Reviewer: Time of Change
Anonymous
Date: 09/04/2006 - 06:37 am
Title: Some place sleazy.
Wonderful That last line is a hearbreaker.
Reviewer: wall_flower Signed
Date: 09/04/2006 - 03:55 am
Title: Some place sleazy.
Awesome :) More than awesome!
Reviewer: annapurna_2
Anonymous
Date: 09/03/2006 - 07:31 pm
Title: Some place sleazy.
May I just say how much I adore this? So clever and cute and the voices are dead on. And then the poignant zinger at the end. Just lovely.
One of many favorite bits:
If anything, his grin only grows, and he tosses her an amused look before stepping towards the Evil Knievel deathbike. In one way too smooth, obviously practiced motion, Spike throws a leg up and over the seat of the bike, then slides silkily, almost liquidly, into place. Show off. Leather groans beneath him, and he crooks an eyebrow in her direction, his head tilted to neck-breaking degrees at the side. "What's the matter?" Cue the part where his tongue starts poking playfully behind his teeth. "Scared?"
Gah! I'm laughing and melting at the same time! Brava.
Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for leaving such nice feedback! :)
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 09/03/2006 - 12:45 am
Title: Some place sleazy.
Good one-off!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Riahannon
Anonymous
Date: 09/02/2006 - 10:43 pm
Title: Some place sleazy.
such a cute, well-written filler for the episode. I always do wonder how they got from the crypt to the bar