Reviewer: brovic Signed
Date: 01/20/2016 - 12:50 pm
Title: Till Death Do Us Part
Good story... I'm a bit confused about dru.. She hit angel and he knew it and then just disappeared and Angel wasn't upset about it and spike had mentioned she was evil etc. so was she in on it? Or was that her warped way of helping? It seemed she wasn't finished with angel but nothing came of it. Ending was sweet and cute and I like how angel was a good guy at the end
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 02/24/2014 - 06:37 pm
Title: Epilogue
Cute story. Some of the plot moved a bit too fast, some elements were a bit far-fetched, and there are a lot of grammar/spelling errors, but you have lots of wonderful ideas and have promise as a writer.
Reviewer: Misha
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/2009 - 07:38 pm
Title: Epilogue
That was sweet.
Reviewer: astrodex
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2009 - 08:38 pm
Title: Till Death Do Us Part
The story has promise, but you keep sliding back and forth between past tense and present tense.
As the taxi pulled up, Buffy looked back...
Sliding into the back of the taxi, she tells the driver...
It is very distracting.
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/2009 - 09:50 pm
Title: Epilogue
Great fic! I loved it. I'm sad to see it finish, though. There are still some unanswered questions - what about Dru? Why did she pop up at the end?
I'd love to see more!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/2009 - 05:05 pm
Title: Epilogue
Loved it!
Reviewer: ScoobyDoo Signed
Date: 04/06/2009 - 04:54 pm
Title: Epilogue
Great story. You MUST do a sequel!!
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/2009 - 08:08 am
Title: Epilogue
Awww! Great finish to a great tale ,really enjoyed reading this, i never forgot about it through the long wait for updates. It wasn't easy, but nothing worthwhile ever is, tee hee. Thank you for letting us all read it.
Reviewer: v4viper
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2009 - 11:31 pm
Title: Epilogue
Thank you for finishing this story it didn't take it long to get back into the story I enjoyed very much
Reviewer: Linda Barrett
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 05:15 pm
Title: Till Death Do Us Part
I really enjoy reading This story. Please continue the story. I would love to know what happen next.
Reviewer: mrs.darling
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2007 - 07:41 pm
Title: Suprise
I am so confused I mean the story is awesome! And I really want to read more but you havent had an update since January and it says that this piece is completed but its not....
or is it...
I am so confused! Are you going to finish it or not?
Author's Response: I'm sure that I answered this question somewhere before... Not sure where though. Basically there was one chapter left to go, wrapping up the story and it didn't have a happy ending *ducks* But my muse has told me that there is another story there and that wrapping it all up would be bad! So, yeah it's kinda finished, but there will be more, only it is a whole new story.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2007 - 05:49 pm
Title: Suprise
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:57 pm
Title: Suprise
well this is getting more complicated and dark isn't it. Can't wait for more! Love it!
Reviewer: J
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2007 - 11:32 am
Title: Suprise
Oh great, hoe bag alert!!! Great update, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2007 - 09:06 am
Title: Suprise
No please don't take Spike from Buffy.
Would like to see more of what the Angel and Dru contectionis though. More please.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:35 pm
Title: Fire
good update
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:46 pm
Title: Fire
Loved it! More please!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:11 pm
Title: Fire
So glad this is on the update wagon again. More please! Love it.
Reviewer: J
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:06 pm
Title: Fire
I was just thinking to myself yesterday about what happened to this story. glad to see it updated! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 04:07 pm
Title: Fire
More please did they get Katie or not.
Reviewer: M
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 03:44 pm
Title: Fire
Um, either I missed something or Spike is going to make a big mistake cause somehow I don't think the murderer would walk out without his trophies.
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 12/15/2006 - 09:47 pm
Title: Determined
So glad you are laying the ground work for Angel rescuing his daughter, but feeling disattached from her. Sounds like (I hope) that evil kid murdering trudy waste of skin is gonna be put away or taken away once and for all, with all three, Angel, Buffy and Spike after him (not to mention the FBI enforce) he's bound to be caught soon, I just hope Katie doesn't suffer any trauma through all of this. More please, I'm on the edge of my seat! Thanks!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:50 pm
Title: Determined
Great chapter! Loved it!
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:38 pm
Title: Determined
Love it. more please.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:44 pm
Title: Determined
good update
