Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/24/2014 - 05:27 am
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
Just reread.... still cute. The writing was a bit choppy in parts, sorta hard to follow at times, and also sometimes went too fast to be believable. But the feelings come through nicely.
Reviewer: Laura Signed
Date: 01/27/2013 - 05:24 am
Title: Chapter one
Dear Patri. I am writting from Ukraine to thank for interesting informaition. Yesterday I read you story "Shattered silence". H's very interesting! May I write your story on our Website http://spuffy.org./ . I pledge to indication you as author and address of your site. Thanks again for all. Sincerelty yours, Laura.(Laura1212@i.ua)
Author's Response: Hi Laura. :) I'm happy to hear you liked the story! Yes, you can post my story on your website. Thank you for asking! :)
Reviewer: Nikki
Anonymous
Date: 10/26/2012 - 06:42 am
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
LOVED it! Great story wonderful writing. Had me hooked till the last second. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review, Nikki!! :)
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 05/08/2012 - 01:40 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
Good story, thanks!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked!! :)
Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed
Date: 12/27/2010 - 01:23 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
I was so sure that I left a review for this one. I kinda read it a few times... but I did it on Bloodshedverse...so i guess the review is there ^^
Anyway, I like reading angsty fics, especially if they have a happy ending.. or at least a positive one. And yours was great to read..
Author's Response: Nothing makes me happier than someone loving my story enough to read it more than once. :) I do remember your account name so you probably have reviewed this. I'm SO happy you decided to do so again here! :) This was quite an angsty ride and I'm glad you gave it a chance. Thank you so much for the amazing review!!! :D
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/2010 - 03:45 am
Title: Chapter seven
Love the connection and the secret of using his blood in her drug. Though it may have helped with their connection, there are clearly some things fate cant fight. And to think, this is another one of Spike's plans not going to plan. :)
Author's Response: If it weren't for the Spike's presence in her blood, he would probably have killed her. It establishes the possibility of both of them seeing deep inside the other, see who they really are inside. As you said, even the fate can't fight the pull between them. ;) Hee... we all know that Spike's plan never go well... must be that he never follows through on them. lol Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D
Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 02/22/2010 - 02:49 am
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
i absolutely enjoyed reading this fic! great work.
Author's Response: Then I'm a happy camper! Thank you so much for the sweet review!!! :)
Reviewer: mycroftacd
Anonymous
Date: 02/21/2010 - 01:12 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
I didn't get a message on the next screne htat it posted my review. So just want to say again if it didn't that I loved your story.
Author's Response: I only got this one. :) I really appreciate you letting me know you loved my story, it really means a lot! I'm happy you enjoyed and thank you so much for the sweet review!!! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2010 - 12:42 am
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
to be honest this story brought up some stuff that id rather have not relived. nonetheless it felt good that buffy character here got the justice she deserved, against Lukas. some memories can never be forgotten but with the help of friends and family we can move forward with time. and of course the awesome death scene/fight was so cool!! I love how buffy lost it when she thought spike died and freaking killed everything around her. way cool scene that definitely put a smile on my face!! thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm really sorry to hear that. I hate it when bad things happen to good people. I hope you at least found this story believable since I really tried not to just brush Buffy's trauma off like it didn't exist. You can't just get over something like that, definitely can't ever forget it, but as you said with the help of friends and family you can learn to live with it. I'm happy you liked the fight scene... you wouldn't believe how difficult is to write a fight scene! :) She went pretty much berserk on their asses, which they so deserved! I took much pleasure in having her beat them to death. Thank you so much for the awesome review!!! *hugs*
Reviewer: spuffy chick
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2010 - 12:37 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
WOW!..what an AMAZING story! i enjoyed it SO much from beginning til end...i was so touched it made me cry :) ... you are a wonderful writer and i hope you'll keep writing.
Author's Response: *blushes* Now I just want to hug you until your ribs ache. :D I'm glad you decided to give it a chance and enjoyed it so much. It makes me feel all kinds of giddy to know that! Aww... sorry for making you cry. *hands you a fancy handkerchief* Thank you for being so awesome and for letting me know what you thought!!! *hugs* :)
Reviewer: total_geek Signed
Date: 12/16/2009 - 06:51 am
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
loved this read it one sitting... well it was that or revise... this was a brillant distraction ill look out for other fics done by you!
Author's Response: I love it that you loved it! :D I hear ya, revising is a bitch, so I'm glad I could help by distracting you. *winks* I'm writing the other fic as I write this review, so I hope you'll like it even more. Thank you for leaving me such a lovely review!!! :)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/04/2009 - 06:36 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
Loved this fic! Really sorry to see it end!!
Author's Response: Aww, you're so sweet I just want to hug you! :) I love it that you loved it, and I hope you'll like the next one as well. Thank you so much for your awesomeness, I've enjoyed reading all your reviews!!! :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/04/2009 - 12:16 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
*nods* I just went back to one confrontation and found 'Dave', couldn't remember the name I was looking for. Thanks for reminding me. :)
Sad that this is already the end. I hope I'll get a notification from EF wen you have a new story.
Oh my! I feared the worst - that (the begin of the chapter) would make a terrible cliffhanger. When Lukas staked Spike I'd thought it was over.
Mean, the bullets.
I'm relieved to see that table did turn again.
Things got well again for Buffy, even going back to school ( = almost normal).
Enjoyed the read a lot; I'll miss it.
Author's Response: :) That happens to me all the time! Looks like we've got that in common! :D
It's a strange feeling to be finishing this, though I'm glad I did... I'd hate to leave it as a WIP! Every single review gave me the necessary motivation to keep writing... always looked forward to reading yours. :) There will be more stories, I found out that I love writing fics!
Sorry about that... had to plant at least a tiny seed of doubt. *apologetic smile* But see? It got all better in the end. No way I'd make Spike die... he's too gorgeous for that... covered him in sexy wounds instead, but no dusty Spike in my fics. :) As you said, almost normal... but never quite completely, because that's just not Buffy. Normal is overrated and boring!
I'll miss your reviews, they were all awesome!!! :) I hope you'll like my other fics as well. *hugs*
Reviewer: Vette
Anonymous
Date: 12/04/2009 - 02:39 am
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
Fitting end for Lucas and his lackies to die a cowards death at the hands of a enraged slayer. So glad that Buffy tore apart those who tormented her and Spike and that her future with Spike will be built on the strength she found to save them both. Thanks for a good read.
Author's Response: You always write such nice reviews! :) She did tear them apart... quite literally. They all deserved what was coming to them and who best to dish it out than Buffy? For once, she got to be the one doing the saving, instead of Spike. It was after all, the threat to his life that had set her off. Despite what has happened to her, now she has all the time in the world to try to regain all the strength Lukas had taken away from her. Plus, quality smoochies time with Spike doesn't hurt either. *winks* Thank you for all the awesome reviews you left me, Vette!!! :D *hugs*
Reviewer: Colleen
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/2009 - 11:50 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
It was awesome! Loved it!
Great voices for Spike and Buffy!
It was very emotional and hard to
Read certain parts, but the end
Was totally sweet!
Author's Response: I love it that you loved it, Colleen! :D Way to make me blush with those lovely compliments. It was difficult to write at times, but I tried not to make it too angsty. It's always good to sneak in some of that sweetness too. :) Thank you for being so awesome and leaving me such a nice review!!! :D
Reviewer: Brittany
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/2009 - 10:17 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
I love and hate this ending at the same time, love it because its sweet and hate it because it is an actual END and I don't want this to end.... can't you do one more chappie?? maybe one where she invites them over for a movie and they get to meet her older punk boyfriend??? and yes I am grasping at straws but anything to have this fic NOT end :)
Author's Response: *giggles* You're just too kind, Brittany. :D It's really a weird feeling to be ending it, so don't tempt with the 'one more chappie' business. lol It really means a lot to me that you liked it so much, and who knows... maybe you'll like the next one even more. *winks* Thank you for every awesome review you left me, I really appreciate it!!! :)
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/2009 - 07:34 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
Good story, enjoyed it and and glad you saw it through to the end. Just enough angst, but not too much.
Author's Response: What can I say? I'm a very determined person. :) I hate leaving things unfinished. I was trying to find the balance with the angst... didn't want to make you guys cry, or kill a character. I'm really glad you liked it, and thank you so much for leaving me a review, it means a lot!!! :)
Reviewer: ----
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/2009 - 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-seven
okay so i got hooked on your story a couple chapters ago. cant believe its over! not fair. loved your story! amazing and sweet. im glad that everything was okay for buffy after all the abuse she suffered. of course its never really over, but she has help to get through it. i could really feel her pain there at the end. she was definitely scary. and great insights about spike' character. he is full of restless energy isnt he lol and he really loved buffy. glad we got to see his kinder side without him becoming a total pussy. thank you and as always your greedy fans beg for more!
Author's Response: Your review really made me smile. Thank you for being so lovely! :) I can't believe it's over either... it's a really weird feeling. lol As you said, it will never be really over... it can't after one lives through something like that, but she is loved and that's what matters. She was scary, wasn't she? I guessed that's what Buffy would feel, thinking she lost someone that keeps her heart safe. It would be crushing for her to lose Spike. And I'm glad you likedthe way I wrote him... I wanted him to regain self respect, but without being blatantly evil, so i'm glad I've succeeded! :) Thank you so much for the awesome review!!! :D I've got some more ideas in mind, so we'll see. :)
Reviewer: mysticwhispers Signed
Date: 12/02/2009 - 12:59 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-six
Awww you can't leave it there! Just read this from the start. A fantastic story!!! Please hurry with the final chapter!
Author's Response: :P Don't worry, I just got the chapter back from my beta, then I'll send it to the other beta and then I'll post it... which will be some time this week. You're very resilient, reading it at once like that. :D Thank you so much for leaving me an awesome review, it made me smile!!! :D
Reviewer: Amaya
Anonymous
Date: 11/30/2009 - 05:44 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-six
Please keep writing and update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: Just one chapter to go. And I'll try to update asap, just becaue I love reviews! :D Thanks for your lovely feedback, Amaya!!! :)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/30/2009 - 05:23 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-six
Totally loved this! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: :DD You couldn't have said anything more lovely. Thank you for the review!!! :)
Reviewer: Brittany
Anonymous
Date: 11/30/2009 - 01:51 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-six
I could actually hear the "DUN DUN DUUUUUUN" in my head at the end of this chappie! lol
Author's Response: LMAO Your reviews always make me giggle. I'm glad you found it "DUN DUN DUUUUUUN" worthy. :D
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/30/2009 - 01:45 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-six
Awe, how kind of Spike LOL: Want you all healthy so I can shag you until you can't walk.
Darn... but she got hurt. Again, it was sweet that Spike carried Buffy.
But bad cliffhanger! Dave, huh? Bad news indeed.
Author's Response: *giggles* He's very kind... and 'diplomatic'!
Even Buffy's stubborness can't stand a chance against Spike's sweetness.
Dave is pretty much dead, so I think you meant Lukas. *winks* :D Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2009 - 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-five
It's good to see that Buffy is where she wants to be. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Home is where your heart is, right? :) She and Spike already built their own home and if she went back to LA to live with her parents, it would be going backward and trying to live the life that had already passed her by. I'm writing more as I write this review, so hopefully I'll be able to update soon. :) Thanks for the lovely review!!! :D
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/24/2009 - 05:11 pm
Title: Chapter twenty-five
Awe, pouty Spike :)
Enjoyed the spuffyness, it's good to see them so happy after all what Buffy went through. Not so good to hear that the story is coming to an end now.
Author's Response: LOL I love pouty Spike! Just makes you want to ruffle his hair or something. *winks*
More happy moments to come in the next chapter, and also drama hopefully. Makes me all kinds of sad to be finishing it, but I do have a new idea in my head. Thanks for the lovely review, I really appreciate it!!! :D
