Reviewer: ScoobyDawn
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/2013 - 02:27 pm
Title: Sonograms
Wow, really?!! His parents gave him his first condom at 10yrs old... what irresponsible pricks! That's not 'cool' it's paddling in condoning your child being abused. If they are supposed to be 'good parents', I'd change that age if I were you.
Anyway... that aside, I'm really enjoying this fic.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 12/12/2012 - 07:19 pm
Title: Epilouge
Great story, ended so nicely. Needs editing; grammar and punctuation issues made it difficult to read at times.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 07/17/2010 - 07:00 pm
Title: Epilouge
really enjoyed ur story. very heartfelt and inspiring
Reviewer: bloodypet
Anonymous
Date: 04/26/2009 - 09:37 pm
Title: Epilouge
this was great love the ending kids aways comeing in at the worst times. lol keep them coming
Reviewer: bloodypet Signed
Date: 04/26/2009 - 06:19 pm
Title: Birthday Surprises
that was the best yet i loved that song its from one of my fave movies and think you should mail this to every guy around they could learn something. this is how you treat a woman start taking note boys!
Reviewer: jj
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/2009 - 12:01 am
Title: Epilouge
amazing
Reviewer: Olinka
Anonymous
Date: 10/14/2008 - 01:10 am
Title: Bronze
Buffy and .. Xander..... what a F*K!!!!
Reviewer: lalena
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2008 - 09:10 pm
Title: Epilouge
i love his fic one of my faves.you rock!
Reviewer: mrsdarling
Anonymous
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:32 pm
Title: Epilouge
lol oh wasnt that the perfect ending! Your amazingly talented and thank you for sharing
Reviewer: mrsdarling
Anonymous
Date: 08/30/2007 - 10:27 pm
Title: Everyone Knows
I am from the USA and everytime you use the word jumper I thought you were reffering to a dress style top so I did a search and found this....
Q] From Helen Schupp: “I’m curious about different meanings of the word jumper as an article of clothing. In the US, this refers to a type of dress with a pinafore-style top worn with a blouse or shirt; when my Australian daughter-in-law uses it, she means what I, an American English speaker, call a sweater or a sweatshirt.”
[A] The British usage also describes a sweater or pullover, that is, a knitted garment with long sleeves for the upper part of the body, though my impression is that pullover is rather old-fashioned, with sweater now much more common. Jumper seems to have appeared about the middle of the nineteenth century, originally for what the Oxford English Dictionary describes as “A kind of loose outer jacket or shirt reaching to the hips”, in other words what I would call a fisherman’s smock. The origin has nothing to do with the verb to jump, but comes from the dialect jump or jup, meaning a man’s short coat or a woman’s under-bodice or tunic. This may derive in turn from the French juppe, a petticoat (now in modern French, jupe, “skirt”), which ultimately derived from the Arabic jubba, a loose outer garment.
The word has evolved differently in Britain and the US; British usage has moved towards a garment that is specifically woollen, the US towards any upper-body garment for women. The OED refers to a catalogue of 1908 which talks about a loose-fitting blouse worn over a skirt, from which Americans later derived jumper suit for a jumper and skirt combination; I’ve found a plate in a Sears, Roebuck catalogue of 1916 that uses jumper frock to describe a pinafore dress worn over a blouse or shirt, which seems to be the original term, later shortened to jumper.
I always find it so interesting how I say a word and think of it as one thing and someone else might say it and it means something totally different.
this story is awesome by the way! you rock!
~Noel Darling
Reviewer: fyreburned
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/2007 - 08:20 am
Title: Epilouge
Was searching for some slightly older completed fics that I might've missed, since summer's fic-update-slump seems now to have officially arrived... and, I am glad I went looking! I read it straight thru, and enjoyed it! So very sweet! Especially loved the Wedding Singer songs inclusion.
Con-Crit: Spelling, grammar, & especially punctuation could use some attending to... so, perhaps a beta? And, use of defined "story break points", ie ways in which you switch from one scenario to a totally different one, such as when significant amounts of time has passed. In 'net fanfics, perhaps double-spacing between paragraphs, or breaking the paragraphs up with a bar of some sort, such as a line typed across the page to indicate a break.
However, enjoyed it!
(And please forgive my own typos & mistakes, plus probable lack of wordwrap, as I'm reading & posting from my cell-phone browser.)
Good luck & keep writing!
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Reviewer: Missy
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2007 - 01:45 am
Title: Epilouge
Oh Bugger! ROTFL!!! Nothing worse then being caught in the act by your kids!! Great story! Really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Vicky
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:36 pm
Title: Epilouge
Awesome!!!! do another ! do another !
Reviewer: tamara
Anonymous
Date: 01/16/2007 - 07:14 pm
Title: Epilouge
i loved it ! *hugs*
Reviewer: Stephanie Renee
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2007 - 11:04 pm
Title: Gossip
Sorry to do this because this fic is sooooo great but I think you kinda messed up you put dinner instead of lunch a couple of times and I know it is annoying when people tell you but hey I thought you should know
Reviewer: cheysma2000
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:25 pm
Title: Epilouge
I loved this. The ending was cute too.
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 01/02/2007 - 08:45 pm
Title: Epilouge
AWWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOOO CUTE, SWEET AND WONDERFUL. A PERFECT ENDING. i loved this story so much and am so glad that i read it. the end was brillant and how everything ended was perfect. i really enjoyed reading this story and i think that you're an amazing writer. thank u for writing this fic, it was fantastic and i cant wait to read more of your work.
Reviewer: J
Anonymous
Date: 12/23/2006 - 03:17 pm
Title: Epilouge
LMAO, oh man, that's what they get for doing the hanky panky in the afternoon when you got a kid. Me and my boyfriend learned that the hard way with our daughter. Great story, I hope to see more of your work!
Reviewer: chibi
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 10:15 pm
Title: Slumming
omg! i loved it!!!more stories just like it please!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 05:04 pm
Title: Epilouge
Oh yeah, Buffy is happy now (and lucky too to have what she has). Their life turned out well.
Sorry to see it end but I loved the epilogue (and the story too); it was fun too. And Emma has a bad timing *grins*
Reviewer: Tanja
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 08:27 am
Title: Epilouge
Beautiful story, I really had a great time rading it. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Helen
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/2006 - 05:28 pm
Title: Epilouge
That was such a great ending to a great story!!! "Mommy....Daddy what are you doing?" lmfao!!!! Great job!!!!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/2006 - 04:54 pm
Title: Epilouge
Loved this fic!
Reviewer: Hana
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/2006 - 04:17 pm
Title: Epilouge
That was a funny ending to the story. I've been reading along for awhlie and I really like the way this tory has developed. I hope you continue to write because you're really good!!!
Reviewer: blondiebear
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/2006 - 03:36 pm
Title: Epilouge
oh wow. lol. greatending and great story. loved it bunches and so sad that it's ending. amazing job.
