Usually i'm not really one for angsty stories but you wrote this so well I just couldn't help myself. You portrayed everyones emotions so well. Please please continue the story and thank you so much for writeing this.


Author's Response: TBH I've never considered myself an angst writer, I'm too much of a soppy romantic, but the original plan would be to give them a happier spuffy-loving ending, so we'll see if the muse cooperates. Thanks for reviewing :)

I think this was beautifully written and would love to see this continue from a depressing interlude to some spuffy-loving fluffiness!!

Author's Response: That was the original plan. I can see it in my head, my muse just needs a kick up the butt to get the words out. Thanks for reviewing :)

You are a fine writer. This topic has been covered many times, if it's going to bum you out, don't do it. This piece is moving and could stand on its own. That said, I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you. The original version had several hidden clues towards the sequel that I ended up scrapping. I can see it in my head, just need to get it down in words :)