Reviewer: procida
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/2013 - 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 14: 'Change the World'
Good job the characters are deep and particular and anyone has a special personal story. You have to work on sex scenes cause they aren't at the dame level of the parts of the story
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/2010 - 10:45 pm
Title: Epilogue
wow - this is the second or third story of yours that i've read and thoroughly enjoyed! enjoyed the characters, the humor, the plot (well, the whole xander thing was just sad) - truly a great fic-ride!
Reviewer: Agatha
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/2008 - 08:10 am
Title: Chapter 45: 'Buffy's Biggest Fans!'
Lol.. Spike looking up and down when eulogising Holden is too cute! I'm new to the site and I found this story today and gobbled every chapter at one go so sorry for the lack of reviews from me. Love the mystery but especially the Spuffy interaction. Kudos to you :)
Reviewer: sharon
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/2008 - 09:57 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Who 'Is' Buffy Summers?
I really like how you give the characters life by explaining what has happened to them, and I think you are very creative.
Reviewer: haron
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2007 - 06:19 pm
Title: Chapter 38: 'Remembrances and Revelations'
I did think that Xander would be on the list, but never suspected him in the killing. Great story
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/2007 - 05:36 pm
Title: Chapter 30: 'Vanity'
I love the letter. I had a feeling he had something to do with Buffy lsing her baby. Just for the record, I think that Xander and Angel are going to be on that list
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/2007 - 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter 27: 'Never Going To Let You Leave'
I have a feeling that the key opens the lavender desk that Holden left to Spike in his will, but I still haven't figured out the significance of the etched letters yet.
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/2007 - 05:38 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Who 'Is' Buffy Summers?
Looks like it is going to get very interesting
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/2007 - 04:51 pm
Title: Chapter 2: 'Cold Hard Facts'
Looks like the start of another wonderful story. I am already loving Spike.
Reviewer: Spikes mrs
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2007 - 08:52 am
Title: Chapter 45: 'Buffy's Biggest Fans!'
Just a little something the White Cliffs at Dover don't exactly look over the Atlantic Ocean it's the English Channel part of the North Sea ....Other Than that I've really enjoyed this story so far just the Epilogue to read now....
Author's Response: Sorry, my geography is a little off...
Thank you so much for your support.
spuf
Reviewer: Fia
Anonymous
Date: 04/22/2007 - 06:23 am
Title: Chapter 3: 'Honour Among Thieves'
Great story! Love the plot, and how Spike is all manly!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 10/02/2006 - 06:14 pm
Title: Epilogue
I loved it a little disappointed that you didn't mention Willow and Tara or Giles in the end when they were talking about everyone.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/2006 - 05:35 am
Title: Chapter 30: 'Vanity'
loved the letter about Buffy, so true.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 10/01/2006 - 04:02 pm
Title: Chapter 17: 'If It's Tuesday...'
OH that would be good if he was inlove with her as well and it benfitted her in the end.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 10/01/2006 - 09:36 am
Title: Chapter 4: Who 'Is' Buffy Summers?
Just to let you know I love it so far. I know it is long done, just wanted you to know.
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/2006 - 08:27 am
Title: Chapter 38: 'Remembrances and Revelations'
I'm still sticking with the one armed man.....you know he did it :)
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/2006 - 08:00 am
Title: Chapter 36: 'I Am Here For You Buffy'
I'm pretty sure it's the one armed man.....never can go wrong with that :)
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/2006 - 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 19: 'The Question is.....?'
Hate to say this but damn even I could come up with reasonable doubt in this case. The only thing they have is that Amy was placed at the scene of the crime close to the time of the death of the victims. I know that the American justice system is ficle but damn even a half assed lawyer would be able to blow Angels case out of the water. You really need to punch up the evidence part of the story to make it belivable. I'm having fun reading the love part between Spike and Buffy but I find myself giggling at the whole crime thing, feels more like the cops in sunnydale just arrests the person closest to the crime scene when there is a murder and then charge them with it.
Maybe there is evidence and you just haven't bothered to mention it but still if you make some sort of suspense/thriller/cop drama all those things are really important to make it belivable.
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/2006 - 03:48 pm
Title: Chapter 9: 'Spy Games'
Hmm not to nit pick or anything but I have yet to hear any real evidence that would make it an open and shut case as to Amy being the killer. I mean her being close to the crime seen at the time of the murder is hardly what I would call conclusive. What happened to the video surveilance? Is Warren even telling the truth? Where is the murder weapon? How come no body seemed to have heard anything? What about other physical evidence?
You really need to start dealing with this stuff cause it really makes Spikes accusations about the SunnyD PD being completly incompetent very true. Gut feelings and shit like that don't make a case, evidence do. Nobody seems to have intetogated Amy or anybody else that would have been in the building or lived there. It all feels like really bad police work.
Author's Response: Good catch! Yes, I am totally backing Spike's 'Sunnydale PD' inaccuracy! Remember how in the first seasons of BTVS; the Sunnydale PD kept passing everything off as 'Bikers on PCP?!'
That's why I think Joss threw that plot line in there in the beginning of Season 6.
Anyway, truthfully this story is completed and it is not a short one. As times goes on things will become clearer where Amy is concerned but muddled where people Buffy thought she could trust.
Spike and Buffy are destined for each other in this fic and soon, if you keep reading, there will be a major twist in the plot line! I hope you like it.
spuf
Reviewer: heathert@earthlink.net
Anonymous
Date: 09/28/2005 - 06:22 pm
Title: Epilogue
This is one of the best all-human Spuffy AU's I've read. I'm so glad you stuck with this fiction and didn't take an "easy" way out to end it quickly.
I'm looking forward to reading your other fics.
Thanks again for such an enjoyable read!!
Heather
Reviewer: DK
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2005 - 11:11 pm
Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed your story. It was very well thought out and all complete at the end. The characters were great and using Xander as the hitman was surprising pulled the wool over everyones eyes. You should get awards for this story,
Reviewer: Ashlee Signed
Date: 04/17/2005 - 01:01 pm
Title: Epilogue
Aww, no need to thank me- I love this fic (and all your others!). Such a sweet ending and I loved that Winston got his own mate :-) I'm sad to see this one end, but it was a great story- very intricate plot and it all came together perfectly. Great job!
Reviewer: Ashlee Signed
Date: 04/17/2005 - 12:55 pm
Title: Chapter 45: 'Buffy's Biggest Fans!'
‘Thank God for sensible females!' Isn't that the truth :-) Although, in my family it's sensible males, but that's another story. Great chapter- I love how Buffy smuggled Winston into the hospital.
Reviewer: Ashlee Signed
Date: 04/17/2005 - 12:48 pm
Title: Chapter 44: 'Williamson and Winston'
Aww, I like Spike's parents! Imagine meeting your daughter-in-law and having her invite you in the house while she's holding a gun LOL!
Reviewer: Ashlee Signed
Date: 04/17/2005 - 12:35 pm
Title: Chapter 43: 'Healing'
Glad Amy is free and clear, but that's a heck of a cliffhanger, so I'm off to read...
