Reviewer: SLaYeR
Anonymous
Date: 04/17/2007 - 11:23 pm
Title: Prologue
i very much love this movie its great, heath is hot n w.e but the story is almost exact to the script... lol it doesnt seem 'based' its almost copied aside from character changes. but its just my opinion = )
Reviewer: JAG
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2005 - 11:43 am
Title: Chapter 2
Now, normally I finish a story, but I can't due to the fact that this story, is nothing like the characheters, and everything like the movie. So, maybe, I'll give you some helpful critizism, Don't write stories exactly like a movie, and add your own pieces. For instance, you could use the same idea, but don't use every word for the movie, and instead, use different words, (not the same in the movie) and different actions. Just use pretty much the idea, and take if from there.
Reviewer: briana
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2005 - 03:05 pm
Title: Chapter 20
hey i luv this story it was great. I was going to do a story based on the movie also, but it sucked.
Reviewer: vamptasticA
Anonymous
Date: 12/01/2003 - 12:23 am
Title: Chapter 20
I've never seen the movie so the poem was great! *even if it wasn't yours* I loved dawn kicking angel and cordys ass. Too funny! I do like this story ....so much....more please?
Reviewer: vamptasticA
Anonymous
Date: 11/13/2003 - 10:09 pm
Title: Chapter 16
I love it!!!! Spike seems like such a sweet guy in this story I can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Lorna
Anonymous
Date: 11/02/2003 - 02:19 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Please update!! I need more!! I love it.
Reviewer: Lorna
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2003 - 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 13
Love it....keep going!
Reviewer: Lorna
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2003 - 04:01 am
Title: Chapter 6
Please continue....make the Spuffy relationship really good! But please don't do the paintball scene....do something else!! I never liked the paintball scene..okay, I am done babbling. Nice job...can't wait for updates!
Reviewer: Jenni
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/2003 - 05:41 pm
Title: Prologue
I liked the last chapter better than the others, mostly because it wasn't too much taken from the movie. But yeah, the last chapter was good. Try putting more of your ideas and less of what exactly happened in the movie.