Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 04/14/2012 - 12:52 am
Title: Prophecy Girl
So nice to see more of this. Glad they are still just being, whatever it is they are. Hope he does go and visit her in LA. Would like to believe that she doesn't come back from summer vacation so angry. Got to believe that Spike makes things better. :) Hope you've got a few more in you before the writers block. :) Update soon!
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2012 - 05:02 pm
Title: Out of Mind, Out of Sight
No worries! The chapter was great! Looking forward to more
Reviewer: Caunwen
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2012 - 05:53 am
Title: Out of Mind, Out of Sight
Honest to god, you are one of the best writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Please, please, please, keep up the amazing work.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2012 - 03:53 am
Title: Out of Mind, Out of Sight
A very interesting reveal of the truth there. So glad to see that he didn't kill Nikki, even if he had some interesting reasons to keep that bit of info to himself. Still a place for him and Buffy to go, even if they aren't quite sure where that is yet. Really like his explanation, and glad he's back in the fold with Giles. Update soon! It's going to get real interesting soon!
Reviewer: Dragonfly_B Signed
Date: 01/06/2012 - 02:22 am
Title: Nightmares
I actually enjoy that you're pacing yourself! It really helps the story progress in a more natural way. I liked Spike's honesty in this chapter and I'm also really curious about the NY Slayer. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear it :D
Glad you enjoyed the chapter!! :)
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2012 - 01:17 am
Title: Nightmares
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2012 - 11:38 pm
Title: Nightmares
Love Spikes mini vamp-Buffy crush. And the fact he had to find her at 3 am to tell her that just because vamp-Buffy may be gorgeous, he'd still stake her. :) Good on him! So curious about the whole New York slayer bit, to. Can't blame Buffy for being curious. Still leaving me wanting more. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. Yeah, you have to expect that Spike wouldn't HATE the sight of vampire-Buffy... only problem was his saying it out loud, lol.
Thanks again :D
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2011 - 09:28 pm
Title: The Puppet Show
Yeah, they had a real life serious talk about the status of things. Not actual progress, but being on the same page and correcting past confusions can only help. And when another long lived demon fighter can give some helpful eye witness accounts and lifestyle advice, well that probably helps things along, too. Awesome, update soon!
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was going for with this chapter. Just... lots of exposition between them, but no actual resolution yet. Glad to see it came across :D
Thank you so much for your review, I'm happy you enjoyed it, and as always, can't wait to hear what you think of the next one :D
Reviewer: Less
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2011 - 12:38 pm
Title: The Puppet Show
Great writing. The details were so vivid! Great chapter can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2011 - 12:18 pm
Title: The Puppet Show
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: Dragonfly_B Signed
Date: 12/20/2011 - 03:14 am
Title: The Puppet Show
I was about to go to bed when I saw your update... and I couldn't say no to that! It was a great chapter- I liked the dummy in that ep. I think this is the first time I see him on a fanfic and I loved that he gives her a new perspective. Can't wait for the next one!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! I was the cause of someone's insomnia? That actually makes me kinda proud/happy, lol!!
Really glad that it was worth your while though, and that you enjoyed this incarnation of Sid. I definitely thought he'd have something valuable to say about Spike, and/or Buffy's relationship with him :)
Thank you so, so much for your kind words! Hope you continue to enjoy it! :D
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/2011 - 12:50 pm
Title: I, Robot... You, Jane
Poor girl, that really didn't seem at all what he meant. Poor Spike trying to do the right thing and again getting the wrong result. Of course it's not "coincidence" that they keep bumping into each other. :) And of course the more she tries to avoid him, the more amazing that collision will actually be when they can't stand it anymore. And the amazing continues! Update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you Nony! Yeah, those two crazy kids just can't figure things out, eh? ;)
Glad you're enjoying it so much! Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 12/07/2011 - 09:12 am
Title: I, Robot... You, Jane
Great update! You write the awkwardness and misunderstand very well. Really enjoyed! Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was very anxious about getting the awkwardness/misunderstanding right without it being ridiculous or unbelievable. Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Reviewer: Dragonfly_B Signed
Date: 12/07/2011 - 03:00 am
Title: I, Robot... You, Jane
Yay! Update!!! (I get so excited when I see your story on my email).Great chapter- I didn't mind the angst at all! I hope things ease up a bit in RL =)
Author's Response: Wee! Thank you!! Glad you're enjoying it. I don't want to be too much of a pain with the angst, but at the same time, the characters gotta do what they've gotta do, lol.
Thank you!!
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 12/01/2011 - 09:56 am
Title: Awful Poet
I just had some downtime, and was able to read the last couple of chapters, which are amazing. Glad to see things between Buffy and Spike are better. Hopefully, Xander can get over his crush on Buffy and accept Spike into the scooby gang.
If Spike got the soul, does that mean Angelus is running around?
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm happy you're enjoying it so far :)
Heh, yeah... Xander is such a pain in the butt-insky sometimes when it comes to his Buffy-crush.
And, hmmm.... that is a VERY good question about Angelus.... again I say, hmmmmmm! ;)
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2011 - 02:40 am
Title: Awful Poet
Glad he got to speak his piece. Maybe we're not quite out to the other side yet, but we're getting there. He's got more story to tell, and she's got a lot of show to put on to resist him. Super well done. Already I want more. You have totally motivated me to have a Buffy season one marathon this Thanksgiving just so I can go a draw even more parallels about how Spike is better than Angel. :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe, well, any time my fic inspires a Buffy rewatch, I consider it a job well done ;)
So happy you enjoyed it, can't wait to see what you think of future chapters :D
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2011 - 02:19 am
Title: The Bloody
Poor Spike and his rookie mistake. I find his track record quite interesting here, too. Is he souled when he kills a slayer in 1977? I'm sure you will tell us, but the question does make me wonder. Still an enigma that has made a home in Buffy's heart, even if he did trash it. (Great analogy!) Can't help who you love.
Author's Response: Hehe, yes... explanations will happen eventually, but for now, I think Spike just wants to keep some of that stuff to himself.
So happy you enjoyed it, and thank you for the analogy love... as I mentioned to another reader, that's one passage I was particularly proud of. Glad to see others enjoyed it too :)
Thanks for your comments!! :D
Reviewer: SeaPea
Anonymous
Date: 11/21/2011 - 12:20 am
Title: Awful Poet
I can't believe how much I'm enjoying this. It's so well written, and it's so nice to see how Spike would have handled everything.
Author's Response: Oh, wow! You just made my day! My week!! I am so, so, pleased to hear how much you're enjoying it... thank you!! :D
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 11/20/2011 - 09:14 am
Title: Awful Poet
Wonderful trifecta of chapters. Each stood on their own but melted into the next one fluently. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments. Honestly, you're too kind :) Glad you enjoyed it!!
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 11/20/2011 - 08:58 am
Title: The Bloody
Another amazing chapter. Absolutely loved this line: "He wasn’t some fledge. Some clueless moron incapable of controlling the ability of his demon to make ripples on the pond of his face" So brilliantly worded!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I was a little concerned about one or two little scenes, but I'm glad to see that they went over pretty well :D
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 11/20/2011 - 08:41 am
Title: William
Amazing chapter, and I'm excited I have two more!!!
Author's Response: Haha, glad to hear it. When I finally got around to posting this thing I was worried it would be a little TOO long! ;D
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 11/20/2011 - 02:46 am
Title: William
I was so excited to see more of this, and then when I discovered it was a three parter, I was beside myself. Unfortunately, it is too late tonight to indulge in more than one part, and this part rocked so hard, I don't feel too bad knowing there is still more for later!! I kinda wish she would have met Spike first, and I love that he didn't go all "vamp" on her when they kissed. Spike is too in control of his demon to let that happen. Their chemistry is magic, and though I'm sure there will be more of them in the future, I'm glad they are savoring this moment right now, before things get complicated by asking all those important questions. He riles her in a good, joshing kind of way, and can still be so sincere. This, right here seems to be the grand turning point. I cannot wait to see what more is to come. Fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Man oh man! What stunning comments! I can hardly believe that I deserve such kind words. Thank you so, so much!! :D
I hope you like the following part(s) to this chapter :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2011 - 01:56 am
Title: The Pack
When it mattered, Buffy thought… if such a situation ever presented itself, when it really mattered… Spike would do right by her. -- So cute, and touching. I love the soft smoulder, when it just sneaks up on you when you're not paying attention. The way he actually does seem to care, and all the ways that no hot blooded girl could resist that look from Him. It's slow, but will so be worth it when they get there, all the bumps. Update soon!
“Yeah Spike,... You can stay.”
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this scene. Haha, and yes... that look is freaking DEADLY ;D
Thanks again for your comments; glad you're enjoying it!! :)
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 11/13/2011 - 03:44 am
Title: The Pack
Enjoyed their interaction, and your explanation of Buffy's altercation with Xander in Hyena form. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you're still enjoying it :D
Reviewer: Ally
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2011 - 01:43 pm
Title: Welcome to the Hellmouth
Thank you for the great story.I love back to season two with a wiser Buffy.I am verry courious about the new Spike.Please excuse my clupsy english.Looking forward for an update.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, I'm not sure if she's gonna be wiser, but... things will certainly be different for her this time around with Spike in the picture.
Thanks again for the comments, I really appreciate them :)
