Reviewer: HostilePoet_17 Signed
Date: 04/03/2012 - 02:04 pm
Title: Chapter Three
That was wonderful! Thank you so much for posting it :]
Reviewer: T
Anonymous
Date: 12/22/2011 - 09:16 pm
Title: Chapter Three
So good :) Really enjoyed your writing and a new fresh plot which had me gripped. Excellent characterisations too :)
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2011 - 04:05 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Wow that was some delusion.
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2011 - 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Really enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2011 - 09:49 am
Title: Chapter Two
Another amazing chapter! Spike getting Dawn pregnant was unexpected but it works. Poor Will, so alone. No wonder why he clings to someone that only exists in his mind...or does she? Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2011 - 09:41 am
Title: Chapter One
Amazing chapter! I love how everything is interwoven yet disjointed at the same time. Off to the next chapter!
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/2011 - 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Holy mother of crap. now that is what I call one heck of a twist with Dawn.
Reviewer: SeaPea
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/2011 - 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter One
Ooh, a little "Normal Again" action but opposite. Very intriguing.
Reviewer: CJ
Anonymous
Date: 12/07/2011 - 04:37 pm
Title: Chapter One
Excited to read more
Reviewer: Puddinhead
Anonymous
Date: 12/07/2011 - 02:48 pm
Title: Chapter One
Oh this is wonderful! Thanks so much for posting it. You do such a fantastic job describing what his dream state is like. Just the right balance of confusion and lucidity. You've set things up so nicely. I've no idea where you're going to go with this, but I'm definitely along for the ride!
Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed
Date: 12/07/2011 - 01:31 pm
Title: Chapter One
This is story has me curious. Can't wait to see what you'll do with it.
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 12/07/2011 - 01:13 pm
Title: Chapter One
Twist, which one is real.