Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 06/03/2009 - 05:03 pm
Title: Last Chapter
lol the whole thing with HAL was hillarious. also.. so is william vamp spike or is he human? great story tho
Reviewer: PinkSatin
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/2009 - 05:13 am
Title: Last Chapter
Okay. So I was in love with this UNTIL I read the ending. It made me sad. I want to see more. Mainly of what happens between Spike and Buffy. I'm kinda all mad...But other than that. I LOVE IT! :) haha.
Keep up the great writing :)
Reviewer: Olinka
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2008 - 04:54 pm
Title: Last Chapter
Hmm.. is Spike human now, too? Does he remember anything?
Reviewer: Alien
Anonymous
Date: 10/27/2007 - 09:45 am
Title: Last Chapter
It's beautiful
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed
Date: 08/16/2007 - 08:48 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Sorry for the late review. I'm loving this but have to download it to read it since I'm on dial-up in OZ. I'll get back to you when I finish reading. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: jess
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/2007 - 03:35 pm
Title: Last Chapter
hi...
the story is really great...
but i donīt like the end...
i mean i would prefer that Buffy remembers Spike or William.... THAT would be a grat End ^^
but so-.... i really like this story ^^
Reviewer: buffy25122003 Signed
Date: 07/24/2007 - 01:01 pm
Title: Last Chapter
gr8 ending just wish there was a lil more spuffy in the ending, gr8 job, cant wait to read more of your work.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 07:15 pm
Title: Last Chapter
The ending was kind of sad 'cause William couldn't be her William. Loved the rest of the story, though.
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 01:48 am
Title: Last Chapter
So glad it kinda has a Spuffy ending, but is William human? If he is, I wonder what changed his mind? Two years isn't a very long time unless you're human. That was some twist though. Enjoyed reading it, thanks.
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 01:38 am
Title: Chapter 19
Buffy will be human snd foget about him? That's not a ggod thing for either of them, not really. Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Guess I won't know for sure until I read the last chapter. Loved that Spike had Angelus staked himself!
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 18
A claiming as well! Forgot about the Queens sire thing, but he did it out of love, the best way possible for Buffy. Hate that Anelus had to take away from there beautiful moment. And it was beautiful. You did great.
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 01:15 am
Title: Chapter 17
As you must know, ir was a great foreplay scene. Let her get a taste of what was to come and I do mean come! You did a great job.
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 01:08 am
Title: Chapter 16
Sex 101, perfect Anya style. Will she be using the book? Sex scenes are pretty hard to do, the first time around. I know you'll do just fine. Now to see for myself. Excellent chapter.
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 12:56 am
Title: Chapter 15
I con't read over here for a while and you finish your story! Well, I guess this time I can finish it. Poor Buffy, no doubt Spike is listening. Hal? OMG, she must feel like she wants to dust herself, but is might be fun to watch this next chapter.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/21/2007 - 08:48 am
Title: Last Chapter
So they really did it, did give Buffy the poison. Never really asked her what she wanted, they just did what they thought would be the best for her, including Spike.
For me something is missing at the end, it's "jumping". Ending with Buffy getting the poison to make her human, Faith hiding the diary. And then, two years later Buffy sits in the sun, meeting William. So Spike became human too even if he never wanted it? It just seems as something is missing (like with William being there at the end).
It's good to see the story have a happy ending, but you did speed it up too much, not 'knotting the loose ends'. That's a bit sad even if the story had a good end. ~ I hope I could explain myself / express myself right. That's how I felt about it.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/21/2007 - 08:22 am
Title: Chapter 19
That's a great sacrifice Spike is willing to take if Buffy won't remember him when he's human. All for love...
Queen's Sire? That worked well defending Angelus.
Reviewer: Ellashy
Anonymous
Date: 07/20/2007 - 08:18 pm
Title: Last Chapter
aww that was sweet, really glad u didnt end it on a sad note
Author's Response: I'm glad I didn't too.
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 07/20/2007 - 07:22 pm
Title: Last Chapter
Good story, but a little confusing. Did Spike become human too, and why did she forget everything and go valley girl?
Author's Response: Sorry about it being confusing. I have gotten so bored of this story and wanted to end it ASAP. The blood caused the Vampire to forget all about thier vampire life. They become human. I just wrote her as how I would see a woman like her in our time period. After some thinking Spike made his desicion and took the blood. Yes he was human and couldn't remember. Sorry for the confusion.
Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed
Date: 07/20/2007 - 06:40 pm
Title: Last Chapter
awesome ending:) i loved it hehe
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/20/2007 - 05:47 pm
Title: Last Chapter
It was a sad ending, I wish he would have given her a choice on what she wanted, then he might not of thought have felt like he was betraying her.
He also kept some for himself I am assumming, I wonder why he didn't take it with her, then they could have woke up together and continued on being lovers. I would have been easy to put some in both glasses.
Loved it even if it was sad.
Author's Response: I wanted to show that Spjike was not only in love with her but his vampiric-ness too. I wanted it to seem like he had to think for a while before he could make his desision.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/20/2007 - 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 19
Oh please don't turn her human again and take her from Spike.
I love what they did to Angelus.
More please.
Author's Response: Maybe... Maybe not...
Anyways, more came.
Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed
Date: 07/20/2007 - 04:09 am
Title: Chapter 19
lol they made him sing lol........awesome chapter:) cant wait for the next update hehe:) *claps*
Author's Response: I've been waiting to make something like that for so long. Angelus at his moment of major embarassment.
Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:11 am
Title: Chapter 18
ive forgotton....what does being the wueens sire mean again lol its been a while since ive read the previous chapters and i cant remember which one it was mentioned in
awesome chapter btw:) i loved it and cant wait for the next installment
Author's Response: The Queen is the leader of the vampires, the only two stronger than her is the Queen Sire and the Master. They have control over all the others. It will come in handy next chapter. Thanks.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/19/2007 - 05:34 am
Title: Chapter 18
So in other words Spike has more power than Angel now. Ha looks good on Angel.
More please.
Author's Response: Yeah, Angelus is skrewed.
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 18
Yay!!! They're mated!!! Love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks.
