Icky/eewww. It was to be expected, he raped her.
The only good is that Buffy doesn't have to hate Spike for raping a virgin.
But he helped, can Buffy forget this?
Reviewer: Spuffygirl
Anonymous
Date: 02/20/2007 - 06:12 am
Title: Chapter 4
Aww Poor Spuffy! Good story!
Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed
Date: 02/20/2007 - 04:44 am
Title: Chapter 4
Oh my god , I'm so glad that Spike speaks a little french other wise Buffy would be even more distressed....Looking forward to the next chapter soon....
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2007 - 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 4
more please
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2007 - 04:27 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Poor Buffy. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2007 - 02:48 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Poor Buffy...I hope she gets out of there soon. Update soon please!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 02/19/2007 - 09:47 am
Title: Chapter 4
I love how she opened up and talked English to Spike.
Reviewer: jo
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2007 - 08:24 am
Title: Chapter 4
God i hate those sick bastards angel and Parker, you've got to get them out of there and soon . Where does Spike train her , while there in this facility?
Meanwhile ehat she gets to be raped repeatly ,especially by that disgusting animal Angel
(God i hate him).
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:43 am
Title: Chapter 4
clever, by letting Buffy see Spike as he really is if only for a moment, it allows their relationship to develop. I was wondering how you were going to get over that hurdle. It will take her a long time to recover mentally though.
well done
Author's Response: thanks for the review:) x x x
Reviewer: squawks Signed
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:24 am
Title: Chapter 4
i have to say that i really like this fic - Spike is obviously in such a difficult positon. You really grabbed everyone's attention with Parker's rape, its not often you see something so graphic written like that if you understand what i mean, like in this context, without spike coming to save her or something. I like the french misunderstanding etc that makes it harder for them to communicate, on top of which of course she would find him hard to trust, i can completely understand her anger and betrayal at finding he worked for the FBI and didn;t help her. but i liked the end where she asked if he'd return, good segwey into opening a connection between them. i really hope to see more soon : )
Author's Response: Thanks im glad your enjoying the story. And im glad you understand the shock factor of that scene it was meant to show just how ruthless and disgusting the situation is and i doubt im gunna use such graphic scenes in the futur of the story
Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed
Date: 02/18/2007 - 11:32 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Poor Buffy... Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 02/18/2007 - 10:09 pm
Title: Chapter 3
good update
Author's Response: thank you:D
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 09:02 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Just found your fic and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: aww thanks
Reviewer: Jenn
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 07:58 pm
Title: Chapter 3
That was a really great chapter.......very graphic but you did warn us in the beginning. i hope though that it won't be as graphic as this chapter though i don't think i could take that again. i will however continue to read this story and i hope spike rescues buffy soon.
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 03:38 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Poor Buffy. How is she going to survive this? Does Spike know fluent French or just a litle like he said? Update soon please!
Author's Response: Spike only knows enough french to be able to roughly guess what she is saying and im going to try to update soon :) thnaks or the review
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 02:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Well, you did warn us. But, can I ask if this kind of thing is going to continue with Parker, or anyone else for that matter? I realize that some fics are rougher than others, so I do appreciate your warnings, but I'd just like to know what to expect if I decide to keep reading. Because, despite the warning, (and no argument on that--your warning was very explicit) that scene was pretty harsh. So I'd just like to know if this is a preview of what is to come or if things or what.
Author's Response: no it isnt gunna get much worse than that and im hoping that all th stuff that is going to be forced onto Buffy is going to be more implied than graphic
Reviewer: Angi
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 02:28 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Why did that slimy shit have to get to her first? There were other ways to make this happen, did you really think this through? Dislike this choice....By the way, this story reminds me A LOT of the Harem-story by Jolynn....
Author's Response: well yes i thought it through and this is the direction i wanted to take this story and and as for the story by Jolyn i have never actually read any of her stories however if there is a story that mien is similar too i can garantee you i did not copy the story and it was an accident i actually go the idea for this story from a book i read thanks for the review
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 01:44 pm
Title: Chapter 3
this just gets better and better. An horrific chapter brilliantly described
Author's Response: aw thanx :) x x
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 01:28 pm
Title: Chapter 3
I hope, Spike can recue her, soon. Take her in his arms and never let go.
Author's Response: thanks again for the review :D
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 01:20 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Wonder what Spike will do about it all.
Author's Response: thanks for the review
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 12:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Oh this looks good.
Author's Response: why thank you glad you think so
Reviewer: Spuffygirl
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 08:52 am
Title: Chapter 2
That is So not fair! lol You stopped at the best part! Why do I think Buffy is gonna be anything but obediant?
Author's Response: haha you know Buffy's character too well
