Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 06/04/2012 - 04:13 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Very, very sweet Spuffiness!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really proud of this story and it means a lot that you read and commented.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 01/11/2012 - 08:04 am
Title: Chapter 4
oh this is so sweet! i just love it. now i'm super late for work, but you know what? it was totally worth it. i'm so glad i got to read this, after the epic that was Name. this was so great hun i really enjoyed it :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! I wanted to write something much smaller after finishing name.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 01/11/2012 - 07:46 am
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
that's what she thinks? that he left because he didn't want to be with her again? seems like no matter what incarnation buffy is still slow on the uptake about what spike wants. still this was sooo great. i'm soo gonna be late this morning, but it's def worth it :)
Author's Response: Well, he did reject her repeatedly and never told her why, so it makes sense she'd think he didn't want to be with her again.I'm sorry to make you late!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 01/11/2012 - 07:25 am
Title: Chapter 2-Eight Years Later
wow that was intense. i mean can you imagine a 3 year old learning all they'd done in a past life, especially one like Spike's? that's crazy. oh and I loved spike's comment about her being his Tara. omg it was so cute! loved it!!!
Author's Response: I was going for crazy intensity, glad you liked.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 01/11/2012 - 07:07 am
Title: Chapter 1
omg! this is so cute! this is why tara was smiling he was in a better place. you think this really happens? like reincarnation and why people feel like they're in the wrong body? interesting. totally interesting. i love the concept :)
Author's Response: I don't know about reincarnation, but it was a neat story idea.
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2011 - 04:27 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Loved both stories - It was great seeing their reunion. It was odd picturing her as a Kara particularly at the end when she didn't want to be called "Buffy." But I really enjoyed the interplay of all the characters and found it both original and true to form. Great work. I look forward to reading whatever else you have out there... Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have several things out here and look forward to your comments!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/11/2011 - 04:14 pm
Title: Chapter 4
OH I loved it and wished they was more, see what her friend said and Tara rejoining them, wish there was an epiloge to the story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: evelynferguson
Anonymous
Date: 09/05/2011 - 09:43 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Love, love, love this story. Is that the ending ?
Author's Response: It is the ending. I just had this brief idea of what it would be like for them to be reincarnated. It didn't seem to fit with the tone of the rest of the story, but I was interested in how that scenario would play out.
Reviewer: evelynferguson
Anonymous
Date: 09/05/2011 - 09:05 pm
Title: Chapter 1
I laughed out loud when I read the title in my inbox. The story has a great beginning. I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Glad you found it funny. You're the first person to mention that they got my joke! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Puddin
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2011 - 12:19 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Huzzah! You finished. Well, I loved that you had the balls to end "Name" so darkly, but I gotta be honest, this epilogue was really delicious! So many thoughtful touches. I especially liked the mirror. I also loved the thought that went into the changes in Billy's character - now that he didn't have the monster inside him. How he was more unguarded, gentler with her during sex, etc. Well done you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the changes in his character. Originally I put the mirror in because I was having a huge amount of trouble writing a love scene and thought it might be sexy. As soon as they got talking and the idea occurred to me of why he'd put it there, the tone changed and the whole thing fell into place without the naughtiness.
Reviewer: Sarra Ambrai
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2011 - 11:04 am
Title: Chapter 4
This was the perfect balm for Name. Sweet, but definitely not without it's obstacles. Thank you for the fabulous ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2011 - 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 4
So glad they got a real, honest to god happy ending and chance at peace. Love that there were no preambles. Eye contact, and "bam," the rest of their lives. A truly fitting ending to you interesting tale. Thanks so much for giving us some happy.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I love that you said, "Eye contact and 'bam' the rest of their lives." That was pretty much it, too. Everything that had happened to them was leading up to that point, really. They'd both figured out on their own that they couldn't be with anyone else given their history. Glad I could make you happy!
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/31/2011 - 11:06 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Amazing conclusion. Finally they have their happy ending! Thanks so much, Minx, for sharing! Big Hugs!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the conclusion and thanks for being so supportive!
Reviewer: hotbabe
Anonymous
Date: 08/31/2011 - 08:56 pm
Title: Chapter 4
That was a very nice reunion. They havent lost their connection after all these years. what will happen next after this? thanks for the update.
Author's Response: The story is done. They just live their lives from this point on out being that they're regular people now.
Reviewer: Photographynut Signed
Date: 08/31/2011 - 06:54 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 08/31/2011 - 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter 4
It's nice that they could have a happy ending after the sadnes of the earlier story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 08/31/2011 - 04:42 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Great ending. Clap, Clap, Clap, the good kind.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, hope the ending didn't feel rushed.
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/28/2011 - 06:04 pm
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
Enjoyed another person's perpective of how Kara is slightly isolated and keeps many secrets. Can't wait to read Kara and Billy meeting again!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2011 - 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
I'm pretty sure I left a composed review of this. I love the drama created by the separation between them. 2 creatures so drawn to each other. It is truly beautiful. i do hope they cross paths in this art installation, because separation will likely only work to destroy them. I do love it. Please, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Photographynut Signed
Date: 08/26/2011 - 03:39 pm
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
Wondering why Billy felt the need to stay out of touch with Kara? Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: He was afraid anything he said would spark her memories and he didn't want to cause her any pain.
Reviewer: Puddin
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2011 - 12:39 pm
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
I love your plot choices :) Love the character of plotting and how she "did the math" to ascertain why Kara still has her V-card.
And to have William channel his creativity into a neo steampunk venture? Bloody brilliant, that is! Made me grin very big! I love the hipster art snob touch to Constantine too :D
I adored the one-two punch of Josh's kiss. First recognizing that Will=Spike and the very NEXT realization - that she'd died. "Would you like another helping of what-the-hell-just-happened?" Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!I also was completely not specific on what William's art looked like. I mark it as a huge success you projected steam punk into the mix.
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2011 - 11:41 am
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
Aww pooh, Billy left to do a good thing and she got something totally different out of it. Understanble though, it is Buffy all the way. Kara is so sweet doing so much good. I love how she had a childhood this time and was still able to do so much good.
I wonder how Billy is going to act seeing Kara again, I wonder if he and Tara will tell Kara now that she knows.
I wonder when Tara dies is she going to be Billy's and Kara's child. I know totaly random. Having one of those moments.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like she had a childhood this time around. I tried to imply it was a nice one, too, with loving parents and good friends. All will be revealed in the next chapter!
Reviewer: demona424
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2011 - 12:25 am
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
A simply lovely chapter. I liked how it started from the point of view of Poppy looking at the enigma that is Kara/Buffy. So sad that Billy/Spike chose to to pull himself away and left her feeling like it was her fault, I'm not sure it was not his intention. Can't wait until they're reunited again.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the outside perspective on Kara/Buffy. My friend was looking through a two-thousand-ten baby book and Poppy was determined to be one of the coolest names you could give your daughter. I thought it would be funny to use it, seeing as our Poppy would be the right age to have a mom influenced by that book.
Reviewer: Michele
Anonymous
Date: 08/25/2011 - 10:55 pm
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
What an amazing chapter...I can't wait for them to get together again (*fingers crossed*)! I think this twist on the story is a really creative one, and I love where you're going with it so far. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad it was unexpected.
Reviewer: Laur987 Signed
Date: 08/25/2011 - 10:34 pm
Title: Chapter 3- Nine Years Later
Let me just say that you are an amazing writer. I feel like I'm listening to some of my cousins of indie friends when I read your work. There are just so many big, important words and I usually just super impressed by how articulate you are. It is honestly like reading a book and not fanfic. Let me just say among other things I completely loved the reference to CSI: Miami fanific! This chapter was exceptional! Absolutely and completely!
Author's Response: You're so sweet! I'm glad it feels like you're listening to your friends talk when you read one of these stories. Big, important words? I'd like to thank thesaurus.com. I leave it open when I write.
