Reviewer: KIska12
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/2007 - 09:26 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Great story! Very much enjoyable! please continue!
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 06:55 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Hee hee!! Well done. Whew! That was close. But Charles is a good judge of character.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/06/2007 - 03:22 pm
Title: Chapter 21
*phew* So Fred is okay. Gunn's gang got her. Wow, the atmosphere got icy. Gunn was a bit better than Briggs; this guy is really hostile....
Well Buffy isn't so far off. Spike is a Slayer (of Slayers) and demons... she just didn't tell that he's a vampire. *gg* They'll find out soon enough I fear. Gunn isn't dumb.
Good that they parted so soon with the group or they would have find out. Better this way around :)
Reviewer: galatea
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 12:09 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter! I really loved Spike geeking out on the idea of being a slayer. "they came after us with their fangs, ‘cause that’s what vamps do, y’know, an’-" Totally hilarious. :-D
I'm so happy to have Spike and Buffy back together again!
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 11:14 am
Title: Chapter 21
This was a fast paced, funny chapter. You totally captured what a crap liar Spike is, and his asides had me laughing. Introducing Gunn's gang really added to the excitement.
This was great: "Buffy stared at him blankly. “Okay, how is it that the people on the hellmouth are more in the know than you? Are you telling me I actually needed to move to a big city to have a secret identity?” Her hands found her hips, her head tilting. “Superman was right all along. Who knew?”
Thanks for another entertaining chapter in this delightful story.
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 21
Loved It!!!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 06:37 am
Title: Chapter 21
And the character of Gunn is quite interesting, knowing when to just let it be. And Buffy all telling Spike this was the last time he got to be a slayer. Totally love that. Looking forward to the next update, whenever that is. I'm very patient.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 20
What a conversation. And they've only scratched the surface. At least she knows, and hopefully will come to her senses soon. Great chapter.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 10/06/2007 - 06:13 am
Title: Chapter 21
Oh Spike a slayer, I love it, and I had my fill of vampire for the night, well sorry with one wonder what they will do when they get to Fred's
Reviewer: blondiebear
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 01:09 am
Title: Chapter 21
cute. spike is such a dork. getting all excited over being a slayer. loved it. glad gunn and fred are in this. gives the story a nice change of pace. more soon.
Reviewer: tina
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2007 - 01:09 am
Title: Chapter 21
yay for spike there now on with the fun spuffyness
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2007 - 06:26 pm
Title: Chapter 20
Loved the chapter! Hope they get back together again!! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/2007 - 02:42 pm
Title: Chapter 20
That was an exciting well choreographed reunion. There was very little happy in the reunion after the initial kissing, but that rang true to the situation. Spike having all the answers after their separation also rings true. Here's hoping Buffy's in a forgiving mood...
Reviewer: Kirsi
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:51 pm
Title: Chapter 20
Really angsty now, but good. :) Keep it coming!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRtmkNuQ7h8&feature=RecentlyWatched&page=1&t=t&f=b
this song fits in the mood, I think. :)
Reviewer: Kirsi
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2007 - 12:53 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Oh, so lovely end to this chapter! :D
I really like to read this.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/30/2007 - 10:12 am
Title: Chapter 20
Update, yay :-D And how happy Buffy is seeing Spike. *read on* Oh but only till she remembered that the hurt she felt when separated from Spike. It was painful for Spike too? No use to think about the 'what if', too late for that. Hopefully Buffy will come around hopefully; Spike didn't have them both in pain on purpose.
Looking forward to more when you have time.
Reviewer: Kirsi
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2007 - 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 14
This is one of the greatest stories I've read here. :)
Reviewer: Kirsi
Anonymous
Date: 09/29/2007 - 04:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Really good and a bit creepy from the end. :) Makes me wonder what's next.
Reviewer: sue
Anonymous
Date: 09/29/2007 - 11:22 am
Title: Chapter 20
I just love the fact that these two can argue back and forth, back and forth .....with their mouths still moist from kisses and Buffy so pleased to see him and ....... then, as per usual, he then gets a Buffy-knucklesandwich. No love lost, or gained, because it's all there, under the clever guise of outrage and sharp words and blunt fists. Theirs is a potency which you've just multiplied with the intensity of a claim.
All follow Buffy so that the story can continue ....... thanks!
Reviewer: Nicki
Anonymous
Date: 09/29/2007 - 10:34 am
Title: Chapter 20
?Ahhhhhh, evil cliff hanger.!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/29/2007 - 06:45 am
Title: Chapter 20
OH that was good, I was wondering where Fred went.
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 09/29/2007 - 05:47 am
Title: Chapter 20
It was great for awhile.. but in normal Buffy fashion it turned into a hit and running away.
Glad to are back to this fic. Ah, Spike.. alone again.
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 09/29/2007 - 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 20
Perfect Spike voice here. At least he'll be relieved to know "Fred" isn't male.
Predictable, that her main track is "something done to her"......it was always a two-way street.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 08/24/2007 - 01:22 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Buffy's illness and weakness were well described, and I'm loving Fred's over eager helpfulness. She's just what Buffy needs. The fight was surreal seen through Buffy's dizzy state, and I enjoyed the rush of power coming back to her harkening the return of Spike.
Now that he's found her, how will Buffy react to the truth of the claim and the hold it has over them both? I'm looking forward to finding out.
Thanks for another entertaining chapter.
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 08/24/2007 - 01:09 pm
Title: Chapter 18
Fred's reaction to Buffy's wild claims was delightful, and Buffy having a friend when she's hurting so badly is a real balm. Spike feeling remorse about letting her go without explaining the claim is also soothing. Buffy would have been happy to find Spike at the entrance to the library, but she was feeling particularly weak and vulnerable.
I'm looking forward to how Fred affects Buffy's flagging spirits, and how it affects her reaction to Spike when they finally meet up again.
This was another entertaining, well written chapter.
