Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/05/2013 - 05:08 pm
Title: From Flawed on
Very, very sweet. A good editing to get rid of the grammar errors would make this an even better read.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/05/2013 - 01:39 am
Title: Awake
Great story, but the grammar errors are very distracting!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/05/2013 - 01:15 am
Title: 7:37 pm
Good start. There are a few typos; for example, a few times it says "where" and it should be "were."
Reviewer: riz Signed
Date: 02/16/2012 - 07:25 pm
Title: From Flawed on
loved it!!!
Reviewer: Shay Signed
Date: 01/21/2012 - 12:17 pm
Title: From Flawed on
great story
Reviewer: Alien
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 01:56 pm
Title: From Flawed on
I realz liked this story itš very good
Reviewer: VICTORIA
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/2007 - 12:19 am
Title: From Flawed on
Great story! I can't believe it's two years old and this is the first time I've read it. Don't know if authors still check for reviews on their old fics, but hopefully you'll find this and be pleased that someone just got alot of enjoyment from one of your less recent stories. Off to read more of your fics now.
Reviewer: VICTORIA
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/2007 - 09:32 pm
Title: 7:37 pm
My gut reaction to the first chap? Bloody brilliant luv.
Reviewer: Kimmie
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/2006 - 11:44 am
Title: From Flawed on
I just read your story from beg to end ... loved it. Great piece of Spuffy. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up.
Reviewer: sweet_smiley_smiley
Anonymous
Date: 06/02/2006 - 08:33 pm
Title: Flawed
Great poem it fits the story and it sounds like it would also go real well with the third season of "Alias"
Reviewer: virce
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2005 - 12:25 pm
Title: From Flawed on
Wow lindsay... you wrote one hell of a good story here. ;) I love it. I just have one teeny tiny complain. You could use a beta. ;) Keep writing sweetheart!
Reviewer: Taty_1973
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2005 - 05:25 am
Title: From Flawed on
Awwww...this story was awesome! Thank you SO much for sharing it with us. I loved the poem, so touching. You did a great work, I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Ruby
Anonymous
Date: 09/10/2005 - 03:23 pm
Title: From Flawed on
heyy i really like the plot of the story n the poem was really pretty, did u write it??
Reviewer: Sarah1800
Anonymous
Date: 09/06/2005 - 10:40 am
Title: From Flawed on
this was such a cool story i liked the fact it was reallllly happy even though spike had a tortured background. i also loved the spongebath scene! ;)
Reviewer: rockerbaby
Anonymous
Date: 08/30/2005 - 01:53 pm
Title: From Flawed on
Just found this story and read it all the way through. Very beautiful story. The poem in chapter 15 was fabulous. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 08/29/2005 - 02:39 am
Title: 7:37 pm
Wow. This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it and the poem was awesome. I read your other poems, which were great also. But this is one of the best fics I've read in a while. I hope you write something else soon!
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 08/27/2005 - 10:52 pm
Title: From Flawed on
Great chap - I liked it lots, Take care, C ; )
Reviewer: kimber
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2005 - 05:21 am
Title: From Flawed on
Lovely story....
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/27/2005 - 02:09 am
Title: From Flawed on
I R&R before - ♥
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/27/2005 - 02:08 am
Title: Flawed
I R&R before - ♥ it! *sigh* - but the old one is gone...
Reviewer: theladyofspike
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:33 am
Title: From Flawed on
LOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! L-O-V-E-D- I-T!!!
THANKS FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!! ;)
Reviewer: theladyofspike
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:27 am
Title: Flawed
OMG I LOVED SO MUCH THAT POEM, do you mind if i post it on my space? Of course I'll say that you wrote it. Here you have the adress: http://spaces.msn.com/members/valepuig2805/
Loved the chappy, btw.
Reviewer: beasleysmom
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2005 - 07:12 pm
Title: From Flawed on
That was a really sweet ending. I so loved this fic and I can't wait to read more of your work. Kuddos on a job well done! Much Spuffy luv, Angela
Reviewer: LN Angel
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2005 - 05:29 pm
Title: Flawed
I truly like this story, and that from the beginning ! It's sweet, funny, romantic and very fairytale like, what with the sleeping beauty (our gorgeous Spike) being awaken by a kiss from his soulmate (because we all know that's what Spike & his Goldilocks are, right ?)...
As for the poem, I just think that, like Spike would put it, " it's bloody brilliant !!! " ... It's very well written, it moves me, it makes me feel, because what you say in it is so true... Honestly, a real piece of art for me.
Helen, a real fan from France
(Sorry for the eventual mistakes in my english grammar, I read and understand english much better than I write it !!! lol)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Your english writing is fine, no worries! Im so glad that you like the story and i hope i can keep you liking it, it means so much to me that it moved you. XXX take care Helen
Linz
Reviewer: blondiebear
Anonymous
Date: 08/05/2005 - 01:46 am
Title: Flawed
that poem was sooooo good. loved it sooo much. o wow!!! great job. loved it. great job oh the chapter was great too. lol. post soon. love it.
